Autumn Eve
Autumn brings nature's promise.49 total reviews
Comment from Sis Cat
This is a fine autumnal poem. I first noticed your word choice and how they developed a photographic image in my mind. Yes, this picture is pure and serene. The ABC form supported your poem without getting in the way of your message. Thank you for sharing it. I wish you contest success.
reply by the author on 15-Oct-2017
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This is a fine autumnal poem. I first noticed your word choice and how they developed a photographic image in my mind. Yes, this picture is pure and serene. The ABC form supported your poem without getting in the way of your message. Thank you for sharing it. I wish you contest success.
Comment Written 15-Oct-2017
reply by the author on 15-Oct-2017
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Thank you very much for this supportive and good review. Thank for the good wishes, I usually do not do well in contests. At least now I know my work was not inferior.
Gratefully,
Brigitte
Comment from Heather Knight
This is a lovely poem. I love the words and the presentation.
The last line is my favorite: A picture...pure and serene (I like the adjectives you've used).
Thanks for sharing and good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 15-Oct-2017
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This is a lovely poem. I love the words and the presentation.
The last line is my favorite: A picture...pure and serene (I like the adjectives you've used).
Thanks for sharing and good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 15-Oct-2017
reply by the author on 15-Oct-2017
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Thank you Maria Jose Garcia for these supportive comments. Usually, my contest entries fall flat but at least your comments encouraged me to keep trying.
Fan Friend,
Brigitte
Comment from Bill Schott
This ABC poem, Autumn Eve, uses the correct set up of alphabetically aligned lines and captures the first colors of the new season. Nice.
reply by the author on 15-Oct-2017
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This ABC poem, Autumn Eve, uses the correct set up of alphabetically aligned lines and captures the first colors of the new season. Nice.
Comment Written 15-Oct-2017
reply by the author on 15-Oct-2017
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Thank you Bill Schott. Encouraging comments like this will keep me writing. Usually my entries in contests fall flat. This writer will not give up. I write for readers to enjoy and not to win.
Fan Friend,
Brigitte
Comment from evesayshi
In my opinion, a lovely tribute to the season, easily presenting a vision of autumn delight, a colorful potpourri - in perfect compliance with the prompt. Best of luck in the contest...
reply by the author on 15-Oct-2017
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In my opinion, a lovely tribute to the season, easily presenting a vision of autumn delight, a colorful potpourri - in perfect compliance with the prompt. Best of luck in the contest...
Comment Written 15-Oct-2017
reply by the author on 15-Oct-2017
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Thank you evesayshi for this supporting comment. I love to write for the pure joy of the art. Contests are not my strong suit and my entries usually fall flat. I work hard on compliance with the prompt.
Fan Friend,
Brigitte
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You are very welcome. I am in precisely the same position, Brigitte, but it's still fun to enter now and then - I reiterated, best of luck in the contest...Eve
Comment from Commando
A commendable ABC Poem presentation. I love smelling the fragrance of red, yellow-gold and green leaves, as they fall from trees, then walk around on the ground. I am receptive of their beauty--and the magic of Autumn's promise. The Artwork is awesome and it's image is pure and serene. Sheeee! Are you listening? "WOW!" Thanks for sharing "Autumn Eve" on Fanstory. Best wishes and God bless.
Respectfully,
Your fan and friend!
reply by the author on 15-Oct-2017
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A commendable ABC Poem presentation. I love smelling the fragrance of red, yellow-gold and green leaves, as they fall from trees, then walk around on the ground. I am receptive of their beauty--and the magic of Autumn's promise. The Artwork is awesome and it's image is pure and serene. Sheeee! Are you listening? "WOW!" Thanks for sharing "Autumn Eve" on Fanstory. Best wishes and God bless.
Respectfully,
Your fan and friend!
Comment Written 15-Oct-2017
reply by the author on 15-Oct-2017
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Thank you so much for receiving the image I wanted to convey. I love Autumn and feel this deep within. I write and hope the reader perceives the subject the way I intended. Your supporting comments make this effort worthwhile.
Fan Friend+,
Brigitte
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
Yes Autumnal colours are a joy for us all! Your poem is packed with bright vibrant serene colourful scene, I wish you luck with the ABC contest, best wishes, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 15-Oct-2017
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Yes Autumnal colours are a joy for us all! Your poem is packed with bright vibrant serene colourful scene, I wish you luck with the ABC contest, best wishes, love Dolly x
Comment Written 15-Oct-2017
reply by the author on 15-Oct-2017
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Thank you Dolly'sPoems. I appreciate the reading and commenting. This novice poet is trying to improve her craft. I have never done well in contests, but that's okay. Will keep trying.
Fan Friend,
Brigitte
Comment from RGstar
Lovely writing, lovely image. Wishing you well with this. Nice and clear imagery. Autumn always a lovely time of year in thoughts, mind and quills.
Well done.
My best wishes and good luck with it.
RGstar
reply by the author on 15-Oct-2017
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Lovely writing, lovely image. Wishing you well with this. Nice and clear imagery. Autumn always a lovely time of year in thoughts, mind and quills.
Well done.
My best wishes and good luck with it.
RGstar
Comment Written 15-Oct-2017
reply by the author on 15-Oct-2017
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Thank you RGstar. You are encouraging to my attempts in improving my craft. I appreciate the reading and comments.
Fan Friend,
Brgitte
Comment from Pantygynt
This poem is beautifully presented in autumn gold against a perfect piece of artwork given the theme of the poem. I was only thinking this morning how different trees behave so differently at this time of year. The Ash barely changing its colours, just gets blown away to bare poles, while the hazel gives a rare technicolour performance to end the season, and the virginia creeper blushes deeply very early on before running to hide and losing all its leaves. The beach on the other hand hangs on to its golden brown leaves all the way through the winter sometimes.
reply by the author on 15-Oct-2017
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This poem is beautifully presented in autumn gold against a perfect piece of artwork given the theme of the poem. I was only thinking this morning how different trees behave so differently at this time of year. The Ash barely changing its colours, just gets blown away to bare poles, while the hazel gives a rare technicolour performance to end the season, and the virginia creeper blushes deeply very early on before running to hide and losing all its leaves. The beach on the other hand hangs on to its golden brown leaves all the way through the winter sometimes.
Comment Written 15-Oct-2017
reply by the author on 15-Oct-2017
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Beautiful sentiments and references to the season. I am glad that I helped paint a picture in your mind.
Thank you for this review and comments.
Fan Friend,
Brigitte
Comment from papa55mike
What a great job of writing this prompt. You're right the picture is perfect. I love the Autumn sunsets and sunrises also. They're so full of color!
Good luck in the contest!
Have a great day and God bless.
mike
reply by the author on 15-Oct-2017
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What a great job of writing this prompt. You're right the picture is perfect. I love the Autumn sunsets and sunrises also. They're so full of color!
Good luck in the contest!
Have a great day and God bless.
mike
Comment Written 15-Oct-2017
reply by the author on 15-Oct-2017
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Papamike, thank you for your supportive review and comments. I, also, love Autumn.
Blessings,
Brigitte
Comment from Dorothy Farrell
Hi anon - this is a very good ABC poem for the contest. You continue the theme throughout and meet the requirements for an ABC. Lovely Autumn display and picture. Good Luck in the contest. Warm regards Dorothy
reply by the author on 15-Oct-2017
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Hi anon - this is a very good ABC poem for the contest. You continue the theme throughout and meet the requirements for an ABC. Lovely Autumn display and picture. Good Luck in the contest. Warm regards Dorothy
Comment Written 15-Oct-2017
reply by the author on 15-Oct-2017
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Thank you so much for these kind encouraging remarks. I have never done well in contests, maybe today. crossing my fingers, lol. I have never tried an ABC poem previously, glad that I adhered to the requirements.
Fan Friend,
Brigitte
