Comment from Michael Ludwinder

Excellent

This is an emotional and touching poem. You catch the raw emotions in your poem and express them strongly. Very tough. I'm so sorry for what you have gone through.

 Comment Written 19-Oct-2017

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reply by the author on 20-Oct-2017

Thanks again Michael for your kind thoughts as removing now a little bit deeper into the Autumn season my poetry will start to shift you'll notice it in different use of different color of different amazement so follow and when you see the poems you realize what I'm talking about thank you very much dr. Ricky 1024

Comment from GracieAnn

Excellent

Ricky,

This is a riveting story with powerful dialogue that depicts the unspeakable loss of precious loved ones in an accident. The emotions of denial and then acceptance is illustrated well. :0 GracieAnn

 Comment Written 19-Oct-2017

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reply by the author on 19-Oct-2017

Review of the review coming through a cell phone run-on sentence is no punctuation thanks Miss Gracie I do believe this is only your second time you've reviewed me about 3 years ago see Lucas or ranked Western novel is on this site started reviewing my work he had been with them about 6 years now I'm most 10 he said you're taking over for what I was doing preaching the choir here at Fan story so welcome to my choir I hope you enjoy my peace is coming up in the near future from my grieving heart book My Gift of Life to rebook my shed another tear fairy tales and fables book which each and everyone will make you cry so watch out for a shed a tear I do about try to do two months sometimes it's only one sometimes I don't get a chance to do any dr. Ricky 1024 and thanks as always