Autumn Eve
Autumn brings nature's promise.49 total reviews
Comment from Pam (respa)
-Very nice image and presentation.
-Poem is done well and you followed the directions.
-Good imagery and you also create a good mood.
-I like the use of color and the comparison to a photo.
-The last line is very good, too.
-A good entry; good luck.
reply by the author on 15-Oct-2017
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-Very nice image and presentation.
-Poem is done well and you followed the directions.
-Good imagery and you also create a good mood.
-I like the use of color and the comparison to a photo.
-The last line is very good, too.
-A good entry; good luck.
Comment Written 14-Oct-2017
reply by the author on 15-Oct-2017
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Thank you Pam for this kind review. I appreciate the the fact that you read and commented. It is inspirational to rceive comments like yours.
Blessings,
Brigitte
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You are welcome and thank you for the appreciation of the review.
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Thank you!
Brigitte
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🙂 back to you.
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Thank you so much for reading and this review.
Brigitte
Comment from rspoet
This is a fine ABC poem and entry for the contest
with the required letter arrangement
Excellent descriptive imagery, plus the extra rhyme
makes the Autumn mood very well
Nicely done with excellent art work
Good luck in the voting
RS
reply by the author on 15-Oct-2017
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This is a fine ABC poem and entry for the contest
with the required letter arrangement
Excellent descriptive imagery, plus the extra rhyme
makes the Autumn mood very well
Nicely done with excellent art work
Good luck in the voting
RS
Comment Written 14-Oct-2017
reply by the author on 15-Oct-2017
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I humbly thank you for the review and the kind remarks.
Blessings,
Brigitte
Comment from Irish Rain
I love your poetry of autumn. Such a delightful description, and the artwork makes for a great presentation. Wonderful entry, blessings...
reply by the author on 15-Oct-2017
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I love your poetry of autumn. Such a delightful description, and the artwork makes for a great presentation. Wonderful entry, blessings...
Comment Written 14-Oct-2017
reply by the author on 15-Oct-2017
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Thank you IrishRain for this supportive review. I am working on improving my poetry writing skills.
Blessings,
Brigitte
Comment from Poetic Friend
You chose a perfect theme for this contest -- autumn. In addition to executing the poetic form correctly, you presented stunning imagery with the bright colors of fall.
You are correct in saying that the picture is pure and serene.
Good luck in the contest. Enjoy the remainder of your weekend.
reply by the author on 14-Oct-2017
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You chose a perfect theme for this contest -- autumn. In addition to executing the poetic form correctly, you presented stunning imagery with the bright colors of fall.
You are correct in saying that the picture is pure and serene.
Good luck in the contest. Enjoy the remainder of your weekend.
Comment Written 14-Oct-2017
reply by the author on 14-Oct-2017
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Thank you very much. Enjoy your weekend, also.
Fan Friend, Brigitte
Comment from Teri7
This is a very beautifully written ABC poem. You used very good descriptive wording and very good imagery with the art work. Best wishes in the contest. Teri
reply by the author on 14-Oct-2017
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This is a very beautifully written ABC poem. You used very good descriptive wording and very good imagery with the art work. Best wishes in the contest. Teri
Comment Written 14-Oct-2017
reply by the author on 14-Oct-2017
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Thank you Ter7. Comments like yours keep me writing. I am learning, I think.
Fan Friend,
Brgitte
Comment from Natali Holden
Your last line states your poem well, "A picture...pure and serene". It brings a picture to mind and your poem's words are so serene. Good luck in the contest!
Natali ;)
reply by the author on 14-Oct-2017
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Your last line states your poem well, "A picture...pure and serene". It brings a picture to mind and your poem's words are so serene. Good luck in the contest!
Natali ;)
Comment Written 14-Oct-2017
reply by the author on 14-Oct-2017
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Thank you very much. This is my first attempt At ABC poetry. I am encouraged by readers like you. I never do well in contest though. I write because I love the craft.
Fan Friend,
Brigitte
Comment from kiwisteveh
Attractive presentation, but I have to say your poem about autumn colours does nothing for me. despite focusing on bright colours, the poem itself feels a little drab.
Your first line is vague about the point of view - who is doing the perceiving? Line 3 mentions the 'earthly stage' but there is no expansion on this image elsewhere in the poem. Instead, line 4 creates what seems a slightly incongruous 'photo image'. Is the poem really about the majesty of autumn, or is it describing a picture? That seems to be confirmed by the last line.
Your ABC format is perfect and you use rhyme to add an aural quality to the piece, but I'm afraid it just feels wrong to me.
Steve
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reply by the author on 14-Oct-2017
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Attractive presentation, but I have to say your poem about autumn colours does nothing for me. despite focusing on bright colours, the poem itself feels a little drab.
Your first line is vague about the point of view - who is doing the perceiving? Line 3 mentions the 'earthly stage' but there is no expansion on this image elsewhere in the poem. Instead, line 4 creates what seems a slightly incongruous 'photo image'. Is the poem really about the majesty of autumn, or is it describing a picture? That seems to be confirmed by the last line.
Your ABC format is perfect and you use rhyme to add an aural quality to the piece, but I'm afraid it just feels wrong to me.
Steve
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Comment Written 14-Oct-2017
reply by the author on 14-Oct-2017
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I do thank you for this review. It is helpful to me to know how readers may perceive what I try to convey. I will read and edit if I feel the need. Thank you reading.
Brigitte
Comment from Elizabeth Daniels
Your poem does indeed create a mood as well as paint a nice mental picture. Especially poignant as we are in the midst of autumn. Good luck in the contest. Elizabeth Daniels,
reply by the author on 14-Oct-2017
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Your poem does indeed create a mood as well as paint a nice mental picture. Especially poignant as we are in the midst of autumn. Good luck in the contest. Elizabeth Daniels,
Comment Written 14-Oct-2017
reply by the author on 14-Oct-2017
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Thank you for reading and reviewing. I am humbled by your review of my first attempt at ABC poetry.
Blessings,
Brgitte
Comment from Lucian Carter
Very rich and flavorful. Good use of color and adjectives. I can practically smell the leaves from here. Your are right, Mother Nature is powerful. Maybe we should stop passing her off.
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reply by the author on 14-Oct-2017
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Very rich and flavorful. Good use of color and adjectives. I can practically smell the leaves from here. Your are right, Mother Nature is powerful. Maybe we should stop passing her off.
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Comment Written 14-Oct-2017
reply by the author on 14-Oct-2017
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Thank you, dear fan and friend. This is my first attempt at ABC poetry. I am honored that you took the time to read and comment.
Fan Friend,
Brigitte
