seasonal ritual
1-6-1 contest12 total reviews
Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
This speaks that human societies identify human living through social rules and customs and every man belongs to a society to follow and through seasonal ritual man loses freedom; I liked.
reply by the author on 13-Oct-2017
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This speaks that human societies identify human living through social rules and customs and every man belongs to a society to follow and through seasonal ritual man loses freedom; I liked.
Comment Written 13-Oct-2017
reply by the author on 13-Oct-2017
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Thank you for the awesome review my friend.
God bless!
Comment from rspoet
This is a solid 1-6-1 poem and entry for the contest
with the required three rhymes and the correct syllables
A bit violence, like the world of today and long ago
Seems little changes
Nicely done
Good luck in the voting
RS
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reply by the author on 13-Oct-2017
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This is a solid 1-6-1 poem and entry for the contest
with the required three rhymes and the correct syllables
A bit violence, like the world of today and long ago
Seems little changes
Nicely done
Good luck in the voting
RS
This rating does not count towards story rating or author rank.
The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
Comment Written 13-Oct-2017
reply by the author on 13-Oct-2017
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Much appreciated my friend. I pray the violence ceases, peace would be the better choice.
God bless!
