That stolen kiss
That lasting embrace18 total reviews
Comment from Barb Hensongispsaca
Wow another excellent ABAB with different rhyming styles. I always love a love piece, because at 68 I still hope to feel what you write on
reply by the author on 21-Oct-2017
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Wow another excellent ABAB with different rhyming styles. I always love a love piece, because at 68 I still hope to feel what you write on
Comment Written 21-Oct-2017
reply by the author on 21-Oct-2017
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Love is not governed by age Barb you can definitely still feel it.
dip
Comment from Pantygynt
What a great photo! It made me want to go for a drive and try my luck with the first scooter I pulled up alongside. Mind you I decided against it in the end because you can get arrested for that sort of thing these days over her.
The poem also is neat. You could print it over the picture, frame it and sell it in a souvenire shop.
reply by the author on 21-Oct-2017
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What a great photo! It made me want to go for a drive and try my luck with the first scooter I pulled up alongside. Mind you I decided against it in the end because you can get arrested for that sort of thing these days over her.
The poem also is neat. You could print it over the picture, frame it and sell it in a souvenire shop.
Comment Written 21-Oct-2017
reply by the author on 21-Oct-2017
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This is exactly how I did my first book Panty I overlayed the words of the poem over the picture
Thank you as always
dip
Comment from dragonpoet
I think we like poems on any topic that are written well. This is a poem about how memories can keep one longing for the return of a traveling loved one.
I like the internal rhyme mixed with the end rhyme that keeps the meter flowing as the love flows between these two.
Cute picture.
Keep writing
Joan
reply by the author on 21-Oct-2017
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I think we like poems on any topic that are written well. This is a poem about how memories can keep one longing for the return of a traveling loved one.
I like the internal rhyme mixed with the end rhyme that keeps the meter flowing as the love flows between these two.
Cute picture.
Keep writing
Joan
Comment Written 21-Oct-2017
reply by the author on 21-Oct-2017
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Thanks as always Joan your comments and review are always appreciated
dip
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As always, my pleasure, dip
Joan
Comment from Asem.inspirations
Good morning, DIP: I think that it is not just the love poems that we like but you always partner them up with the best pictures. The pictures capture the words just right. This photo is the cutest photo. I remember when I was that little - the stolen kiss was given by a boy in my class who had a crush on me. I was so flattered but I wanted to punch him in the nose. The boys back then used to pull on the long ponytails of the girls who they had a crush on. There was also the rough play. No thank you to those little crushes but then there were the sweet ones who knew how to be romantic. One used to walk me home from school every day, such a little gentleman.
Anyway, cute poem and photo. (smiling)
reply by the author on 21-Oct-2017
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Good morning, DIP: I think that it is not just the love poems that we like but you always partner them up with the best pictures. The pictures capture the words just right. This photo is the cutest photo. I remember when I was that little - the stolen kiss was given by a boy in my class who had a crush on me. I was so flattered but I wanted to punch him in the nose. The boys back then used to pull on the long ponytails of the girls who they had a crush on. There was also the rough play. No thank you to those little crushes but then there were the sweet ones who knew how to be romantic. One used to walk me home from school every day, such a little gentleman.
Anyway, cute poem and photo. (smiling)
Comment Written 21-Oct-2017
reply by the author on 21-Oct-2017
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Thanks for the insight I am glad you liked the poem
dip
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
This is a beautiful poem about stolen kisses which are a joy and your poem is a great tribute them, long may kisses be stolen! Best wishes and have a great day Dip, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 21-Oct-2017
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This is a beautiful poem about stolen kisses which are a joy and your poem is a great tribute them, long may kisses be stolen! Best wishes and have a great day Dip, love Dolly x
Comment Written 21-Oct-2017
reply by the author on 21-Oct-2017
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Thanks again Dolly much appreciated
dip
Comment from Sis Cat
This is a fine love poem, Dip. It reminds me of an elderly couple I saw today stealing kisses. Your capture the romance and furtiveness of such a gesture, using well phrased rhymes and lines.
Gets me through another day
Whenever you're not there
Even when the couple is not together, the memory of the stolen kiss enlivens and strengthens them, encouraging them for a future reunion.
Your beautiful smile is so worthwhile
It's all I need to see
The poem is simple in execution and refined in sentiment.
I found only one error: "always get's" should be "always gets."
Thank you for sharing another fine love poem.
reply by the author on 21-Oct-2017
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This is a fine love poem, Dip. It reminds me of an elderly couple I saw today stealing kisses. Your capture the romance and furtiveness of such a gesture, using well phrased rhymes and lines.
Gets me through another day
Whenever you're not there
Even when the couple is not together, the memory of the stolen kiss enlivens and strengthens them, encouraging them for a future reunion.
Your beautiful smile is so worthwhile
It's all I need to see
The poem is simple in execution and refined in sentiment.
I found only one error: "always get's" should be "always gets."
Thank you for sharing another fine love poem.
Comment Written 21-Oct-2017
reply by the author on 21-Oct-2017
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Thank you Andre your reviews are always appreciated
dip
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written free live.poem. When lovers are together they need some physical contact. Sometimes a stolen kiss will be remembered when they are apart for a while.
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reply by the author on 21-Oct-2017
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A very well-written free live.poem. When lovers are together they need some physical contact. Sometimes a stolen kiss will be remembered when they are apart for a while.
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Comment Written 21-Oct-2017
reply by the author on 21-Oct-2017
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Thanks as always Sandra.
dip
Comment from closetpoetjester
A thoughtfully constructed works Mark and I see you have a definite love of being smitten.
Not the worst way to be.
When my guy starts talking all lovey dovey I wonder what on earth he has done wrong.
(gets) not (get is) which is what you're referring to Mark
Good job.
P
Yep. Boring as fuck.
My review. Not your poem haha
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reply by the author on 21-Oct-2017
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A thoughtfully constructed works Mark and I see you have a definite love of being smitten.
Not the worst way to be.
When my guy starts talking all lovey dovey I wonder what on earth he has done wrong.
(gets) not (get is) which is what you're referring to Mark
Good job.
P
Yep. Boring as fuck.
My review. Not your poem haha
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Comment Written 21-Oct-2017
reply by the author on 21-Oct-2017
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Thankyou philippa for the lovely review
Mark
oh fk this This is boring, put shit on me for fk sake!
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No, I LIKE calling you Mark.
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Please spell my name correctly.
So I feel I actually have one.
That's two l's and a capital P. That's kinda important LOL
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fk off big ears that's insulting fkg mark is too formal lol
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How about...Mmmmmmmmmark
Oooh. Better.
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well SOR ry!! Phillllliper lol
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You need a smack
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sounds like you are having an orgasm but then again i have no idea what a female orgasm sounds like lol
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Well I'm NOT stooopid enuuuuhhh fffaahhhhaaa
to tell laaalahhhah you oooh ooh oahrrrr!
