Just a Bad Day
3-5-3 form67 total reviews
Comment from R.A.Partin
This haiku sounds like the beginning of a bad day. How to make this day worse? The person who was pulled over forgot their license. A good way to sum up a really bad morning, afternoon, or any time of the day, really. Good job.
reply by the author on 20-Oct-2017
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This haiku sounds like the beginning of a bad day. How to make this day worse? The person who was pulled over forgot their license. A good way to sum up a really bad morning, afternoon, or any time of the day, really. Good job.
Comment Written 20-Oct-2017
reply by the author on 20-Oct-2017
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HI R.A, thank you for a great review...I am so glad you like it...love Linda xxoo
Comment from Cass Carlton
This is a story in a picture isn't it? I wonder what the police men were actually saying to the little boy. I think there may have been hidden grins and stifled laughter all the way. There is a person in the background who is taking a lot of interest in the proceedings. Possibly a grandparent? Lovely piece, full of ideas and imagery. (lovely houses aren't they?) cheers Cass
reply by the author on 20-Oct-2017
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This is a story in a picture isn't it? I wonder what the police men were actually saying to the little boy. I think there may have been hidden grins and stifled laughter all the way. There is a person in the background who is taking a lot of interest in the proceedings. Possibly a grandparent? Lovely piece, full of ideas and imagery. (lovely houses aren't they?) cheers Cass
Comment Written 20-Oct-2017
reply by the author on 20-Oct-2017
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HI Cass, you are sooooo sweet my friend...I think you are right...I thought maybe the father(the policeman)???...LOL...Cass thank you sooooooo very much for a wonderful review...and for all your lovely stars...you are a sweetheart...so good to see always...I love this picture...LOL...my grandson had a Silverado little truck like this...my son put flood lights on it...you could see it a mile away...LOL...thank you Cass...love you...Linda xxoo
Comment from GWinterwin
What a cute picture to illustrate the situation. This would probably have a lasting effect on this little guy, maybe more than anyone thinks. Good job with picture and words to bring out a good point.
reply by the author on 20-Oct-2017
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What a cute picture to illustrate the situation. This would probably have a lasting effect on this little guy, maybe more than anyone thinks. Good job with picture and words to bring out a good point.
Comment Written 20-Oct-2017
reply by the author on 20-Oct-2017
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HI George, I love the picture...my grandson had a Silverado truck this size...my son put these big flood lights on it...you could see it a mile away...LOL...thank you for a great review...love Linda xxoo
Comment from damommy
Hahahaha. How cute. It made me laugh. It's a fun 3-5-3.
It's nice that the policeman took the time to tease the youngster. 8-)
reply by the author on 20-Oct-2017
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Hahahaha. How cute. It made me laugh. It's a fun 3-5-3.
It's nice that the policeman took the time to tease the youngster. 8-)
Comment Written 20-Oct-2017
reply by the author on 20-Oct-2017
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HI Yvonne, may his father...LOL...I love the picture too...so glad it made you laugh...thank you for a great review my sweet friend...love Linda xxoo
Comment from Oatmeal
L.RAVEN,
Your arrangement looks very nice. Thoughts are expressed and described well.
Well chosen words are expressive. Chosen words are excellent. The theme is strong. Your feelings are expressed well. The flow is smooth.
There was no SPAG, no typos, no room for improvement.
I look forward to seeing you again.
Love you,
Oatmeal
reply by the author on 20-Oct-2017
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L.RAVEN,
Your arrangement looks very nice. Thoughts are expressed and described well.
Well chosen words are expressive. Chosen words are excellent. The theme is strong. Your feelings are expressed well. The flow is smooth.
There was no SPAG, no typos, no room for improvement.
I look forward to seeing you again.
Love you,
Oatmeal
Comment Written 20-Oct-2017
reply by the author on 20-Oct-2017
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HI Camille, thank you so much for a great review...so glad you like it...love Linda xxoo
Comment from jenintorre
This is a very cute little 3-5-3 poem. You used your eleven syllables very well. Great
Picture. I suspect that was chosen first. Best wishes. Have a nice evening.
reply by the author on 20-Oct-2017
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This is a very cute little 3-5-3 poem. You used your eleven syllables very well. Great
Picture. I suspect that was chosen first. Best wishes. Have a nice evening.
Comment Written 20-Oct-2017
reply by the author on 20-Oct-2017
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HI Jen, yes the picture came first...it made me laugh...I am so glad you like it...thank you for a great review...love Linda xxoo
Comment from nancy_e_davis
Ah Ha! The little guy needs a speeding ticket. It just might save his life. LOL Can you imagine what the little guy id thinking. I know the cops are thinking right. It is just the right thing to do, That and march him home to his mom who probably didn't know he was in the street. Adorable picture. Well done Linda. Nancy
reply by the author on 20-Oct-2017
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Ah Ha! The little guy needs a speeding ticket. It just might save his life. LOL Can you imagine what the little guy id thinking. I know the cops are thinking right. It is just the right thing to do, That and march him home to his mom who probably didn't know he was in the street. Adorable picture. Well done Linda. Nancy
Comment Written 20-Oct-2017
reply by the author on 20-Oct-2017
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Hi Nancy, so good to see you again sweet girl...I bet he will think twice before driving in the street again...LOL...kids...I just love the picture...thank you again for a wonderful review...made me smile...love Linda xxoo
Comment from Allyzeé
With very few words and a cute picture you made me smile. The convination of both, the poem and the picture are prefect. I needed this to start my day with a laugh. Very nice.
Best wishes
Allyzeé
reply by the author on 23-Oct-2017
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With very few words and a cute picture you made me smile. The convination of both, the poem and the picture are prefect. I needed this to start my day with a laugh. Very nice.
Best wishes
Allyzeé
Comment Written 20-Oct-2017
reply by the author on 23-Oct-2017
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Hi Allyze, I am so glad it made you laugh...the picture made me laugh when I saw it...LOL...thank you for a great review...I am so glad you like it...love Linda xxoo
Comment from TAB_that's me
lol. Some days are like that. Also some kid's toys can actually go pretty fast. lol. Fun little poem Linda:)
Teresa
reply by the author on 20-Oct-2017
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lol. Some days are like that. Also some kid's toys can actually go pretty fast. lol. Fun little poem Linda:)
Teresa
Comment Written 20-Oct-2017
reply by the author on 20-Oct-2017
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HI Teresa, yes some days are like these...LOL...my grandson had a Silverado truck ...the same size...and my son put flood lights on it...you could see miles down the road...thank you my sweet friend for a great review...love ya Linda xxoo
Comment from crzypnter
Hello dear Linda,
This is a great picture. Makes you wonder just what's going through that young lads head. Nicely done you. I needed that laugh. Have a wonderful weekend my friend. God bless
August
reply by the author on 20-Oct-2017
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Hello dear Linda,
This is a great picture. Makes you wonder just what's going through that young lads head. Nicely done you. I needed that laugh. Have a wonderful weekend my friend. God bless
August
Comment Written 20-Oct-2017
reply by the author on 20-Oct-2017
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Hi August, always good to see you my sweet friend...I love the picture...it's most likely his father...LOL...I hope...LOL...I am so glad it made you laugh...thank you for a wonderful review...and you have a wonderful weekend too...God Bless you as well...love Linda xxoo
