Loop the Loop
A little loop35 total reviews
Comment from Teri7
This is a very cute loop poem you have penned. It is very short but seems to meet all the requirements well. You used very cute and good wording with great imagery with the art work. Blessings, Teri
reply by the author on 15-Oct-2017
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This is a very cute loop poem you have penned. It is very short but seems to meet all the requirements well. You used very cute and good wording with great imagery with the art work. Blessings, Teri
Comment Written 14-Oct-2017
reply by the author on 15-Oct-2017
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Thank you very much****kahpot
Comment from fayesh
I like the cleverness of this poem which in itself is a loop - starting with loop, continuing with the last word in each line becoming the first word in the next line until the writer ends the poem as it began, with "loop." The artwork complements the poem very well. Nice job.
reply by the author on 15-Oct-2017
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I like the cleverness of this poem which in itself is a loop - starting with loop, continuing with the last word in each line becoming the first word in the next line until the writer ends the poem as it began, with "loop." The artwork complements the poem very well. Nice job.
Comment Written 14-Oct-2017
reply by the author on 15-Oct-2017
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Thank you very much****kahpot
Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
This speaks the state of the loop, evidently it was in the state of without opening , that opening was not free to act as it stands as an obstruction for a poem with a form loop; I liked.
reply by the author on 15-Oct-2017
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This speaks the state of the loop, evidently it was in the state of without opening , that opening was not free to act as it stands as an obstruction for a poem with a form loop; I liked.
Comment Written 14-Oct-2017
reply by the author on 15-Oct-2017
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Thank you very much****kahpot
Comment from Thomas Bowling
This is very clever. It would have made an excellent contest entry. You have a quick mind. I've never seen this reasoning before. What better loop poem than a poem about a loop.
reply by the author on 15-Oct-2017
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This is very clever. It would have made an excellent contest entry. You have a quick mind. I've never seen this reasoning before. What better loop poem than a poem about a loop.
Comment Written 14-Oct-2017
reply by the author on 15-Oct-2017
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Thank you very much****kahpot
Comment from Lucian Carter
Very interesting. Loop pets are always interesting and I'm liking what you did here. A poem as an obstruction? To what? It is an all consuming obsession that must be acted on before anything else can do? The fact I'm unsure does not reduce my enjoyment at all. The image is amazing too.
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reply by the author on 15-Oct-2017
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Very interesting. Loop pets are always interesting and I'm liking what you did here. A poem as an obstruction? To what? It is an all consuming obsession that must be acted on before anything else can do? The fact I'm unsure does not reduce my enjoyment at all. The image is amazing too.
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The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
Comment Written 14-Oct-2017
reply by the author on 15-Oct-2017
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Thank you very much and you ask a great question I will have to think on this****kahpot
