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Friday the 13th8 total reviews
Comment from robyn corum
Dan,
What a fun poem about this dreaded 'holiday'(?) What IS Friday the Thirteenth? It's not a holiday - what do you call it? Just an 'observance' or something like that? I don't know!
Anyway, you had some great points in here. My favorite stanza was:
So many feel this day is real
Danger comes at every corner
Fear embraces the nightly chorus
For Friday the 13th is notorious
And I thought the following was a really smart line:
Still home is not a finding relief
Sad, but true! Thanks so much!
reply by the author on 17-Oct-2017
Dan,
What a fun poem about this dreaded 'holiday'(?) What IS Friday the Thirteenth? It's not a holiday - what do you call it? Just an 'observance' or something like that? I don't know!
Anyway, you had some great points in here. My favorite stanza was:
So many feel this day is real
Danger comes at every corner
Fear embraces the nightly chorus
For Friday the 13th is notorious
And I thought the following was a really smart line:
Still home is not a finding relief
Sad, but true! Thanks so much!
Comment Written 17-Oct-2017
reply by the author on 17-Oct-2017
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Thanks for the comments.
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
Yes, I'm glad the day has passed and it even prevented me from going on a shopping trip, I left it until today just in case! They showed he movie on the TV too! Your poem is a tribute to the day, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 14-Oct-2017
Yes, I'm glad the day has passed and it even prevented me from going on a shopping trip, I left it until today just in case! They showed he movie on the TV too! Your poem is a tribute to the day, love Dolly x
Comment Written 14-Oct-2017
reply by the author on 14-Oct-2017
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Thanks for the comments.
Comment from Jacqueline M Franklin
Hi, Dan
= I saw the first one many years ago, but not any since then.
= Just not a Halloween person. I'm a scrooge on most holiday. LOL
= I enjoyed your poem. As always, very well penned and presented.
Cheers, J (*<*)
reply by the author on 14-Oct-2017
Hi, Dan
= I saw the first one many years ago, but not any since then.
= Just not a Halloween person. I'm a scrooge on most holiday. LOL
= I enjoyed your poem. As always, very well penned and presented.
Cheers, J (*<*)
Comment Written 13-Oct-2017
reply by the author on 14-Oct-2017
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Thanks for the comments.
Comment from Teri7
Dan, This is a very well written poem about this day - Friday the 13th. I am so thankful I am not superstitious. It is just another day. Very good wording and great imagery! Blessings, Teri
reply by the author on 14-Oct-2017
Dan, This is a very well written poem about this day - Friday the 13th. I am so thankful I am not superstitious. It is just another day. Very good wording and great imagery! Blessings, Teri
Comment Written 13-Oct-2017
reply by the author on 14-Oct-2017
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Thanks for the comments.
Comment from Kerry Foley Robinson
I like your friday the 13th pem, my friend, yes, it is a notorious day that people fear.
For the enchanted it could be lucky, lol. ~Kerry
reply by the author on 14-Oct-2017
I like your friday the 13th pem, my friend, yes, it is a notorious day that people fear.
For the enchanted it could be lucky, lol. ~Kerry
Comment Written 13-Oct-2017
reply by the author on 14-Oct-2017
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Thanks for the comments.
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Your welcome.
Comment from Gert sherwood
Hello Dan,
Oh right today is Friday the 13th very good
Here is wha tI say--
Don't be superstitious. Nothing will happen on Friday the 13th that cannot happen on Saturday the 14th.
Gert
reply by the author on 14-Oct-2017
Hello Dan,
Oh right today is Friday the 13th very good
Here is wha tI say--
Don't be superstitious. Nothing will happen on Friday the 13th that cannot happen on Saturday the 14th.
Gert
Comment Written 13-Oct-2017
reply by the author on 14-Oct-2017
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Thanks for the comments. Actually it has been a very good day for me.
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You are Welcome Dan
Same for me nothing freaky happen to me.
Gert
Comment from Michael Ludwinder
This is a haunted poem for the 13th. I love your word choices and the flow of the poem is very natural. The rhymes work well. Great job - you really take this day to a new level!
reply by the author on 14-Oct-2017
This is a haunted poem for the 13th. I love your word choices and the flow of the poem is very natural. The rhymes work well. Great job - you really take this day to a new level!
Comment Written 13-Oct-2017
reply by the author on 14-Oct-2017
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Thanks for the comments.
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A vety well-written poem about the bad luck day. Our tbufhts are powerful and when we think about the dangers of the day, we will attract bad luck and danger to us on this day.
reply by the author on 13-Oct-2017
A vety well-written poem about the bad luck day. Our tbufhts are powerful and when we think about the dangers of the day, we will attract bad luck and danger to us on this day.
Comment Written 13-Oct-2017
reply by the author on 13-Oct-2017
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Thanks for the comments.