Poetry
Why we write.19 total reviews
Comment from Jacqueline M Franklin
Hi, Jenintorre
= You're very good at rhyming, with a good rhythm.
= Excellent tribute to what and who a writer is--becomes when they write.
= Good luck in the contest.
Cheers, J (*<*)
Have a good day/evening!
reply by the author on 21-Oct-2017
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Hi, Jenintorre
= You're very good at rhyming, with a good rhythm.
= Excellent tribute to what and who a writer is--becomes when they write.
= Good luck in the contest.
Cheers, J (*<*)
Have a good day/evening!
Comment Written 21-Oct-2017
reply by the author on 21-Oct-2017
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I really appreciate your comments, thank you.
Comment from JennaG
Oh wow! This is so beautifully written! You're so right, poems do have a way of writing themselves. Sometimes those words are just bouncing around in our heads dying to get out and when we release them they pour themselves onto the page. Poems do come from all those place ~ memories long forgotten, old heartbreak, old hurts, happy times, sad times, and everything in between. You've defined poetry and what leads us to write poetry so perfectly. This is an exceptional piece! Best of luck to you in the contest! :)
reply by the author on 20-Oct-2017
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Oh wow! This is so beautifully written! You're so right, poems do have a way of writing themselves. Sometimes those words are just bouncing around in our heads dying to get out and when we release them they pour themselves onto the page. Poems do come from all those place ~ memories long forgotten, old heartbreak, old hurts, happy times, sad times, and everything in between. You've defined poetry and what leads us to write poetry so perfectly. This is an exceptional piece! Best of luck to you in the contest! :)
Comment Written 20-Oct-2017
reply by the author on 20-Oct-2017
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Thank you so much for the six stars and wonderful review.thank you so much for your comments.
Comment from For better for verse
I have written poetry for as far back as I remember, and your poem is so very clever, it in just a few choice words it sums up what makes me write poetry. It's all there, hopes, distant dreams, long forgotten memories that spring to light etc etc.
Excellent and well worthy of its recognised status.
reply by the author on 20-Oct-2017
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I have written poetry for as far back as I remember, and your poem is so very clever, it in just a few choice words it sums up what makes me write poetry. It's all there, hopes, distant dreams, long forgotten memories that spring to light etc etc.
Excellent and well worthy of its recognised status.
Comment Written 20-Oct-2017
reply by the author on 20-Oct-2017
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Thank you so much. I am so glad you enjoyed it.
Comment from Joan E.
I admired your rhymed couplets and rhythmic lines as you described the essence of poetry. Your "masquerade" analogy is very effective. Well done and best wishes in the contest- Joan
reply by the author on 20-Oct-2017
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I admired your rhymed couplets and rhythmic lines as you described the essence of poetry. Your "masquerade" analogy is very effective. Well done and best wishes in the contest- Joan
Comment Written 20-Oct-2017
reply by the author on 20-Oct-2017
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Thank you.
Comment from Dean Kuch
Exceptionally well done, Jenintorre. The rhyming and overall message this poem conveys is superbly rendered.
It's oft been said that those who write often--and especially poets--wear their hearts on their sleeves. Having reiterated that, would what we write really be considered a masquerade or a sham? Or are we merely writing our version of the truth as we see it in a poetic format?
Things to ponder...
reply by the author on 20-Oct-2017
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Exceptionally well done, Jenintorre. The rhyming and overall message this poem conveys is superbly rendered.
It's oft been said that those who write often--and especially poets--wear their hearts on their sleeves. Having reiterated that, would what we write really be considered a masquerade or a sham? Or are we merely writing our version of the truth as we see it in a poetic format?
Things to ponder...
Comment Written 20-Oct-2017
reply by the author on 20-Oct-2017
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Not sure Dean. Good word though huh. Thanks for reading and reviewing.
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My pleasure, you're very welcome. :)
Comment from Sankey
Loved this new friend. I do so agree where Poetry has their roots for sure. Good meeting you today. Hope we can keep in touch. No spags and a good pic to go with it.
reply by the author on 20-Oct-2017
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Loved this new friend. I do so agree where Poetry has their roots for sure. Good meeting you today. Hope we can keep in touch. No spags and a good pic to go with it.
Comment Written 20-Oct-2017
reply by the author on 20-Oct-2017
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Thank you so much my friend.
Comment from marybell1
I enjoyed reading your poem "Poetry I think you have it in a nutshell. You rhymed it well with a beautiful flow and ideal photo.
All the best.
Marybell1.
reply by the author on 20-Oct-2017
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I enjoyed reading your poem "Poetry I think you have it in a nutshell. You rhymed it well with a beautiful flow and ideal photo.
All the best.
Marybell1.
Comment Written 19-Oct-2017
reply by the author on 20-Oct-2017
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Thank you so much for the super six. So glad you enjoyed it.
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Thank you so much for the super six. So glad you enjoyed it.
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I enjoy reading other poet's work and you are most welcome.
Marybell1.
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Comment from Barb Hensongispsaca
The last line gave me chills, it is perfect.
Excellent flow and rhyme and a complete reason we write. Very well done using the reasons
reply by the author on 20-Oct-2017
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The last line gave me chills, it is perfect.
Excellent flow and rhyme and a complete reason we write. Very well done using the reasons
Comment Written 19-Oct-2017
reply by the author on 20-Oct-2017
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So glad you enjoyed it Barb. Thank you my friend. Love Jen.
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So glad you enjoyed it Barb. Thank you my friend. Love Jen.
Comment from fastdigits
A wonderful dance of poetic words that tell the tale of the would-be poet and what his thoughts are as he sits all by himself and writes of all his joys, his sorrows, all straight from his heart.
Well done and good luck
reply by the author on 20-Oct-2017
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A wonderful dance of poetic words that tell the tale of the would-be poet and what his thoughts are as he sits all by himself and writes of all his joys, his sorrows, all straight from his heart.
Well done and good luck
Comment Written 19-Oct-2017
reply by the author on 20-Oct-2017
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Thank you so much for your comments
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Thank you so much for your comments
Comment from Lil' Mormon Boy
WOW!
You said it all in just a few short words. Rhythm just right and Rhyme was perfect and story was superb.
I hope to see more of you.
Keep up the good work.
Thanks
reply by the author on 20-Oct-2017
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WOW!
You said it all in just a few short words. Rhythm just right and Rhyme was perfect and story was superb.
I hope to see more of you.
Keep up the good work.
Thanks
Comment Written 19-Oct-2017
reply by the author on 20-Oct-2017
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So glad you enjoyed it. Thanks for your comments.
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So glad you enjoyed it. Thanks for your comments.
