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Comment from Irish Rain
I think if we are loving, happy people, we have. Will we ever be 'good enough?' No one ever is, because the person we always need to be better than, is ourselves. Loved this, blessings...
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I think if we are loving, happy people, we have. Will we ever be 'good enough?' No one ever is, because the person we always need to be better than, is ourselves. Loved this, blessings...
Comment Written 13-Oct-2017
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Thank you very much and yes to better ourselves is always needed****kahpot
Comment from sandy montgomery
Great presentation. Very well written and thought provoking. I thought you did a great job with this short form. Good rhyme. Thank you for sharing your work.
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Great presentation. Very well written and thought provoking. I thought you did a great job with this short form. Good rhyme. Thank you for sharing your work.
Comment Written 13-Oct-2017
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Thank you very much****kahpot
Comment from June Sargent
Very valid question in view of the times we're living in - how many individuals will meet the challenge of standing up for what is right rather than going with the tide?
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Very valid question in view of the times we're living in - how many individuals will meet the challenge of standing up for what is right rather than going with the tide?
Comment Written 13-Oct-2017
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Thank you very much and I must agree the tide is strong****kahpot
Comment from JennaG
This poem carries with it a powerful theme in relatively few words. My interpretation of what you're asking is "Are we living up to all that God hoped for us? And, are we doing so in a good, ethical way"? That's just my interpretation, I have no clue if I'm right, but I loved that this poem made me stop and think. Great job! :)
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This poem carries with it a powerful theme in relatively few words. My interpretation of what you're asking is "Are we living up to all that God hoped for us? And, are we doing so in a good, ethical way"? That's just my interpretation, I have no clue if I'm right, but I loved that this poem made me stop and think. Great job! :)
Comment Written 13-Oct-2017
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Thank you very much and yes you did read what I had hoped for****kahpot
Comment from evesayshi
In my opinion, definitely 6 Star worthy, but, sadly, I have no more the rest of the month. It is a profound statement in so few words and so beautifully articulated - wow! I loved your words and cannot help but believe they were inspired...
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In my opinion, definitely 6 Star worthy, but, sadly, I have no more the rest of the month. It is a profound statement in so few words and so beautifully articulated - wow! I loved your words and cannot help but believe they were inspired...
Comment Written 13-Oct-2017
reply by the author on 14-Oct-2017
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Thank you very much this review from yourself is very inspiring to me****kahpot
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You are very welcome, and, in my opinion, such a stunning piece, so deserving of the highest rating...
Comment from Mrs Happy Poet
Oh yes my friend this is well written I wonder how many of us could truly answer this hand on heart I don't think many well-done regards Jill
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Oh yes my friend this is well written I wonder how many of us could truly answer this hand on heart I don't think many well-done regards Jill
Comment Written 13-Oct-2017
reply by the author on 14-Oct-2017
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Thank you very much****kahpot
Comment from Elizabeth Daniels
A very good write for just two lines. A good question. Many try on daily basis with varying degrees of success. It's the ones that don't try that throw a wrench into the works.
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A very good write for just two lines. A good question. Many try on daily basis with varying degrees of success. It's the ones that don't try that throw a wrench into the works.
Comment Written 13-Oct-2017
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Thank you very much and yes you are correct about the people that don't try****kahpot
Comment from ~Dovey
Hi Kahpot -
I think that is the question we all must strive to answer for ourselves. How do we measure up? I think this would have worked well in one line as a monostitch. I saw that there is a current monostitch contest running. You seem to have the knack for concise and impactful statements. You may want to check it out under the contests tab.
Good job, thanks for sharing and making us pause to reflect.
Kim
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Hi Kahpot -
I think that is the question we all must strive to answer for ourselves. How do we measure up? I think this would have worked well in one line as a monostitch. I saw that there is a current monostitch contest running. You seem to have the knack for concise and impactful statements. You may want to check it out under the contests tab.
Good job, thanks for sharing and making us pause to reflect.
Kim
Comment Written 13-Oct-2017
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Thank you very much and I will check out your suggestion****kahpot
Comment from Cedar
That's a great question. In my opinion as a whole, I think not. Our world is in constant turmoil. Every time I turn on the TV to watch the world news, all I see is violence.
All we can do is try to do our part individually and hope and pray for the best for this troubled world we live in...Bill
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That's a great question. In my opinion as a whole, I think not. Our world is in constant turmoil. Every time I turn on the TV to watch the world news, all I see is violence.
All we can do is try to do our part individually and hope and pray for the best for this troubled world we live in...Bill
Comment Written 13-Oct-2017
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Thank you very much and yes I have just about given up watching the news****kahpot
Comment from rjuselius
Indeed, as humans, we possess the power to do evil or good or something in between. Your poem asks a very profound question. Do we live up to god or then remain only human.
Thanks for sharing!
Blessings and a big squeeze!
Rebekka x
reply by the author on 14-Oct-2017
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Indeed, as humans, we possess the power to do evil or good or something in between. Your poem asks a very profound question. Do we live up to god or then remain only human.
Thanks for sharing!
Blessings and a big squeeze!
Rebekka x
Comment Written 13-Oct-2017
reply by the author on 14-Oct-2017
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Thank you very much****kahpot
