Just a Bad Day
3-5-3 form67 total reviews
Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
LOL, that is sooooo funny, Linda! I'm just hoping it IS a joke, you never know these days!! I wouldn't mind that young boy's car, it's a lot better than mine, lol, I'll have to shrink to get into it though. Love it and your caption underneath. Brilliant!! Love of love, my beautiful friend! xx Sandra xx
reply by the author on 20-Oct-2017
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LOL, that is sooooo funny, Linda! I'm just hoping it IS a joke, you never know these days!! I wouldn't mind that young boy's car, it's a lot better than mine, lol, I'll have to shrink to get into it though. Love it and your caption underneath. Brilliant!! Love of love, my beautiful friend! xx Sandra xx
Comment Written 20-Oct-2017
reply by the author on 20-Oct-2017
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HI Sandra, LOL...my grandson had a Silverado truck in that size...and my son put flood lights on it...you could see him a mile down the road...LOL..I love the picture when I saw it...thank you my wonderful friend...for a wonderful review...made me laugh...love to soooooo much...Linda xxoo
now I have to get off this couch and do some housework...sigh...LOL...
Comment from DR DIP
haha I love this and it wouldn't surprise me if they actually gave him a ticket!
Great accompanying photo Linda. Look at the look on the kids face he all but gives the police the rude finger lol Thanks for sharing
dip
reply by the author on 20-Oct-2017
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haha I love this and it wouldn't surprise me if they actually gave him a ticket!
Great accompanying photo Linda. Look at the look on the kids face he all but gives the police the rude finger lol Thanks for sharing
dip
Comment Written 20-Oct-2017
reply by the author on 20-Oct-2017
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HI Waves, thinking ...maybe his father...LOL..if not...ouch...my grandson had a Silverado in that size...my husband and I gave it to him for Christmas...my son put flood lights on the hood...you could see it for miles...LOL...I love the picture...thank you for a great review my sweet friend...love Linda xxoo
Comment from Dorothy Farrell
Hello again Linda, this is such a cute 3/5/3, you should have put it in the upcoming contest. Great picture - I love the way the boy is casually leaning on his car - a familiar pose. He's been had for speeding LOL, a great piece. Well done to find such a picture. Warm regards Dorothy x
reply by the author on 23-Oct-2017
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Hello again Linda, this is such a cute 3/5/3, you should have put it in the upcoming contest. Great picture - I love the way the boy is casually leaning on his car - a familiar pose. He's been had for speeding LOL, a great piece. Well done to find such a picture. Warm regards Dorothy x
Comment Written 20-Oct-2017
reply by the author on 23-Oct-2017
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Hi Dorothy, LOL..sweet girl...I love this picture as well...I was thinking maybe the policeman is his father...and if not...he just leaned a good lesson...thank you for another great review...I'm so glad you like it...love Linda xxoo
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written humorous 3-5-3 poem. Never try to ride without a license the cops can smell you don't have one and they will pull you over. Although I drive without a valid license for more than a year before I realize it myself, luckily before the cops did.
reply by the author on 23-Oct-2017
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A very well-written humorous 3-5-3 poem. Never try to ride without a license the cops can smell you don't have one and they will pull you over. Although I drive without a valid license for more than a year before I realize it myself, luckily before the cops did.
Comment Written 20-Oct-2017
reply by the author on 23-Oct-2017
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HI Sandra, LOL...I did it for a couple mouths...went to Florida...and never know I was on an expired license...LOL...but they do stop you for the dummest reasons...once because I was almost over the yellow line...LOL..no...I never got a ticket..it would have been interesting what he would of said...driver almost went over yellow line...LOL...my son said he was looking for a reason to see if he smelled alcohol in the car...I don't drink...ever...thank you my sweet friend for a great review...so glad you like it...love Linda xxoo
Comment from marybell1
You have chosen lovely photo for your poem. Unfortunately you have not followed the rules for this contest. You have written a 3-5-3 poem and you have entered a 5-7-5. You may wish to review this,
All the best.
Marybell1.
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reply by the author on 20-Oct-2017
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You have chosen lovely photo for your poem. Unfortunately you have not followed the rules for this contest. You have written a 3-5-3 poem and you have entered a 5-7-5. You may wish to review this,
All the best.
Marybell1.
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Comment Written 20-Oct-2017
reply by the author on 20-Oct-2017
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Marybell, it's NOT in a contest sweet girl...it's just for fun...thank you...love xxoo
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and this is a 5-7-5...count them...think your confused...
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your right with the count...but it's not in a contest...i'll change the form...
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this is the poem YOU made the MISTAKE on...was NOT in a contest...and you three stared it because I didn't follow the rules of the contest that were never there...all I did was put the wrong syllable count up there...and it was corrected...and that didn't warrant three stars...
Comment from dejohnsrld (Debbie)
pull over
Sir, your license please
your speeding (you're)
I like the 's' alliteration in this cute and enjoyaable poem, my friend~Debbie
reply by the author on 20-Oct-2017
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pull over
Sir, your license please
your speeding (you're)
I like the 's' alliteration in this cute and enjoyaable poem, my friend~Debbie
Comment Written 20-Oct-2017
reply by the author on 20-Oct-2017
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Hi Debbie, already caught it...I just love this picture...my grandson had a car something like that when he was a little guy...thank you for a great review my sweet friend...love to ya ...Linda xxoo
Comment from Dean Kuch
Hahahaha... Yet another pre-teen fallen victim to the fun-squashing brutal tactics of his local yokel police force.
Boys just wanna have fun, ya know?
That last line should read: "you're speeding.", Linda, as in "you are speeding."
Cute poem...
~Dean
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reply by the author on 20-Oct-2017
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Hahahaha... Yet another pre-teen fallen victim to the fun-squashing brutal tactics of his local yokel police force.
Boys just wanna have fun, ya know?
That last line should read: "you're speeding.", Linda, as in "you are speeding."
Cute poem...
~Dean
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Comment Written 20-Oct-2017
reply by the author on 20-Oct-2017
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Hi dean, fixed...thank you for the help...gets me every time I post late...LOL...just having some fun...I loved the picture...LOL...thank you for a great review you...love Linda xxoo
