Comment from Mustang Patty

Excellent

Hi there;
I enjoyed this poem about love. Your words and rhythms are soothing and the lack of capitalization works well. I think you should of entered this in the Love Poem contest,

~patty~

 Comment Written 22-Oct-2017

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reply by the author on 29-Oct-2017

thank you for the time of day for your review,patty! "your so vein" means mood or humor.

your so vein
godlucifer

Comment from giraffmang

Good

when you say weigh do you actually mean weight?

I have noticed a lot of repetition in your work, not just in this piece but in all your pieces. It isn't really philopsophical it's just calling one thing another thing. it's really a comparison . There is no weight of insight really.

 Comment Written 22-Oct-2017

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reply by the author on 29-Oct-2017

thank you for the time of day for your review,giraffmang! yes i do mean the comparison of a weight. "your so vein" means mood or humor.

your so vein
godlucifer

Comment from oliver818

Excellent

Nice poem. I like the way it flows. Your choice of words is very interesting and I enjoyed reading it. Thanks for sharing this and have yourself a really great day

 Comment Written 21-Oct-2017

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reply by the author on 29-Oct-2017

thank you for the time of day for your review,oliver818! "your so vein" means mood or humor.

your so vein
godlucifer

Comment from G.K.Phoenix

Good

Hi there GodLucifer (I must say, love your profile name).

I have read your poem and must say it has gone over my head. I don't quite get it. That said, I admire its originality and the fact that it requires the reader to ponder on the text and decipher it.

Cheers.

 Comment Written 21-Oct-2017

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reply by the author on 29-Oct-2017

thank you for the time of day for your review,g.k. phoenix! "your so vein" means mood or humor.

your so vein
godlucifer