There is no U.S.A. in O.N.E.
Born he was but not for us48 total reviews
Comment from closetpoetjester
Well this brings home a solitary message of the power of one here and how dangerous that mindset is in the hands of a loose cannon, albeit a very self centred one.
Great job
Cheers P
reply by the author on 26-Oct-2017
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Well this brings home a solitary message of the power of one here and how dangerous that mindset is in the hands of a loose cannon, albeit a very self centred one.
Great job
Cheers P
Comment Written 25-Oct-2017
reply by the author on 26-Oct-2017
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Thank you very much****kahpot
Comment from teols2016
You say so much more than just six words, but the actual count here is correct. True words echo here. Well done and best of luck.
reply by the author on 26-Oct-2017
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You say so much more than just six words, but the actual count here is correct. True words echo here. Well done and best of luck.
Comment Written 25-Oct-2017
reply by the author on 26-Oct-2017
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Thank you very much****kahpot
Comment from sunnilicious
United States... the country is so big. It must be organized by federal and state. I think it works together though. There is unity in beliefs and laws. Good short poem.
reply by the author on 26-Oct-2017
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United States... the country is so big. It must be organized by federal and state. I think it works together though. There is unity in beliefs and laws. Good short poem.
Comment Written 25-Oct-2017
reply by the author on 26-Oct-2017
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Thank you very much****kahpot
Comment from country ranch writer
What was one thinking to let him into office. He still has a lot to prove to everyone that he has a clue what the hell he is doing. What were they thinking.
reply by the author on 26-Oct-2017
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What was one thinking to let him into office. He still has a lot to prove to everyone that he has a clue what the hell he is doing. What were they thinking.
Comment Written 25-Oct-2017
reply by the author on 26-Oct-2017
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Thank you very much****kahpot
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Comment from Brigitte Elko
This poem says so much more than what you penned. Simple but the message could have been a story. Six words, carefully chosen, expressed the feelings of
millions. Great job on this! Thanks for sharing.
Fan Friend,
brigitte
reply by the author on 26-Oct-2017
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This poem says so much more than what you penned. Simple but the message could have been a story. Six words, carefully chosen, expressed the feelings of
millions. Great job on this! Thanks for sharing.
Fan Friend,
brigitte
Comment Written 25-Oct-2017
reply by the author on 26-Oct-2017
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Thank you very much****kahpot
Comment from Meia (MESAYERS)
I am a trump hater. Notice I did not capitalise his name. Even his name is stupid. But he has crawled into the minds of the american world and I fear for the future. Great poem kindest regards Meia x
reply by the author on 26-Oct-2017
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I am a trump hater. Notice I did not capitalise his name. Even his name is stupid. But he has crawled into the minds of the american world and I fear for the future. Great poem kindest regards Meia x
Comment Written 25-Oct-2017
reply by the author on 26-Oct-2017
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Thank you very much****kahpot
Comment from TAB_that's me
You indeed describe Donald well (I won't call him president - he doesn't deserve that title or any other respectable title). Good six word poem - good luck in the contest.
teresa
reply by the author on 26-Oct-2017
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You indeed describe Donald well (I won't call him president - he doesn't deserve that title or any other respectable title). Good six word poem - good luck in the contest.
teresa
Comment Written 25-Oct-2017
reply by the author on 26-Oct-2017
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Thank you very much****kahpot
Comment from B.B. Rose
Very appropriate and true. It's hard to write a review of six words, but I think you did well and gave readers a timely thought. Good luck. Best regards, B. B. Rose
reply by the author on 26-Oct-2017
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Very appropriate and true. It's hard to write a review of six words, but I think you did well and gave readers a timely thought. Good luck. Best regards, B. B. Rose
Comment Written 25-Oct-2017
reply by the author on 26-Oct-2017
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Thank you very much****kahpot
Comment from Mustang Patty
Hi there;
Thank you for sharing your entry in the Six-word poetry contest. If I'm understanding correctly, you are saying Mr. Trump was only born to serve himself?
Makes a good point,
~patty~
reply by the author on 26-Oct-2017
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Hi there;
Thank you for sharing your entry in the Six-word poetry contest. If I'm understanding correctly, you are saying Mr. Trump was only born to serve himself?
Makes a good point,
~patty~
Comment Written 25-Oct-2017
reply by the author on 26-Oct-2017
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Thank you very much and yes that is what it looks like to me****kahpot
Comment from RGstar
Its hard to comment on these, for I don't get involved with political or religious affairs in the way of arguments or choice, but the author makes his point which is, in many ways, open to interpretation, so no malice given or attempted to, even if strong the point.
Have a great day author.
RGstar
reply by the author on 26-Oct-2017
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Its hard to comment on these, for I don't get involved with political or religious affairs in the way of arguments or choice, but the author makes his point which is, in many ways, open to interpretation, so no malice given or attempted to, even if strong the point.
Have a great day author.
RGstar
Comment Written 25-Oct-2017
reply by the author on 26-Oct-2017
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Thank you very much****kahpot
