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"The Gift of Life II"

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Comment from Liberty Justice
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FIVE STARS for you, dear poet. You are so right that parents need to check on their children to make sure they are in a program that will help them with their studies and to promote to the next grade each year. Your story is filled with strength, love and devotion to your children. lol liberty justice

 Comment Written 18-Oct-2017


reply by the author on 19-Oct-2017
    I hope all is well with you miss Liberty I'm at Liberty to the shed that I had to have two operations is summer part of my intestines had to be removed but I benefited quite thoroughly afterwards I lost I went in a 240-pound came out of 200 for so I lost 40 pounds I would not recommend a strangulated perforated infected hernia died on anyone dr. Ricky 1024 review coming through cell phone would run in senses and no I miss Mia the worst thing that anybody on this site can do is to rank Somebody by their Style I've always ignored grammar errors or ignored the Poetry if it wasn't quite pleasing and gave it at least five stores the only time I ever give less is to try to help and educate the poet so they can better themselves so with that I again reiterate that we all have each and every person has their own particular writing style I use quotation marks to emphasize things that are important to me that I think would be important to the reader if it's a powerful piece you'll see a lot of it if it isn't he won't see much don't mean to ignore your comment but that's my thoughts dr. Ricky 1024 and thanks for stopping by the house is suffering review coming from cell phone with running sentences and no punctuation
reply by Liberty Justice on 19-Oct-2017
    I'm so sorry, Ricky, that you've been ill. What caused your sickness and what are you doing to stay well. You are one of the greatest script writers of all time, a MASTER of your trade. Normally, men don't excel at writing, but you are an exception. AWESOME. I'm praying for you to get well. No more motorcycle riding, ok! READ my writings also and books for sale and pass these around to everyone and your social medias. Thanks! Only sold 4 books this entire year. So Sad. KEEP THE FAITH. lol your friend forever, liberty justice
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I think you are missing some text. Nothing is here. Revise it and I will be happy to update my review. Right now you just seem to have the title of the chapter...

 Comment Written 15-Oct-2017


reply by the author on 15-Oct-2017
    It is almost completed.
    Ricky....