Blood Red Sky
A picture this Challenge 24/10/201716 total reviews
Comment from BeasPeas
Hi Christine. This was a fun-to-read story poem that held my interest all the way through--the dream, the trick-or-treaters, and locking the door after they left. Marilyn
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Hi Christine. This was a fun-to-read story poem that held my interest all the way through--the dream, the trick-or-treaters, and locking the door after they left. Marilyn
Comment Written 23-Oct-2017
reply by the author on 24-Oct-2017
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Hi Marilyn, Thanls so much for your review and it was fun to write I like these challenges they make me think. The door will be locked next week on Halloween. Ha Ha. This is not a tradition in Australia so we never celebrate it but is is becoming more popoular with the young kids so I may see a witch or two No Zombies though LOL Cheers and cant wait to read everyones poems Cheers Christinex
Comment from frierajac
You may want to punctuate stop me in my tracks with a '?' mark. It is uninteresting story of a Halloween night to complement the picture challenge Blessings. Hope you
have a good time.
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You may want to punctuate stop me in my tracks with a '?' mark. It is uninteresting story of a Halloween night to complement the picture challenge Blessings. Hope you
have a good time.
Comment Written 23-Oct-2017
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Hi frierajac. Thanks for your review but I am a little confused as to whether you actually liked it or not so ? can you expand on how it is uninteresting . It was fun to write but maybe not to everyones taste although you did give me a 5 Star rating and I apprecaire that very much Cheers Christine
Comment from Mustang Patty
Hi Christine;
Thank you for sharing your interpretation of the 'Picture This' challenge. I really enjoyed your take on the art, and could see the images your words created clearly.
~patty~
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Hi Christine;
Thank you for sharing your interpretation of the 'Picture This' challenge. I really enjoyed your take on the art, and could see the images your words created clearly.
~patty~
Comment Written 23-Oct-2017
reply by the author on 24-Oct-2017
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Ho Patty, Thanls sp much for your review and excelent rating I enjoyed this challenge and love to think up stories and pleased you enjoyed it Cheers for your support Christine
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written Halloween poem and an excellent interpretation of the picture this challenge. A time for the dead and witches to rule the night us better to stay safely home.
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A very well-written Halloween poem and an excellent interpretation of the picture this challenge. A time for the dead and witches to rule the night us better to stay safely home.
Comment Written 23-Oct-2017
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Hi Sandra, Thanks for your review and I am looking forward to reading everyones poems. I had fun with my story and enjoy these challenges. In Australia Halloween is not a tradition except with the young kids they have taken it on but as a kid I never did. But will be inside on the night LOL Cheers my friend Christine
Comment from royowen
The highlight for me, reading this deftly written and presented interpretation of the picture this prompt, was reading the word..."lollies", instead of the omnipresent "candy". I guess we don't celebrate Halloween as vociferously as our distant Northern neighbours, but this is a tasty morsel to read, an usually different style for you, but an excellent, vibrantly written and highly vivid imagery. An excellent post Christine, well done, blessings, Roy
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The highlight for me, reading this deftly written and presented interpretation of the picture this prompt, was reading the word..."lollies", instead of the omnipresent "candy". I guess we don't celebrate Halloween as vociferously as our distant Northern neighbours, but this is a tasty morsel to read, an usually different style for you, but an excellent, vibrantly written and highly vivid imagery. An excellent post Christine, well done, blessings, Roy
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Comment Written 23-Oct-2017
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Hi Roy, i love to have your reviews and encouraging comment and yes lollies not 'candy' that always remind me of fairy flosss LOL. We dont celebrate Halloween it is more an American Tradition as you know bit my grandies get into it now I love thes challenges they make me think need to keep the neurons working Ha Ha. Have a great day Cheers Christine PS lock the door Ha Ha
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Well done, I'll set the guard dogs.
Comment from lyenochka
Very suspenseful tale in verse! I like how you created a story and pulled back into reality giving the narrator a double take after the frightful dream. And then it ends with a lingering fear that remains just like after watching a frightening film.
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Very suspenseful tale in verse! I like how you created a story and pulled back into reality giving the narrator a double take after the frightful dream. And then it ends with a lingering fear that remains just like after watching a frightening film.
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Comment Written 23-Oct-2017
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Hi Lyenochka, Thanks for your review and I had fun writing this and as with most of my poems really have no idea how they will unfold until I start the first or second line or stanza. glad you enjoyed the unfolding story and I wil lock the door on the night of Halloween LOL Cheers Christine
