Comment from jenintorre

Excellent

I enjoyed reading your poem about the birth of a child. I think there is no greater experience and you expressed it very well. Good luck in the competition.

 Comment Written 20-Oct-2017

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reply by the author on 21-Oct-2017

Thanks for your great review and comments. Gramalot8

Comment from R56Ma3

Excellent

So precious and makes me think back to the time when all 3 of my children were babies. Just holding a baby makes me feel warm. Very well done. R56ma3

 Comment Written 20-Oct-2017

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reply by the author on 20-Oct-2017

Thanks for your great comments and review. Gramalot8

Comment from nbonner

Exceptional

So sweet, it made me want to cry thinking of when my children were first born and I first saw they're tiny faces. There is nothing like the bond between mother and child. It is one of the strongest bonds that last forever. Nicely written. Thank you for sharing and best wishes in the contest, NB

 Comment Written 19-Oct-2017

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reply by the author on 19-Oct-2017

Wow.... thank you so much for the 6 stars and gracious comments. It's so appreciated. Gramalot8...Jerri

Comment from marybell1

Excellent

A really beautiful love poem "Baby Mine". You rhymed it well and you chose a beautiful picture. It is easy to write about something so beautiful.
All the best.
Marybell1.

 Comment Written 18-Oct-2017

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reply by the author on 18-Oct-2017

Thank you for your comments and review. Gramalot8

reply by marybell1 on 18-Oct-2017

You are most welcome.
Marybell1

Comment from Michael Ludwinder

Excellent

This is a wonderful poem. I really like you introduced this new baby. My favorite line is the one with rosebud lips. Strong description. But the entire poem screams of "welcome" and "I love you". Great job.

 Comment Written 17-Oct-2017

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reply by the author on 17-Oct-2017

Thank you for your review and comments, Michael. It's greatly appreciated. Gramalot8.... Jerri