Autumn Eve
Autumn brings nature's promise.49 total reviews
Comment from rjuselius
This is an absolutely beautiful piece of poetry dear anonymous! Although rather simplistic, it works very well towards perfection.
Thanks for sharing!
Good luck!
Blessings and a big squeeze!
Rebekka x
reply by the author on 16-Oct-2017
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This is an absolutely beautiful piece of poetry dear anonymous! Although rather simplistic, it works very well towards perfection.
Thanks for sharing!
Good luck!
Blessings and a big squeeze!
Rebekka x
Comment Written 15-Oct-2017
reply by the author on 16-Oct-2017
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Thank you. The big squeeze received and you have my gratitude for reading and commenting.
Fan Friend,
Brigitte
Comment from June Sargent
Great example of an ABC poem. In a few short lines you have painted a portrait of Autumn's splendours. It is a grand sight to perceive. The artwork matched perfectly.
reply by the author on 16-Oct-2017
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Great example of an ABC poem. In a few short lines you have painted a portrait of Autumn's splendours. It is a grand sight to perceive. The artwork matched perfectly.
Comment Written 15-Oct-2017
reply by the author on 16-Oct-2017
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Thank you for this kind review. I am inspired to keep writing by such inspirational reviews. I love Autumn!
Fan Friend,
Brigitte
Comment from ~Dovey
Hello Poet -
This is a lovely example of an ABC poem. You have followed the proper structure of this style by beginning your lines with consecutive letters of the alphabet. I also enjoyed the added sprinkling of rhyme in your lines.
Good luck in the contest!
Kim
reply by the author on 15-Oct-2017
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Hello Poet -
This is a lovely example of an ABC poem. You have followed the proper structure of this style by beginning your lines with consecutive letters of the alphabet. I also enjoyed the added sprinkling of rhyme in your lines.
Good luck in the contest!
Kim
Comment Written 15-Oct-2017
reply by the author on 15-Oct-2017
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Thank you for reading and reviewing. I write to share. I don't do well in contests but the writing brings satisfaction, especially, after good review such as this.
Fan Friend,
Brigitte
Comment from Bichon
A very beautiful poem. You described autumn perfectly in such few words. Splendid job with this one. Best of luck in the contest, I do hope this will be a winner.
reply by the author on 15-Oct-2017
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A very beautiful poem. You described autumn perfectly in such few words. Splendid job with this one. Best of luck in the contest, I do hope this will be a winner.
Comment Written 15-Oct-2017
reply by the author on 15-Oct-2017
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Wow. What nice compliments. I am humbled. I don't do well in contests but it is the sharing that gives me gratification. Thank you for your good wishes.
Fan friend,
Brigitte
Comment from RPSaxena
Hello Friend,
Autumn Eve - A nice piece of General Poetry meeting the desired norms, and transparently depicting its theme!
Impressive and matching the theme phraseology.
Smooth and musical flow throughout from the beginning to the end.
Picture complements the theme.
Best of Luck!
reply by the author on 15-Oct-2017
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Hello Friend,
Autumn Eve - A nice piece of General Poetry meeting the desired norms, and transparently depicting its theme!
Impressive and matching the theme phraseology.
Smooth and musical flow throughout from the beginning to the end.
Picture complements the theme.
Best of Luck!
Comment Written 15-Oct-2017
reply by the author on 15-Oct-2017
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I am humbled by your remarks. Thank you very much for this rating.Encouragement such as yours, keeps me wriitng to improve with every posting. Thank you so much for this rating!
Fan Friend,
Brigitte
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Brigitte, Most Welcome!
~ RP
Comment from frierajac
It is a good poem and I like the use of the word perceive in the first line. The other rhymes complement and make it stand out. ...It has a feeling of encroaching darkness due to the idea of developing a photo.
reply by the author on 15-Oct-2017
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It is a good poem and I like the use of the word perceive in the first line. The other rhymes complement and make it stand out. ...It has a feeling of encroaching darkness due to the idea of developing a photo.
Comment Written 15-Oct-2017
reply by the author on 15-Oct-2017
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Very well received comments for my poetry. Thank you for reading and taking the time to review.
Fan Friend,
Brigitte
Comment from mermaids
You have a vivid use of words that captures the feel and picture of Autumn. "Developing a photo image" is such a perfect image that reflects how picture perfect Autumn is.
reply by the author on 15-Oct-2017
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You have a vivid use of words that captures the feel and picture of Autumn. "Developing a photo image" is such a perfect image that reflects how picture perfect Autumn is.
Comment Written 15-Oct-2017
reply by the author on 15-Oct-2017
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Thank you mermaids for this supportive review. When a reader takes the time to make specific comments, such as yours, I am appreciative.
Fan Friend,
Brigitte
Comment from Boogienights
Wow! This is great. It certainly paints a picture in the mind of the beauty of the fall season. I liked the picture you paired it with. Of course you followed the contest rules. I wish you good luck.
reply by the author on 15-Oct-2017
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Wow! This is great. It certainly paints a picture in the mind of the beauty of the fall season. I liked the picture you paired it with. Of course you followed the contest rules. I wish you good luck.
Comment Written 15-Oct-2017
reply by the author on 15-Oct-2017
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Thank you Booienights ( love this name), you made my evening with this review. I don't do well in contests but love to write.
Fan Friend,
Brigitte
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written ABC poem about autumn evenings that we perceive with bright colors of yellow red and green. We capture this images with cameras and within pur minds forever to be enjoyed.
reply by the author on 15-Oct-2017
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A very well-written ABC poem about autumn evenings that we perceive with bright colors of yellow red and green. We capture this images with cameras and within pur minds forever to be enjoyed.
Comment Written 15-Oct-2017
reply by the author on 15-Oct-2017
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Thank you Sandra du Plessis for reading and taking the time to review. I am working to become more skilled....
Fan Friend,
Brigitte
Comment from Oatmeal
You did a wonderful job with this challenge. The flow was very nice. Chosen words are excellent. The theme is strong. Your feelings are expressed well. The artwork complemented your poem.
There was no SPAG, no typos, no room for improvement.
I look forward to seeing you again.
Love you,
Oatmeal
reply by the author on 15-Oct-2017
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You did a wonderful job with this challenge. The flow was very nice. Chosen words are excellent. The theme is strong. Your feelings are expressed well. The artwork complemented your poem.
There was no SPAG, no typos, no room for improvement.
I look forward to seeing you again.
Love you,
Oatmeal
Comment Written 15-Oct-2017
reply by the author on 15-Oct-2017
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Thank you Oatmeal for these supporting comments on my poem.
Fan Friend,
Brigitte
