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Born he was but not for us48 total reviews
Comment from gramalot8
Kahpot, regardless of how we voted, this is the picture that is being painted by our current President. I think he is very one sided in many ways... regarding himself and some of ideas in other matters. Thanks for sharing this and good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 27-Oct-2017
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Kahpot, regardless of how we voted, this is the picture that is being painted by our current President. I think he is very one sided in many ways... regarding himself and some of ideas in other matters. Thanks for sharing this and good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 26-Oct-2017
reply by the author on 27-Oct-2017
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Thank you very much****kahpot
Comment from mermaids
Excellent use of words that well describes our current president. Unfortunately your words reflect the truth, he is for himself. Excellent two lines that say much and I wish you well in the contest.
reply by the author on 27-Oct-2017
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Excellent use of words that well describes our current president. Unfortunately your words reflect the truth, he is for himself. Excellent two lines that say much and I wish you well in the contest.
Comment Written 26-Oct-2017
reply by the author on 27-Oct-2017
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Thank you very much****kahpot
Comment from rosehill (Wendy)
Regardless of how I feel about your statement, the poem's six words do fit the contest requirement. I see more than one meaning in the six words, however the title tilts the reading in one direction. In fact, the title and description give all the information needed. While it does fit the prompt's parameters, reading the poem seems superfluous by the time you get there. - Wendy
reply by the author on 27-Oct-2017
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Regardless of how I feel about your statement, the poem's six words do fit the contest requirement. I see more than one meaning in the six words, however the title tilts the reading in one direction. In fact, the title and description give all the information needed. While it does fit the prompt's parameters, reading the poem seems superfluous by the time you get there. - Wendy
Comment Written 26-Oct-2017
reply by the author on 27-Oct-2017
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Thank you very much, a few words in there I don't understand but obviously, You are not a Trump fan, many thanks for an honest and explanatory review****kahpot
Comment from smileycloud
very short and precise poetry indeed
you have certainly met the prompt requirements
The pictured image appears to indicate that it is a poem of humour because of the humourous style of the pic
the verse/words appear much more sombre
if one person stands up for themselves selfishly then no one can ever feel benefit from their purposes
have a smiley day
reply by the author on 27-Oct-2017
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very short and precise poetry indeed
you have certainly met the prompt requirements
The pictured image appears to indicate that it is a poem of humour because of the humourous style of the pic
the verse/words appear much more sombre
if one person stands up for themselves selfishly then no one can ever feel benefit from their purposes
have a smiley day
Comment Written 26-Oct-2017
reply by the author on 27-Oct-2017
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Thank you very much, I found it hard to find a real serious pic****kahpot
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Comment from Heather Knight
I wish you luck in the contest for three reasons:
I like what you've done with just six words (it's no easy feat).
I totally agree with you.
I like the presentation and the clever title.
Thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 27-Oct-2017
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I wish you luck in the contest for three reasons:
I like what you've done with just six words (it's no easy feat).
I totally agree with you.
I like the presentation and the clever title.
Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 26-Oct-2017
reply by the author on 27-Oct-2017
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Thank you very much****kahpot
Comment from Sanku
A nation elects him and then throws dirt at him !
but then he deserves it,does't he
busy building walls and stopping subsidies..
How did he ever win, is a matter of great amazement.
reply by the author on 27-Oct-2017
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A nation elects him and then throws dirt at him !
but then he deserves it,does't he
busy building walls and stopping subsidies..
How did he ever win, is a matter of great amazement.
Comment Written 26-Oct-2017
reply by the author on 27-Oct-2017
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Thank you and yes I agree****kahpot
Comment from Walu Feral
G'day mate.
You are good at these little pieces. I'm the worst at them.
This bloke deserves every bit of dirt that's slung at the bugger, me thinks.
I'm an Aussie living in the Philippines and it's getting a bit scary here on occasions with him and some of the other jerks in power. I can't comment on the dude here or I might become a stat lol.
Great job.
Cheers Fez
reply by the author on 27-Oct-2017
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G'day mate.
You are good at these little pieces. I'm the worst at them.
This bloke deserves every bit of dirt that's slung at the bugger, me thinks.
I'm an Aussie living in the Philippines and it's getting a bit scary here on occasions with him and some of the other jerks in power. I can't comment on the dude here or I might become a stat lol.
Great job.
Cheers Fez
Comment Written 26-Oct-2017
reply by the author on 27-Oct-2017
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Thank you fellow Aussie for this agreeable comment and I wish you luck****kahpot
Comment from GWinterwin
Good picture of our president. I am not sure what the words mean. I personally think the president is disliked by so many because he has the backbone to do what needs to be done and they done like it. Our country is in the worst shape its ever been in, and much of it is because of the antics of our last president, and some bad judgement from the others before him. People want to blame someone for all their troubles and he seems to be the easiest one. I am seventy three years old and he is the best since Reagan.
reply by the author on 26-Oct-2017
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Good picture of our president. I am not sure what the words mean. I personally think the president is disliked by so many because he has the backbone to do what needs to be done and they done like it. Our country is in the worst shape its ever been in, and much of it is because of the antics of our last president, and some bad judgement from the others before him. People want to blame someone for all their troubles and he seems to be the easiest one. I am seventy three years old and he is the best since Reagan.
Comment Written 26-Oct-2017
reply by the author on 26-Oct-2017
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Thank you very much****kahpot
Comment from ronnie k
LOL, what an excellent write, the subject fits well the picture but can be placed on the leaders as a whole, thank you I had fun with this reading.
reply by the author on 26-Oct-2017
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LOL, what an excellent write, the subject fits well the picture but can be placed on the leaders as a whole, thank you I had fun with this reading.
Comment Written 25-Oct-2017
reply by the author on 26-Oct-2017
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Thank you very much****kahpot
Comment from Sharon Haiste
You say a lot in just six words, it's like saying it without saying it.
We all know what you mean.
Well done.
Good luck on the contest.
reply by the author on 26-Oct-2017
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You say a lot in just six words, it's like saying it without saying it.
We all know what you mean.
Well done.
Good luck on the contest.
Comment Written 25-Oct-2017
reply by the author on 26-Oct-2017
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Thank you very much****kahpot
