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seasonal ritual

1-6-1 contest

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Comment from Gert sherwood
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Hello Neonewman
I notice you wrote and posted this poem in October 13, 2017 which I like
My question do you have anything newer for us her on Fs to read and review.

Gert

 Comment Written 18-Dec-2017

reply by the author on 18-Dec-2017
    Hi Gert,
    Unfortunately this has been a rough year for me ending with the Harvey in August. Been placed in a hotel since the end of August. Haven't had much exposure to a computer or much time due to work. I hope to be in a new home shortly after the first of the year.
    Thank you for checking in.
    God bless
    Steve
reply by Gert sherwood on 18-Dec-2017
    Thank you Steve for telling me your reason
    Gert
reply by the author on 18-Dec-2017
    My pleasure.
Comment from rama devi
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HA HA HA - FUN drama here. Clever rhymes. Those poor pumpkins. This is hilarious satire. Missed it when you posted. Hope you did well in the contest.

Warmly, rd

 Comment Written 18-Dec-2017

reply by the author on 18-Dec-2017
    I had fun with this little piece. Hopefully I will have some new works after the first of the year. That is if I am finally in a home lol.
reply by rama devi on 18-Dec-2017
    I will be busy with editing clients starting Wednesday...may not be reviewing much in Jan.
reply by the author on 18-Dec-2017
    Awesome! As far as the work goes lol. I am not a fan of editing my own work.
reply by rama devi on 18-Dec-2017
    If you want to hire and editing, ever, I'll give you a discount! LOL :)
reply by the author on 18-Dec-2017
    LOL! This is certainly a possibility for the future I think.
reply by rama devi on 18-Dec-2017
    :-))))
Comment from BeasPeas
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Hi Steve. This is an older post, but I don't see anything newer in your portfolio. This 1-6-1 is excellent and sad at the same time--me being a vegetarian and all. This is a clever and entertaining read. Marilyn

 Comment Written 17-Dec-2017

reply by the author on 18-Dec-2017
    Thank you Marilyn, I haven't been on much this year due to Hurricane Harvey and a few other events. Been in a Hotel since August and am certainly looking forward to the new year.
reply by BeasPeas on 19-Dec-2017
    Hi Steve. I haven't seen anything from you in a while on the site. Hurricane Harvey explains it. So sorry you were hit hard like that. Hotel since August gets old. I hope you will be settled soon. All good things in the new year. Marilyn
reply by the author on 19-Dec-2017
    Thank you Marilyn. My faith is strong.
Comment from Joan E.
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I do not think I have read a horror 1-6-1 before. I admired your mono-rhyme and the drama you captured. Best wishes in the contest and have a serene weekend when it arrives- Joan

 Comment Written 08-Dec-2017

reply by the author on 08-Dec-2017
    Thank you for the awesome review my friend.
    God bless!
    Steve
Comment from Irish Rain
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So true!!! What a butchering there is of these lovely autumn decorations!! This is a fun, witty entry for this contest!! Blessings...

 Comment Written 14-Oct-2017

reply by the author on 14-Oct-2017
    Thank you Irish for the awesome review my friend.
    God bless!
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
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Ah, poor pumpkins. Good job on your contest entry. I enjoyed reading it. The colors are perfect. Thanks for sharing. Jan

 Comment Written 14-Oct-2017

reply by the author on 14-Oct-2017
    Thank you for the awesome review Jan.
    God bless!
Comment from Lucian Carter
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I'm missing something here. You followed the format well, but the message is unclear. I like the rhymes themselves though. Plus you use hordes correctly. That's cool.

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 Comment Written 14-Oct-2017

reply by the author on 14-Oct-2017
    Thank you Lucian for taking the time to review my work.
    God bless!
Comment from Mimi Linny
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Yes - Very nicely rhyming 1-6-1 poem and appropriate for the season! Nice flow to this very short type of poetry! Wishing you much luck in the contest!

 Comment Written 14-Oct-2017

reply by the author on 14-Oct-2017
    Thank you Mimi for the awesome review.
    God bless!
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
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A very well-written 1-6-1 poem about the seasonal ritual of the hordes that are dismembered by swords for the sake of ab evil cause, only benefit for the killer.

 Comment Written 14-Oct-2017

reply by the author on 14-Oct-2017
    Thank you Sandra, I always have fun with these little shorts.
    God bless!
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
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A resonating write bringing battle to my mind and the combat of yesteryear when swords where the chosen weapon of death. Horror images brought to mind in so few words, love Dolly x

 Comment Written 14-Oct-2017

reply by the author on 14-Oct-2017
    Thank you for the awesome review Dolly.
    God bless!