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A frog done wrong42 total reviews
Comment from Ben Colder
Well you made it rhyme for sure. So the hog was in the bog and the log was home to the frog. LOL. Good one. You did well with this.
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Well you made it rhyme for sure. So the hog was in the bog and the log was home to the frog. LOL. Good one. You did well with this.
Comment Written 21-Oct-2017
Comment from Kerry Foley Robinson
This is such a cute little story you penned in your Monorhyme poem.
Nicely done. Good luck to you! ~Kerry
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This is such a cute little story you penned in your Monorhyme poem.
Nicely done. Good luck to you! ~Kerry
Comment Written 21-Oct-2017
Comment from kahpot
Excellent this form must have been fun but also needs the skill to end all lines in rhyme while still maintaining a poem with a story very well done and good luck in your competition****kahpot
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Excellent this form must have been fun but also needs the skill to end all lines in rhyme while still maintaining a poem with a story very well done and good luck in your competition****kahpot
Comment Written 21-Oct-2017
Comment from Thomas Bowling
This poem made me a little bit jumpy. I was so afraid for the frog that I almost croaked. I tried to scream, but I had a frog in my throat. I shivered like someone had put a frog down my back.
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This poem made me a little bit jumpy. I was so afraid for the frog that I almost croaked. I tried to scream, but I had a frog in my throat. I shivered like someone had put a frog down my back.
Comment Written 21-Oct-2017
Comment from nancyrabbrose
Yes, this was a fun poem to read. The mono rhyming certainly added to the fun of the poem, as well as the subject matter. Then, too, you chose a perfect illustration. Good luck in the contest.
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Yes, this was a fun poem to read. The mono rhyming certainly added to the fun of the poem, as well as the subject matter. Then, too, you chose a perfect illustration. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 21-Oct-2017
Comment from G.K.Phoenix
Hi there.
Nice poem, it rhymes and flows well and makes for a good chuckle. Nice picture too I think perhaps you could have made it a little longer, it reads easy so a reader would not mind being entertained a little extra.
Cheers.
:)
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Hi there.
Nice poem, it rhymes and flows well and makes for a good chuckle. Nice picture too I think perhaps you could have made it a little longer, it reads easy so a reader would not mind being entertained a little extra.
Cheers.
:)
Comment Written 21-Oct-2017
Comment from mermaids
This is a fun poem to pronounce out loud. You have a delicious use of words that captures humor in your poem. This frog has been through much, hopefully he can hop out of the log.
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This is a fun poem to pronounce out loud. You have a delicious use of words that captures humor in your poem. This frog has been through much, hopefully he can hop out of the log.
Comment Written 21-Oct-2017
Comment from RGstar
Short, but nicely funny. The sort of thing that kids would enjoy repeating, again and again.
Humorous and well thought through, as well the antagonists will appeal to the child.
Good luck with this.
My best wishes.
RGstar
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Short, but nicely funny. The sort of thing that kids would enjoy repeating, again and again.
Humorous and well thought through, as well the antagonists will appeal to the child.
Good luck with this.
My best wishes.
RGstar
Comment Written 21-Oct-2017
Comment from JennaG
Well done with your Monorhyme! I agree, it's really fun to write these. Yours came out nicely and even tells a story. And, what a great picture to go along with it! Good job! Best of luck to you in the contest! :)
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Well done with your Monorhyme! I agree, it's really fun to write these. Yours came out nicely and even tells a story. And, what a great picture to go along with it! Good job! Best of luck to you in the contest! :)
Comment Written 21-Oct-2017
Comment from robyn corum
Dear Mystery Writer,
This was a fun entry for the monorhyme contest. I can see kids really enjoying this and reading it over and over. The image that you chose to accompany the piece is ADORABLE!! Good luck!
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Dear Mystery Writer,
This was a fun entry for the monorhyme contest. I can see kids really enjoying this and reading it over and over. The image that you chose to accompany the piece is ADORABLE!! Good luck!
Comment Written 21-Oct-2017
