Loop the Loop
A little loop35 total reviews
Comment from His Grayness
Fast and furious indeed! Magnificent artwork and coloration really grabs the reader. I cannot suggest a thing to improve this work and thank this author for a nice work. HIS GRAYNESS; Vance
reply by the author on 15-Oct-2017
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Fast and furious indeed! Magnificent artwork and coloration really grabs the reader. I cannot suggest a thing to improve this work and thank this author for a nice work. HIS GRAYNESS; Vance
Comment Written 15-Oct-2017
reply by the author on 15-Oct-2017
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Thank you very much****kahpot
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A mini loop poem that seems to.be another creation you created. I have seen more complexed loops that does not always make sense. This shorter version seems to havr a message.
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A mini loop poem that seems to.be another creation you created. I have seen more complexed loops that does not always make sense. This shorter version seems to havr a message.
Comment Written 15-Oct-2017
reply by the author on 15-Oct-2017
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Thank you very much****kahpot
Comment from Oatmeal
KAHPOT,
This poem made for an enjoyable read. The theme flowed well all through your poem. Telling things very plain and comprehensible. Short and sweet...just like I like them!
There was no SPAG. No room for improvement. The words you chose worked well.
I look forward to seeing you again.
Love you,
Oatmeal
reply by the author on 15-Oct-2017
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KAHPOT,
This poem made for an enjoyable read. The theme flowed well all through your poem. Telling things very plain and comprehensible. Short and sweet...just like I like them!
There was no SPAG. No room for improvement. The words you chose worked well.
I look forward to seeing you again.
Love you,
Oatmeal
Comment Written 15-Oct-2017
reply by the author on 15-Oct-2017
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Thank you very much****kahpot
Comment from krys123
Hello, Kahpot;
-with the use of a very predictable syllogistic reasoning your created a poem that supports itself but with a twist of romantic seasoning.
-The metaphorical imagery is both descriptive and expressive in creating the new wedding rings that are grouped together in a poem that looks within itself.
-Pictures very appropriate and supportive to the conceptual theme of your writing.
-Thank you for sharing and may peace and harmony be upon you.
Alex
reply by the author on 15-Oct-2017
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Hello, Kahpot;
-with the use of a very predictable syllogistic reasoning your created a poem that supports itself but with a twist of romantic seasoning.
-The metaphorical imagery is both descriptive and expressive in creating the new wedding rings that are grouped together in a poem that looks within itself.
-Pictures very appropriate and supportive to the conceptual theme of your writing.
-Thank you for sharing and may peace and harmony be upon you.
Alex
Comment Written 15-Oct-2017
reply by the author on 15-Oct-2017
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Thank you very much****kahpot
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You're very welcome my friend.
Alex
Comment from Sis Cat
Poem reminded me of a Mobilus Strip. This is a symbol of eternity. The only obstruction is this poem itself. I love your looping repetition of words, creating a harmonious composition.
Thank you for sharing.
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Poem reminded me of a Mobilus Strip. This is a symbol of eternity. The only obstruction is this poem itself. I love your looping repetition of words, creating a harmonious composition.
Thank you for sharing.
Comment Written 15-Oct-2017
reply by the author on 15-Oct-2017
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Thank you very much****kahpot
Comment from Heather Knight
This is a lovely little poem for which you have chosen the perfect picture. I've never written a loop poem myself, I'll have to try it one of these days.
Thanks for sharing.
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This is a lovely little poem for which you have chosen the perfect picture. I've never written a loop poem myself, I'll have to try it one of these days.
Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 15-Oct-2017
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Thank you very much and please do****kahpot
Comment from Bill Schott
This loop poem, Loop the Loop, uses the correct set up of words and seems to wrap itself up in itself for the purpose of this purpose which is to loop in this looping poem.
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This loop poem, Loop the Loop, uses the correct set up of words and seems to wrap itself up in itself for the purpose of this purpose which is to loop in this looping poem.
Comment Written 15-Oct-2017
reply by the author on 15-Oct-2017
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Thank you very much****kahpot
Comment from patcelaw
This is an interesting poem that lops well. I am not a great fan of the loop format, but this is good. May you have a wonder filled and joyful day, Blessings, Patricia
reply by the author on 15-Oct-2017
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This is an interesting poem that lops well. I am not a great fan of the loop format, but this is good. May you have a wonder filled and joyful day, Blessings, Patricia
Comment Written 15-Oct-2017
reply by the author on 15-Oct-2017
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Thank you very much****kahpot
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
An unusual little loop poem with teasing words which I had to read twice to understand, clever and the artwork is just a perfect accompaniment, love Dolly x
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An unusual little loop poem with teasing words which I had to read twice to understand, clever and the artwork is just a perfect accompaniment, love Dolly x
Comment Written 15-Oct-2017
reply by the author on 15-Oct-2017
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Thank you very much****kahpot
Comment from RGstar
So good was the looping I had to read and re-read, and came to the conclusion this was cleverly done.
Well thought out.
My best wishes.
RGstar
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So good was the looping I had to read and re-read, and came to the conclusion this was cleverly done.
Well thought out.
My best wishes.
RGstar
Comment Written 15-Oct-2017
reply by the author on 15-Oct-2017
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Thank you very much****kahpot
