Dancing shoes
A little prima Dona.16 total reviews
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
This is an innocent and delightful tale of a little girl with her dancing shoes which had been sabotaged! A lovely story and a joyful read even though the outcome is a little sad, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 12-Oct-2017
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This is an innocent and delightful tale of a little girl with her dancing shoes which had been sabotaged! A lovely story and a joyful read even though the outcome is a little sad, love Dolly x
Comment Written 12-Oct-2017
reply by the author on 12-Oct-2017
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Thank you Dolly for your kind review...
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Thank you Dolly for your kind review...
Comment from fastdigits
A tale well told, both artistically and poetically, with an ending that takes it that extra step with its not expected ending.
Well done and good luck
reply by the author on 12-Oct-2017
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A tale well told, both artistically and poetically, with an ending that takes it that extra step with its not expected ending.
Well done and good luck
Comment Written 12-Oct-2017
reply by the author on 12-Oct-2017
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Thanks for reading the and reviewing.
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written story/poem. Girls are more envious about each other when one stands out above the rest there will be jealousy and the poor girl will e attacked from all sides.
reply by the author on 12-Oct-2017
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A very well-written story/poem. Girls are more envious about each other when one stands out above the rest there will be jealousy and the poor girl will e attacked from all sides.
Comment Written 12-Oct-2017
reply by the author on 12-Oct-2017
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Thank you Sandra.
Comment from Mitchell Brontė
Hi Jen
What an excellent story in a poem, wonderful rhythm which enabled your words to flow effortlessly and fantastic rhymes that really help sell this story of jealousy and embarrassment.
Loved it
Mitchell
reply by the author on 12-Oct-2017
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Hi Jen
What an excellent story in a poem, wonderful rhythm which enabled your words to flow effortlessly and fantastic rhymes that really help sell this story of jealousy and embarrassment.
Loved it
Mitchell
Comment Written 12-Oct-2017
reply by the author on 12-Oct-2017
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Thank you Mitchell.
Comment from Mustang Patty
Hi there;
thank you for sharing this story within a poem. This is a great entry for the contest, for within the lines of this rhyming piece, you have managed the rhymes and told a story of jealousy and revenge. My heart was very sad for the little girl,
~patty~
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reply by the author on 12-Oct-2017
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Hi there;
thank you for sharing this story within a poem. This is a great entry for the contest, for within the lines of this rhyming piece, you have managed the rhymes and told a story of jealousy and revenge. My heart was very sad for the little girl,
~patty~
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Comment Written 12-Oct-2017
reply by the author on 12-Oct-2017
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Thanks Patty.
Comment from DR DIP
Did this actually happen to you Jen? Fun write in ABCB rhyme scheme
Trick us/ knickers hehe quirky rhyming I must say. thanks for sharing this fun poem with us.
dip
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Did this actually happen to you Jen? Fun write in ABCB rhyme scheme
Trick us/ knickers hehe quirky rhyming I must say. thanks for sharing this fun poem with us.
dip
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Comment Written 12-Oct-2017
reply by the author on 12-Oct-2017
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How do I know. I can't remember that far back but probably not. Thanks for reading. Cheers. Jen.
