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A frog done wrong42 total reviews
Comment from Dawn Munro
Aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaahahahaha! Now THAT is imagery evoked by a poem.
O' what a shame
that porker came,
though t'was a game
that led to fame... *grin*
Best of luck.
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Aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaahahahaha! Now THAT is imagery evoked by a poem.
O' what a shame
that porker came,
though t'was a game
that led to fame... *grin*
Best of luck.
Comment Written 21-Oct-2017
Comment from nartoonla
What a great cheerful little poem. I loved it! Prrrrrrrrrrrrrrfect. Oh man let me say that all over again as Fanstory wants me to add... But with a six star what do they want... I love it you too and if others do not well that is too bad. Regards nartoon
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What a great cheerful little poem. I loved it! Prrrrrrrrrrrrrrfect. Oh man let me say that all over again as Fanstory wants me to add... But with a six star what do they want... I love it you too and if others do not well that is too bad. Regards nartoon
Comment Written 21-Oct-2017
Comment from Writeling
A very amusing poem, which appreciates the way you carry the rhyming pattern forward to the end. Your choice of image illustrates things well.
with best wishes, Writeling
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A very amusing poem, which appreciates the way you carry the rhyming pattern forward to the end. Your choice of image illustrates things well.
with best wishes, Writeling
Comment Written 21-Oct-2017
Comment from rama devi
This is fun but tries too hard, I think. The rhymes seemed forced in that the story seemed chosen to make the rhyme and not the other way around. Still, it is imaginative! And I love the artwork choice too! Good humorous overtone. It works fine with no punctuation, though i would recommend a comma after OH.
Good luck!
Warmly, rd
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This is fun but tries too hard, I think. The rhymes seemed forced in that the story seemed chosen to make the rhyme and not the other way around. Still, it is imaginative! And I love the artwork choice too! Good humorous overtone. It works fine with no punctuation, though i would recommend a comma after OH.
Good luck!
Warmly, rd
Comment Written 21-Oct-2017
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written monorhyme poem and great fun with the frog and the dog. Both characters has a great role to play in making the poem rhyme perfectly in monorhyme.
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A very well-written monorhyme poem and great fun with the frog and the dog. Both characters has a great role to play in making the poem rhyme perfectly in monorhyme.
Comment Written 21-Oct-2017
Comment from Dean Kuch
Knee deep in grog while in a bog
one mustn't slog like a sheep dog
through murky fog to reach a log
that holds a frog (perhaps a hog).
Now I'll end this dialogue
into the night, away I'll jog.
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Knee deep in grog while in a bog
one mustn't slog like a sheep dog
through murky fog to reach a log
that holds a frog (perhaps a hog).
Now I'll end this dialogue
into the night, away I'll jog.
Comment Written 21-Oct-2017
Comment from dejohnsrld (Debbie)
I think this is cute and definitely rhymes. I would suggest adding punctuation so it has a better flow. It seems a bit choppy to me. Best wishes in the contest, my friend~Debbie
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I think this is cute and definitely rhymes. I would suggest adding punctuation so it has a better flow. It seems a bit choppy to me. Best wishes in the contest, my friend~Debbie
Comment Written 21-Oct-2017
Comment from rjuselius
haha. lol. this is an entertaining piece of poetry dear anonymous! i think you have found a new approach to the contest and i just love humor.
thank you for sharing!
good luck!
blessings and a big squeeze!
rebekka x
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haha. lol. this is an entertaining piece of poetry dear anonymous! i think you have found a new approach to the contest and i just love humor.
thank you for sharing!
good luck!
blessings and a big squeeze!
rebekka x
Comment Written 21-Oct-2017
Comment from closetpoetjester
A hard slog through the dirty bog
It seems it was for Pastor's dog
But fighting with that filthy hog
Could not top drop of frog down log
A delightful exercise indeed in rhyme and I DO love a good monorhyme.
Sorry to see the pooch got bogged down punching on with the screecher and effectively jaw dropped the amphibian.
P
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A hard slog through the dirty bog
It seems it was for Pastor's dog
But fighting with that filthy hog
Could not top drop of frog down log
A delightful exercise indeed in rhyme and I DO love a good monorhyme.
Sorry to see the pooch got bogged down punching on with the screecher and effectively jaw dropped the amphibian.
P
Comment Written 21-Oct-2017
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
A clever write and a story was told in few words which was uplifting. I really enjoyed the play on words and read it twice! Best wishes, have a great day, love Dolly x
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A clever write and a story was told in few words which was uplifting. I really enjoyed the play on words and read it twice! Best wishes, have a great day, love Dolly x
Comment Written 21-Oct-2017
