Comment from damommy

Excellent

Well, that shot Veronica's solution to pieces. I hope the albino man is still there, or she'll have trouble getting everyone to change their minds about the affliction.


-What you thought was the Devil's spawn, [don't need the comma]



-skin, hair and eyes[] was too low.

 Comment Written 17-Oct-2017

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reply by the author on 18-Oct-2017

Hi Yvonne. Yes, it really has put the kybosh on things for Veronica, lol. Can she sort it?? Hmm, we will have to wait and see. Thank you so much for finding those nits, dear friend. I've made the corrections. Big hugs, Sandra xxxx

Comment from Mustang Patty

Excellent

Hi, Sandra;
Another exciting chapter, but with a big disappointment. I wonder where the Albino adult is, and whether or not the information they have is correct.

Oh well, I will wait for the next chapter,

~patty~

 Comment Written 17-Oct-2017

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reply by the author on 17-Oct-2017

Thank you, Patty. Yes, now Victoria must find out what has happened to the albino man. Trying times ahead. Big hugs my friend. xx Sandra x

Comment from Phyllis Stewart

Excellent

I don't think the guy at the church want their secret to be known, if it's a secret at this point. She'll find him, though.

I had a neighbor who was an albino. She had white hair and red eyes. Her father did, too. Strange woman. Not because of her pigmentation, but she was definitely insane. Should have been in an asylum. Oh, the detailed stories (colorful, impossible, lies) she told. Her husband said nothing, but just sat there drinking beer. He knew she was crazy, I'm sure. But she wasn't dangerous. :)

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 Comment Written 17-Oct-2017

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reply by the author on 17-Oct-2017

Yes, she will. Veronica is like me, (strange that! LOL) Thank you, my friend, for reading and reviewing. I must Google albinos again and see if there if a mental problem there as well. Food for thought! xx :) Sandra x