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"The Gift of Life II"

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Comment from Michael Ludwinder
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Another creative write by you. You share the pain and horror of losing someone dear to us. Your emotion comes through and there is also a bit of hope towards the end of this. Well written.

 Comment Written 16-Oct-2017


reply by the author on 19-Oct-2017
    , thanks Michael yeah this was a creative and Powerful piece to be able to push the death and turn it back into life again only highly intellectual people be able to figure out what I'm talking about until they get near the end exactly where you go I'm going with it because how can you produce life again from something that's dead you know but but anyhow I'm glad you enjoyed it as always talk to Ricky 24 review coming to a cell phone with no punctuation and grammar issues sorry about that
Comment from Lucian Carter
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Ah, I get it. Your lack of punctuation is a bit Co fusing. However, your point shines through in the end. I signed my organ do or card. I wish everyone would. I am so happy for you and your son.

 Comment Written 14-Oct-2017


reply by the author on 14-Oct-2017
    This was an enjoyable right and since my WiFi is down I have to do it in a phone I ate it when I get time thanks for your help and advice good to have you aboard who seeing dr. Ricky 1024
Comment from Barb Hensongispsaca
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YOur pieces now are getting hard to read and follow with no punctuation and the different full on style you are using but I still followed along and the message is one truth, life is short and no one knows when the number is up. But donate and give a life

 Comment Written 12-Oct-2017


reply by the author on 13-Oct-2017
    What I'm doing until I get Wifi service in my home or if I go out someplace on my laptop I added these talked in the phone things later so they will be like that temporarily of course thank you for following Ricky 1024
reply by Barb Hensongispsaca on 13-Oct-2017
    Understood
Comment from prettybluebirds
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Excellent. I haven't heard much from you for a very long time, my friend. I do so love to read your stories. You and I have both had the same kind of tragedy in our lives, the loss of a beloved son.

 Comment Written 12-Oct-2017


reply by the author on 13-Oct-2017
    Thanks pretty blue birds it has been a little bit of a while perhaps you were following me and noticed that I wasn't doing much for a couple months that's when I had to go in the hospital once for 5 days the second time for 3 weeks for operation for a hernia and believe me I didn't do any much writing when I was in there let alone putting it on the internet because I was concentrating on getting healthy and negative find the extreme pains I was in dr. Ricky 1024 on things
Comment from c_lucas
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It seems like modern society is still locked in primitive thought. It takes a brave person to think of others in their own time of need. This is very well written.

 Comment Written 12-Oct-2017


reply by the author on 13-Oct-2017
    Thanks Charlie it's a parent's worst nightmare do you need to be brave to be able to make that decision let me just tell you first you better have your head screwed on properly second you better be strong and third you better be religious because you're going to go insane you not going to want to eat you're not going to want to sleep you going to get week and you're going to curse Jesus Christ dr. Ricky 1024
reply by c_lucas on 13-Oct-2017
    Sounds profound.