Autumn Eve
Autumn brings nature's promise.49 total reviews
Comment from GWinterwin
Good picture and words to tell of the beauty of autumn. I am not a winter person although my last name is Winters. I love fall as the leaves turn beautiful colors, and thanksgiving with the family is a wonderful memory, but I don't like snow and now I live in California and where we are we don't get snow down below as we live at the foothills. I love fall but it brings not such good memories of winter just a head.
reply by the author on 16-Oct-2017
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Good picture and words to tell of the beauty of autumn. I am not a winter person although my last name is Winters. I love fall as the leaves turn beautiful colors, and thanksgiving with the family is a wonderful memory, but I don't like snow and now I live in California and where we are we don't get snow down below as we live at the foothills. I love fall but it brings not such good memories of winter just a head.
Comment Written 16-Oct-2017
reply by the author on 16-Oct-2017
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Thank you for reading and commenting.Autumn is my favorite time of year..the colors and the promise of beauty after the transition. California, the land of milk and honey, but no snow..sad.
Fan Friend,
Brigitte
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Well California has snow but just not where I am, and that is just the way I want it.
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I'm from Germany originally and love it.Different strokes for different folks. Nice to meet you.
From the other coast,
Brigitte
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Nice to meet you, God bless.
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Likewise and blessings to you.
Brigitte
Comment from His Grayness
I deeply apologize for not having the sixth star so strongly deserved by this lovely work! The presentation of this work is lovely right from the outset with beautiful photography and then immediately carried forth with beautiful text in excellent coloration, rhyme and pace. I'm a big lover of Autumn and nature in general and I certainly got a great lift and smile from this truly delightful work!! HIS GRAYNESS: Vance
reply by the author on 16-Oct-2017
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I deeply apologize for not having the sixth star so strongly deserved by this lovely work! The presentation of this work is lovely right from the outset with beautiful photography and then immediately carried forth with beautiful text in excellent coloration, rhyme and pace. I'm a big lover of Autumn and nature in general and I certainly got a great lift and smile from this truly delightful work!! HIS GRAYNESS: Vance
Comment Written 16-Oct-2017
reply by the author on 16-Oct-2017
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Coming from you, an author extra ordinaire, this is a glorious review. I am truly inspired to keep writing, promise you will keep reading. We don't have enough precious 6 stars. That dilemna befalls me when I review. Happy you enjoyed this as much as I enjoyed writing and sharing it. Your words are MY 6 stars.
Fan friend,
Brigitte
Comment from patcelaw
Brigitte, this is a lovely ABC poem for the contest. I wish you the best in the contest/ Blessings for a wonder filled week. Patricia
reply by the author on 16-Oct-2017
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Brigitte, this is a lovely ABC poem for the contest. I wish you the best in the contest/ Blessings for a wonder filled week. Patricia
Comment Written 16-Oct-2017
reply by the author on 16-Oct-2017
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Thank you fellow writer. Your reading and commenting is my honor.
Fan friend,
Brigitte
Comment from Allyzeé
"Developing a photo image
A picture...pure and serene"
Of the most beautiful memories one can have, the images of autumn create the best pictures to remember and conserve.
Beautiful poem.
reply by the author on 16-Oct-2017
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"Developing a photo image
A picture...pure and serene"
Of the most beautiful memories one can have, the images of autumn create the best pictures to remember and conserve.
Beautiful poem.
Comment Written 16-Oct-2017
reply by the author on 16-Oct-2017
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Thank you so much. I love Autumn...it is transitional and brings about anticipation..I write about things that are dear to me.
Fan Friend,
Brigitte
Comment from zanya
Yes a poem of appreciation of the season of Autumn, portrayed through the beauty of autumn evening, in all its colorful garb here in this ABC poem- and a lovely pic
reply by the author on 16-Oct-2017
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Yes a poem of appreciation of the season of Autumn, portrayed through the beauty of autumn evening, in all its colorful garb here in this ABC poem- and a lovely pic
Comment Written 16-Oct-2017
reply by the author on 16-Oct-2017
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Thank you very much zanya. I need to take a break from writing and start reading and reviewing. You have new work to read, I see.
Fan friend,
Brigitte
Comment from harriswilliam
This piece was a delightful read, Autumn is my second favorite season behind winter. This poem is very relaxing for me to ponder on (it helps me to escape) and that is what poetry is for me, "escape".
reply by the author on 16-Oct-2017
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This piece was a delightful read, Autumn is my second favorite season behind winter. This poem is very relaxing for me to ponder on (it helps me to escape) and that is what poetry is for me, "escape".
Comment Written 16-Oct-2017
reply by the author on 16-Oct-2017
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I also escape into the season. It is so transitional and full of anticipation...Thank you for reading and commenting. I am delighted you enjoyed the poetry.
Fan Friend,
Brigitte
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You're welcome.
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My pleasure.
Brigitte
Comment from krys123
Hi Bridget;
-your ABC poem is a delight to read because I really enjoyed The definitively descriptive and vividly and demonstratively expressive imagery.
-It's almost like your poem is an Ekphrastic poem as it really supports and benefits the picture and vice a versa with the pictures very supportive and relative to the conceptual theme of your poem.
-You relate to the colors and the scenery in such a way that makes your descriptive analysis quite clear and beautifully worded.
-Your writing helps with the enjambment's fluidity which flow smoothly without any syntactical or grammatical breaks in the reading and writing of your poem.
-You must've found it difficult to try to rhyming words with the ending syntax of AGE As is very difficult for words like image and stage to be phonetically rhythmic with the previous line but you did an excellent job in producing it.
-May you have the best of luck in the contest and may peace and harmony be with you always.
-In May you specially have the best of luck in your endeavors as in creating your book for it to be ready By Christmas.
Alex
reply by the author on 16-Oct-2017
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Hi Bridget;
-your ABC poem is a delight to read because I really enjoyed The definitively descriptive and vividly and demonstratively expressive imagery.
-It's almost like your poem is an Ekphrastic poem as it really supports and benefits the picture and vice a versa with the pictures very supportive and relative to the conceptual theme of your poem.
-You relate to the colors and the scenery in such a way that makes your descriptive analysis quite clear and beautifully worded.
-Your writing helps with the enjambment's fluidity which flow smoothly without any syntactical or grammatical breaks in the reading and writing of your poem.
-You must've found it difficult to try to rhyming words with the ending syntax of AGE As is very difficult for words like image and stage to be phonetically rhythmic with the previous line but you did an excellent job in producing it.
-May you have the best of luck in the contest and may peace and harmony be with you always.
-In May you specially have the best of luck in your endeavors as in creating your book for it to be ready By Christmas.
Alex
Comment Written 16-Oct-2017
reply by the author on 16-Oct-2017
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Wow. This is exactly for what I have wished for in a review. Specifics on content, grammar, and rhythmic flow are so necessary for a fluid read. Thank you so much for this. I do not do well in contests and this one was no different. I write to share, to have pieces read and receive feedback that will help me better my craft. Book is being printed as we speak. It is a grueling process finally culminating in a product that I relish to hold, within days.
Fan Friend,
Brigitte
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You are welcome Bridgette.
Alex
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When I have a nomination left, I will remember your review. Thank you so much.
Brigitte
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Thank you very much Bridget for your thoughts on remembering me the next time.
Alex
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Writing a book isn't quite an accomplishment and I got to hand it to you. You are extremely and sincerely welcome, Bridget, and may peaceful harmony always be with you.
Alex
Comment from Leineco
Very nice manipulation of the ABC form :-)
Like autumn's chill
paints with gold's shimmered tone
your words decorate
the page with burnished copper hues :-)
reply by the author on 16-Oct-2017
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Very nice manipulation of the ABC form :-)
Like autumn's chill
paints with gold's shimmered tone
your words decorate
the page with burnished copper hues :-)
Comment Written 16-Oct-2017
reply by the author on 16-Oct-2017
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Thank you for reading and commenting. Your review was poetry in itself... a joy to read.
Fan friend,
Brigitte
Comment from duchessofdrumborg
"Autumn Eve", is an extremely well-written piece. This talented poet's work was a pleasure to both read and review. I look forward to seeing your next post. You KEEP WRITING and I'll keep reading.
reply by the author on 16-Oct-2017
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"Autumn Eve", is an extremely well-written piece. This talented poet's work was a pleasure to both read and review. I look forward to seeing your next post. You KEEP WRITING and I'll keep reading.
Comment Written 15-Oct-2017
reply by the author on 16-Oct-2017
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Thank you for this inspiring review. I am a novice and learning daily how to improve my craft. Comments and reviews like yours are an inspiration. Thank you again for the support.
FanFriend,
Brigitte
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Brigitte, my pen-pushing friend,
as always, you're more than welcome.
Best wishes and bless you, the Duchess
Comment from Patricia Crandall
This poem flows well and describes Autumn perfectly. One gets a feel for the crisp Autumn evening air and surroundings. You have followed the writing prompt correctly. The artwork and gold coloring compliment the poem. Good writing.
reply by the author on 16-Oct-2017
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This poem flows well and describes Autumn perfectly. One gets a feel for the crisp Autumn evening air and surroundings. You have followed the writing prompt correctly. The artwork and gold coloring compliment the poem. Good writing.
Comment Written 15-Oct-2017
reply by the author on 16-Oct-2017
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Thank you for this review and comments about my seasonal poem. I appreciate your taking the time to read and review. I am encouraged to "pen" on...
Fan Friend,
Brigitte
