Loop the Loop
A little loop35 total reviews
Comment from JanPerry
Very sweet and nice. Obstructed opengs etc. Deep thinker,however, no message to help lives to become better. Good ideas with a ring. Just need a moral to finish it.
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reply by the author on 21-Oct-2017
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Very sweet and nice. Obstructed opengs etc. Deep thinker,however, no message to help lives to become better. Good ideas with a ring. Just need a moral to finish it.
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Comment Written 21-Oct-2017
reply by the author on 21-Oct-2017
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Thank you very much and I think I understand about the finish****kahpot
Comment from Joan E.
Your title is intriguing and your artwork selection, quite stunning--I was drawn into your poem. I enjoyed the appealing progression and circularity. Cheers- Joan
reply by the author on 21-Oct-2017
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Your title is intriguing and your artwork selection, quite stunning--I was drawn into your poem. I enjoyed the appealing progression and circularity. Cheers- Joan
Comment Written 17-Oct-2017
reply by the author on 21-Oct-2017
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Thank you very much****kahpot
Comment from Mrs Happy Poet
Oh yes my friend I liked this it is original and quirky with beautiful colourful presentation it reads very well and I enjoyed well done regards Jill
reply by the author on 21-Oct-2017
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Oh yes my friend I liked this it is original and quirky with beautiful colourful presentation it reads very well and I enjoyed well done regards Jill
Comment Written 17-Oct-2017
reply by the author on 21-Oct-2017
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Thank you very much****kahpot
Comment from teols2016
A short but very nice piece. A loop shouldn't be obstructed. It wouldn't work then and that just can not be. Well done, fellow writer.
reply by the author on 21-Oct-2017
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A short but very nice piece. A loop shouldn't be obstructed. It wouldn't work then and that just can not be. Well done, fellow writer.
Comment Written 17-Oct-2017
reply by the author on 21-Oct-2017
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Thank you very much****kahpot
Comment from Meia (MESAYERS)
Loop poems are not something I have graped this is fantastic though I know that lol very much enjoyed if a little puzzling I am off to study loop poems before I go loopy love Meiaxx
reply by the author on 21-Oct-2017
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Loop poems are not something I have graped this is fantastic though I know that lol very much enjoyed if a little puzzling I am off to study loop poems before I go loopy love Meiaxx
Comment Written 17-Oct-2017
reply by the author on 21-Oct-2017
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Thank you very much****kahpot
Comment from Liberty Justice
FIVE STARS. Photo is a dynamic dramatization of the poem. Seems poet might be saying that sometimes life will loop around in circles and things will obstruct one and even a poem has a loop or a meaning. Anyway, this is one interpretation of this mystery poem. liberty justice
reply by the author on 21-Oct-2017
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FIVE STARS. Photo is a dynamic dramatization of the poem. Seems poet might be saying that sometimes life will loop around in circles and things will obstruct one and even a poem has a loop or a meaning. Anyway, this is one interpretation of this mystery poem. liberty justice
Comment Written 16-Oct-2017
reply by the author on 21-Oct-2017
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Thank you very much and yes sometimes life does turn back on us****kahpot
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Yeah you mean I interpreted
it correctly?
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Yes, that is where I was heading****kahpot
Comment from GWinterwin
The picture looks like one of those things you try to get together without an opening. I never could do them well, and since this is listed under self improvement of which I always need improvement , I especially need it in writing poetry
reply by the author on 16-Oct-2017
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The picture looks like one of those things you try to get together without an opening. I never could do them well, and since this is listed under self improvement of which I always need improvement , I especially need it in writing poetry
Comment Written 16-Oct-2017
reply by the author on 16-Oct-2017
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Thank you very much****kahpot
Comment from Allyzeé
Sweet and short. You tied up the image with the poem and the words perfectly. It was an enjoyable read, I will be looking forward to read more of your work. Best wishes
Allyzeé
reply by the author on 16-Oct-2017
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Sweet and short. You tied up the image with the poem and the words perfectly. It was an enjoyable read, I will be looking forward to read more of your work. Best wishes
Allyzeé
Comment Written 16-Oct-2017
reply by the author on 16-Oct-2017
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Thank you very much****kahpot
Comment from harriswilliam
Interesting poem, I admit I don't understand it at all, but it doesn't mean that I didn't like (it made me think which I appreciate). Thank you for this interesting poem.
reply by the author on 16-Oct-2017
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Interesting poem, I admit I don't understand it at all, but it doesn't mean that I didn't like (it made me think which I appreciate). Thank you for this interesting poem.
Comment Written 16-Oct-2017
reply by the author on 16-Oct-2017
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Thank you very much this is an honest review many thanks****kahpot
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You're welcome.
Comment from Patricia Crandall
What a clever poem and dazzling picture. All tie in together uniquely. You have written an extraordinary poem and I enjoyed reading it. Good writing.
reply by the author on 15-Oct-2017
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What a clever poem and dazzling picture. All tie in together uniquely. You have written an extraordinary poem and I enjoyed reading it. Good writing.
Comment Written 15-Oct-2017
reply by the author on 15-Oct-2017
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Wow thank you very much for this great and inspirational review****kahpot
