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Comment from
Cybertron1986
Witty, humorous, and elegantly presented. I enjoyed the flow and pace of the piece. I loved and enjoyed how you created a sense of urgency in the simplicity of a hic-cup, and, at the same time, infused the comedy. It all added up into a strong piece and a pleasant read. Well done!
Comment Written 16-Oct-2017
reply by the author on 16-Oct-2017
thank you very much.. I did a little research and in some cases of very prolonged hiccups, death has ensued. So, though on the whole hiccups are a common, non-serious occurrence, there are exceptions. I appreciate your very nice review.
Comment from
Alcreator Litt Dear
This speaks about hiccups and effect of the same in course of living, hiccup is irritating and unbearable sometime, excessive consuming wine may lead one to hiccup; it's deadly; I liked.
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Comment Written 15-Oct-2017
reply by the author on 16-Oct-2017
thanks so much. glad you liked!
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