The hurt in Suzie's eyes
That inner pain19 total reviews
Comment from l.raven
HI Waves, Amen my friend...it is what God is asking of us...to show love to others...help those who need it...so the Suzies don't have to surer inside...very well written my sweet friend...with a wonderful message...love Linda xxoo
reply by the author on 25-Oct-2017
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HI Waves, Amen my friend...it is what God is asking of us...to show love to others...help those who need it...so the Suzies don't have to surer inside...very well written my sweet friend...with a wonderful message...love Linda xxoo
Comment Written 25-Oct-2017
reply by the author on 25-Oct-2017
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Thankyou Linda I am glad you concur. Always appreciate your reviews
dip
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always appreciate you...your so welcome...love xxoo
Comment from Asem.inspirations
Good morning again, DIP: You are really touching on all of the important subject for me today. As I click on your poetry, they are reminders for me today because my daughter is a Suzie, lately. I can see there is so much missing in her smile, whenever she does smile. Her smiles are so rare lately and I don't know what to do to help her. Today I will start to spend some much needed time with her. I just cannot lose her to depression. I feel hopeless but I will look to my Great God. She has abandoned him too but I can't stop trying to reach her heart. Thank you, DIP. This poem was like the slap of realization for me. Have a marvelous day.
reply by the author on 24-Oct-2017
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Good morning again, DIP: You are really touching on all of the important subject for me today. As I click on your poetry, they are reminders for me today because my daughter is a Suzie, lately. I can see there is so much missing in her smile, whenever she does smile. Her smiles are so rare lately and I don't know what to do to help her. Today I will start to spend some much needed time with her. I just cannot lose her to depression. I feel hopeless but I will look to my Great God. She has abandoned him too but I can't stop trying to reach her heart. Thank you, DIP. This poem was like the slap of realization for me. Have a marvelous day.
Comment Written 24-Oct-2017
reply by the author on 24-Oct-2017
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Thankyou so much Tier I am glad it struck a chord with you I had no idea your daughter is a Suzie. I picked that name as a generalization it could have been any name. hoe coincidental is that. I hope it has helped you connect with her.
Thanks for the wonderful 6
xdip
Comment from Teri7
Dip, This is a very well written and compassionate poem you have penned about all the Suzie's in the world. I remember feeling that way when my sister died. I had no hope and was so sad for so long. Finally I started to smile again and my aunt was so happy. She was sad that I felt lost and lonely all the time. It does help to have a kind word or someone to care. Great wording and great job my friend. Blessings, Teri
reply by the author on 23-Oct-2017
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Dip, This is a very well written and compassionate poem you have penned about all the Suzie's in the world. I remember feeling that way when my sister died. I had no hope and was so sad for so long. Finally I started to smile again and my aunt was so happy. She was sad that I felt lost and lonely all the time. It does help to have a kind word or someone to care. Great wording and great job my friend. Blessings, Teri
Comment Written 23-Oct-2017
reply by the author on 23-Oct-2017
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thankyou so much Teri as always
dip
Comment from sandy montgomery
This is an awesome message. I deal with a sister who has mental illness and I myself suffer from seasonal affective disorder. Sometimes having someone to talk to makes all the difference. Thank you for sharing your work.
reply by the author on 23-Oct-2017
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This is an awesome message. I deal with a sister who has mental illness and I myself suffer from seasonal affective disorder. Sometimes having someone to talk to makes all the difference. Thank you for sharing your work.
Comment Written 23-Oct-2017
reply by the author on 23-Oct-2017
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Thankyou Sandy I am so glad you could relate to it
dip
Comment from For better for verse
You are quite correct of course, there are a great many "suzies" out there, and you make a very valid point that we should all try and be there for them.
Great poem with a strong message.
reply by the author on 23-Oct-2017
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You are quite correct of course, there are a great many "suzies" out there, and you make a very valid point that we should all try and be there for them.
Great poem with a strong message.
Comment Written 23-Oct-2017
reply by the author on 23-Oct-2017
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Thankyou so much for better, I am glad you agree
dip
Comment from patcelaw
Dip, this is a powerfully written poem of how we should try to hep others who are suffering mental anguish and lose hope. I suffer from depression at times and many folks do not understand. Thanks for sharing. Patricia
reply by the author on 23-Oct-2017
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Dip, this is a powerfully written poem of how we should try to hep others who are suffering mental anguish and lose hope. I suffer from depression at times and many folks do not understand. Thanks for sharing. Patricia
Comment Written 23-Oct-2017
reply by the author on 23-Oct-2017
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Firstly Pat thanks for the wonderful 6 much appreciated I am glad that you could relate
dip
Comment from kahpot
Well you well and truly got me with this one, written with great emotion and for the pain of someone else you and ( Suzie) should be proud I can only comment on what I read and like ( not much of a critic, I don't fully understand all about poetry or writing) but I know what I like and this is it very well done****kahpot
reply by the author on 23-Oct-2017
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Well you well and truly got me with this one, written with great emotion and for the pain of someone else you and ( Suzie) should be proud I can only comment on what I read and like ( not much of a critic, I don't fully understand all about poetry or writing) but I know what I like and this is it very well done****kahpot
Comment Written 23-Oct-2017
reply by the author on 23-Oct-2017
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When a piece grabs someone emotionally kahpot you know you have achieved your goal. Thankyou so much Kahpot you certainly have made my day. Iam so glad you liked it. Thankyou for the 6 much appreciated.
dip
Comment from Mustang Patty
Hi, dip;
Thank you for sharing this heartfelt poem about reaching out to someone in pain. The sufferers of mental illness and domestic violence and so many other things came into my mind. It is so important to be a 'monitor,' and help when you can and if you can.
It's nice to know you're there,
~patty~
reply by the author on 23-Oct-2017
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Hi, dip;
Thank you for sharing this heartfelt poem about reaching out to someone in pain. The sufferers of mental illness and domestic violence and so many other things came into my mind. It is so important to be a 'monitor,' and help when you can and if you can.
It's nice to know you're there,
~patty~
Comment Written 23-Oct-2017
reply by the author on 23-Oct-2017
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Thankyou Patty I am so glad you liked what I wrote and understand
dip
Comment from Dean Kuch
This is excellent, Mark.
It's well written, well rhymed, caring and compassionate.
I think all of us know someone just like the girl "Suzie" you portray so poignantly here in your heartwarming piece.
reply by the author on 23-Oct-2017
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This is excellent, Mark.
It's well written, well rhymed, caring and compassionate.
I think all of us know someone just like the girl "Suzie" you portray so poignantly here in your heartwarming piece.
Comment Written 23-Oct-2017
reply by the author on 23-Oct-2017
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Dean that is such a wonderful compliment you always make me feel good about my poetry and I am forever grateful.
as always Dip
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You're more than welcome. :)
Comment from TAB_that's me
This was kind of you Dip to tell the story of 'Suzie' and yes it could be so many of us. I feel this poem deeply in me.
teresa
reply by the author on 23-Oct-2017
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This was kind of you Dip to tell the story of 'Suzie' and yes it could be so many of us. I feel this poem deeply in me.
teresa
Comment Written 23-Oct-2017
reply by the author on 23-Oct-2017
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I am so glad you felt it teresa If it struck a chord you have made my day
dip
