Loop the Loop
A little loop35 total reviews
Comment from Pantygynt
This reminds me of the famous moebius strip, where it is possible to travel along both sides of a flat strip without going over the edge. Impossible and possible at the same time.
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This reminds me of the famous moebius strip, where it is possible to travel along both sides of a flat strip without going over the edge. Impossible and possible at the same time.
Comment Written 15-Oct-2017
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Thank you very much****kahpot
Comment from Dorothy Farrell
Hi Kahpot, I probably spent longer on your short poem than I do on the long ones. I read and reread like it was a puzzle. I did eventually see where you were going. Well done, I like loop poems. Warm regards Dorothy
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Hi Kahpot, I probably spent longer on your short poem than I do on the long ones. I read and reread like it was a puzzle. I did eventually see where you were going. Well done, I like loop poems. Warm regards Dorothy
Comment Written 15-Oct-2017
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Thank you very much****kahpot
Comment from Bichon
A very clever poem my friend. I was wondering, at the start, where the poem itself would go, but when I reached the end I was very happy with the results haha!
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A very clever poem my friend. I was wondering, at the start, where the poem itself would go, but when I reached the end I was very happy with the results haha!
Comment Written 15-Oct-2017
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Thank you very much****kahpot
Comment from DR DIP
I call this the never ending perpetual poem Kahpot. Interesting words I must say Had to read it several times to decipher where you were coming from and besides the loop sequence I am still working hard to interpret but several more reads should see me get the gist of where you are coming from lol
dip
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I call this the never ending perpetual poem Kahpot. Interesting words I must say Had to read it several times to decipher where you were coming from and besides the loop sequence I am still working hard to interpret but several more reads should see me get the gist of where you are coming from lol
dip
Comment Written 15-Oct-2017
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Thank you very much and I hope you like it****kahpot
Comment from lyenochka
Good one! You are making a statement about the construction of a loop poem. Clever way to write a poem about writing a poem. The perfect opening is required for writing.
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Good one! You are making a statement about the construction of a loop poem. Clever way to write a poem about writing a poem. The perfect opening is required for writing.
Comment Written 15-Oct-2017
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Thank you very much****kahpot
Comment from Dean Kuch
To infinity and beyond...
A figure "8", a perfect circle... there are a great many things with "loops."
Love will have us jumping through hoops at times, which is merely another form of loop, kahpot.
It can be a vicious circle, or a pleasant merry-go-round.
The choice is ours to make.
~Dean
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To infinity and beyond...
A figure "8", a perfect circle... there are a great many things with "loops."
Love will have us jumping through hoops at times, which is merely another form of loop, kahpot.
It can be a vicious circle, or a pleasant merry-go-round.
The choice is ours to make.
~Dean
Comment Written 15-Oct-2017
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Thank you and yes the choice is ours and I hope we make the correct one****kahpot
Comment from B.B. Rose
Is it part of the loop to have the last word loop back on itself to the first word?
Very clever in any case. I was thinking that you might tighten this up even more by taking out "was" and then specifying "Obstructed for this poem...made it seem like it was specially writ for me. Regards, Rose
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Is it part of the loop to have the last word loop back on itself to the first word?
Very clever in any case. I was thinking that you might tighten this up even more by taking out "was" and then specifying "Obstructed for this poem...made it seem like it was specially writ for me. Regards, Rose
Comment Written 14-Oct-2017
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Thank you very much, I have written down your suggestions and will will read my work with these ****kahpot
Comment from duchessofdrumborg
"Loop the Loop", is short, succinct and very much to the point. It was a pleasure to both read and review this talented poet's work. I look forward to seeing your next post.
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"Loop the Loop", is short, succinct and very much to the point. It was a pleasure to both read and review this talented poet's work. I look forward to seeing your next post.
Comment Written 14-Oct-2017
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Thank you very much****kahpot
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kahpot, as always, you're very welcome.
Best wishes, take care and bless you,
the Duchess
Comment from Barb Hensongispsaca
What a silly little loop poem that took each line different from the rest and made complete sense, but I feel the loop poem in unobstructed.lol
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What a silly little loop poem that took each line different from the rest and made complete sense, but I feel the loop poem in unobstructed.lol
Comment Written 14-Oct-2017
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Thank you very much****kahpot
Comment from Poetic Friend
Wow, this is very, very clever. Amazingly, the poem loops smoothly, without sounding forced for the sake of the poetic form.
If this was entered in a loop poetry contest, it would probably win.
Thank you for sharing. Havre a wonderful weekend,
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Wow, this is very, very clever. Amazingly, the poem loops smoothly, without sounding forced for the sake of the poetic form.
If this was entered in a loop poetry contest, it would probably win.
Thank you for sharing. Havre a wonderful weekend,
Comment Written 14-Oct-2017
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Thank you very much****kahpot
