Comment from Sandra du Plessis

Excellent

Very well-written lyrics for a song to sing by men in a bar to the ladies that are willing to play along with the needs of Forest Frederick and have all the drinks they can drink.

 Comment Written 18-Oct-2017

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reply by the author on 26-Oct-2017

HAAAAAHAHAHA! Exactly. :)) Thanks so much.

Comment from Meia (MESAYERS)

Excellent

I loved this it was absolutely marvellous. A fun and very clever write and well decorated and presented, I think it is utterly splendid and well done to you! kindest regards and warm wishes Meia xx

 Comment Written 18-Oct-2017

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reply by the author on 26-Oct-2017

Thanks so much, Meia
I couldn't ask for kinder words or more encouragement. Win or lose I'll be smiling. :))

Comment from patcelaw

Excellent

Author, these are fun song lyrics and you have worded it well with the in' at the ending of words. May you stay sober and in control of you mind. Patricia

 Comment Written 18-Oct-2017

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reply by the author on 26-Oct-2017

HAAAAAHAHA! Thanks GOD this is a song and not a reflection of my life, YES? LOL I'm sober, my mind ... well, I'm not a 100 percent positive about that. :))

Comment from Mustang Patty

Excellent

Dear Anonymous Writer of Lyrics;
Thank you for sharing your piece about Frederick. It certainly sounds like it will take a great deal to turn him into a gentleman of the court.

I like the turn of phrases you used and enjoyed the piece very much.

I wish you luck in the contest,

~patty~

 Comment Written 18-Oct-2017

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reply by the author on 26-Oct-2017

Yep, he needs a LOT of culturin' for sure. But I guess she's got a lot of incentive it appears. LOL
Glad you enjoyed. Thanks for a super fun review. :))

Comment from Dorothy Farrell

Excellent

Hi - Lyrics make the Song - and you have certainly gone to town with this one. I like the way you write, 'unbunching panties, adjusting her knees,' - this made me laugh, and the words 'deviltry' must your invention LOL and it fits the poem perfectly - or should I say song? A real music hall ditty. Loved it. Good Luck - warm regards Dorothy

 Comment Written 18-Oct-2017

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reply by the author on 26-Oct-2017

Deviltry is some ancient version of devilry. Not sure where I got it, but I've always used it, like "amongst". :))
I'm thrilled you liked this. It was the best fun to write. LOL mike

Comment from Liberty Justice

Excellent

UH HUL I got some serious competition because this poem looks like a #1 winner that no one will beat. I am astonished mesmerized by this old English language of Princess Lady Hornett and her courtship with this man. Your choruses, bridges and verses add a professionalism to this song. Could even be a play. Please check my writings out today, also, and my 2 books. thanks lol liberty justice

 Comment Written 18-Oct-2017

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reply by the author on 26-Oct-2017

Thanks soooo much, Liberty. I'm delighted you enjoyed. mike

Comment from Michael Ludwinder

Excellent

I thought this was very creative. The song will be beautiful, I think, when recorded. The words are perfect and this flows easily as I read it. Very nicely done. A creative write.

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 Comment Written 18-Oct-2017

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reply by the author on 26-Oct-2017

Thanks, Michael. This was a blast to write to be honest. :)) mike