Comment from Curly Girly

Excellent

This was a fun read, Sankey. I am sure Mary will enjoy reading it.
I'm glad you helped her sort out her profile problem! How positively confusing for all. I think I might have read it before. Very few of us think to check our profiles. It's time I updated mine again.
Nicole

 Comment Written 12-Oct-2017

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reply by the author on 12-Oct-2017

Glad you liked it mate. Don't forget about Bob Stanton in Capetown SA.

Comment from c_lucas

Excellent

It is hard to tell if the profile information is the truth. It is easier with the picture. It is easy to make friends on fanstory. This is very well written with a smooth flow of words.

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 Comment Written 12-Oct-2017

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reply by the author on 12-Oct-2017

Thanks Charlie glad you liked it. Mary is another good writer like you old mate.

reply by c_lucas on 12-Oct-2017

You're welcome, Gregg.

reply by the author on 12-Oct-2017

Geoff. mate hehe. Gregory and Geoffrey were popular at the same time though , hehe.

reply by c_lucas on 13-Oct-2017

Sorry, Geoff. Charlie

reply by the author on 13-Oct-2017

No worries buddy. It has happened before. I don't get a complex over it hehe. My wife doesn't like the saying...but just as long as you "Don't call me Late for Dinner!" hehe.

Comment from Jacqueline M Franklin

Excellent

Hi, Geoff

= Glad she got it all sorted out.
= I just reviewed the last two chapters she posted tonight.
= Nice dedication to Mary. I'm sure she'll appreciated it.
= Nice butterfly artwork.

Cheers, J (*<*)

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 Comment Written 11-Oct-2017

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reply by the author on 12-Oct-2017

Thanks Jackie appreciate you coming by. Felt like I needed to "get my finger out" of my muse hehe.