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A frog done wrong42 total reviews
Comment from Irish Rain
Ha ha...poor Pastors dog!! Very cute monorhyme, love the frog, and all the ensuing mess, ha ha. A wonderful entry, good luck, blessings...
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Ha ha...poor Pastors dog!! Very cute monorhyme, love the frog, and all the ensuing mess, ha ha. A wonderful entry, good luck, blessings...
Comment Written 23-Oct-2017
Comment from Angela VA
Hurray for the frog, if he was still alive that is! I wasn't sure if the frog was a pet or one that the pastor had caught (frog gigging, I think it's called). I'm hoping for the pet. Your poem was fun and enjoyable.
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Hurray for the frog, if he was still alive that is! I wasn't sure if the frog was a pet or one that the pastor had caught (frog gigging, I think it's called). I'm hoping for the pet. Your poem was fun and enjoyable.
Comment Written 23-Oct-2017
Comment from evesayshi
In my opinion, a charming and cleverly humorous write. Although I am unfamiliar with the form, I liked the poem and its rhyming construction, easy and fluid - best of luck in the contest...
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In my opinion, a charming and cleverly humorous write. Although I am unfamiliar with the form, I liked the poem and its rhyming construction, easy and fluid - best of luck in the contest...
Comment Written 23-Oct-2017
Comment from krys123
Cheers, LoannaLois;
-you have definitely done it as this is a perfect man around poem, according to the contest regulations.
-I really enjoyed the humor of it. Actually I can visualize this all happening with seems very funny.
-The picture is absolutely lovely and so supportive and relative to the conceptual theme of your poem and I just wonder how and where did you find it?
-Good luck in the contest and take care and have a good one.
Alex
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Cheers, LoannaLois;
-you have definitely done it as this is a perfect man around poem, according to the contest regulations.
-I really enjoyed the humor of it. Actually I can visualize this all happening with seems very funny.
-The picture is absolutely lovely and so supportive and relative to the conceptual theme of your poem and I just wonder how and where did you find it?
-Good luck in the contest and take care and have a good one.
Alex
Comment Written 23-Oct-2017
Comment from dragonpoet
This seems like a children's poem. Easy clear monorhyme give strong image of two animals fighting for a meal. It seems they both lost this one.
Good luck and keep writing
dragonpoet
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This seems like a children's poem. Easy clear monorhyme give strong image of two animals fighting for a meal. It seems they both lost this one.
Good luck and keep writing
dragonpoet
Comment Written 23-Oct-2017
Comment from rosehill (Wendy)
Cute poem to match the photo. I have always felt the monorhyme is the perfect vehicle for a saucy, silly poem. It is hard to get serious when you are rhyming each end word. My only suggestion would be to change "in his mouth" to match the photo:
On his head was Pastor's frog
Good job here and enjoyable piece to read. - Wendy
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Cute poem to match the photo. I have always felt the monorhyme is the perfect vehicle for a saucy, silly poem. It is hard to get serious when you are rhyming each end word. My only suggestion would be to change "in his mouth" to match the photo:
On his head was Pastor's frog
Good job here and enjoyable piece to read. - Wendy
Comment Written 23-Oct-2017
Comment from Thal1959
Nicely done about a charming event. But I am not sure of the use of "Pastor's." Is it merely a name, or are you referring to the "Pastor" of a church? If the latter, there doesn't seem to be any connection between that job and the characters. It is just my opinion, but it seems to create a bit of a confusion. But that is just my thought. Good luck.
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Nicely done about a charming event. But I am not sure of the use of "Pastor's." Is it merely a name, or are you referring to the "Pastor" of a church? If the latter, there doesn't seem to be any connection between that job and the characters. It is just my opinion, but it seems to create a bit of a confusion. But that is just my thought. Good luck.
Comment Written 23-Oct-2017
Comment from Bichon
Excellent job with this one! You have followed the writing prompt fantastically, and have made an enjoyable and amazing piece of poetry out of it.
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Excellent job with this one! You have followed the writing prompt fantastically, and have made an enjoyable and amazing piece of poetry out of it.
Comment Written 23-Oct-2017
Comment from patcelaw
Lois, this is a delightful mono-rhyme poem for the contest. I wish you the best in the contest. Have a wonderful week and keep writing, Patricia
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Lois, this is a delightful mono-rhyme poem for the contest. I wish you the best in the contest. Have a wonderful week and keep writing, Patricia
Comment Written 23-Oct-2017
Comment from Dorothy Farrell
Hi LoannaLois, this is well written, amusing and a good read. All written in good mono-rhyme as required and a good accompanying picture - I wish you well in the contest. Warm regards Dorothy x
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Hi LoannaLois, this is well written, amusing and a good read. All written in good mono-rhyme as required and a good accompanying picture - I wish you well in the contest. Warm regards Dorothy x
Comment Written 23-Oct-2017
