Lover's adieu
3 line poem33 total reviews
Comment from Mustang Patty
Dear Anonymous Poet;
thank you for sharing your entry in the Three-line poetry contest. Your poem tells the tale of a lost love within its limited lines. The wistfulness comes through and you chose a lovely picture to enhance the words.
Good luck in the contest,
~patty~
reply by the author on 15-Oct-2017
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Dear Anonymous Poet;
thank you for sharing your entry in the Three-line poetry contest. Your poem tells the tale of a lost love within its limited lines. The wistfulness comes through and you chose a lovely picture to enhance the words.
Good luck in the contest,
~patty~
Comment Written 12-Oct-2017
reply by the author on 15-Oct-2017
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Lovely word'wistfulness'- thanks for reading and review zanya
Comment from jenintorre
A very well written three line poem. I liked "lense of loneliness". Very discriptive
And very well chosen illustration. Good luck in the competition,
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reply by the author on 15-Oct-2017
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A very well written three line poem. I liked "lense of loneliness". Very discriptive
And very well chosen illustration. Good luck in the competition,
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Comment Written 12-Oct-2017
reply by the author on 15-Oct-2017
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Thanks for reviewing zanya
Comment from Sanku
Three lines are too short to express a full idea .but you have here expressed the grief of a jilted lover
I liked the expression "lens of loneliness."
reply by the author on 15-Oct-2017
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Three lines are too short to express a full idea .but you have here expressed the grief of a jilted lover
I liked the expression "lens of loneliness."
Comment Written 12-Oct-2017
reply by the author on 15-Oct-2017
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Thanks for those encouraging words zanya
Comment from duchessofdrumborg
"Lover's adieu", is short, succinct and very much to the point. This is an extremely well-written and delightfully descriptive piece. I look forward to seeing your next post.
reply by the author on 15-Oct-2017
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"Lover's adieu", is short, succinct and very much to the point. This is an extremely well-written and delightfully descriptive piece. I look forward to seeing your next post.
Comment Written 11-Oct-2017
reply by the author on 15-Oct-2017
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Most encouraging review ! zanya
Comment from Aussie
Well done poet! it isn't easy to tell a story in three lines. This you have done eloquently. We rely on our partner/friend and when they are gone it is like a ship without a rudder. Nothing lasts forever. Good luck in the contest. XXK.
reply by the author on 15-Oct-2017
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Well done poet! it isn't easy to tell a story in three lines. This you have done eloquently. We rely on our partner/friend and when they are gone it is like a ship without a rudder. Nothing lasts forever. Good luck in the contest. XXK.
Comment Written 11-Oct-2017
reply by the author on 15-Oct-2017
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Encouraging review -thanks for taking time to read zanya
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written three line poem. It is never easy when a loved one leaves us for whatever reason. To overcome the heartache and loneliness is to keep busy with anything that takes our minds off from thinking about them.
reply by the author on 15-Oct-2017
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A very well-written three line poem. It is never easy when a loved one leaves us for whatever reason. To overcome the heartache and loneliness is to keep busy with anything that takes our minds off from thinking about them.
Comment Written 11-Oct-2017
reply by the author on 15-Oct-2017
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Yes indeed-thanks for reading and reviewing zanya
Comment from crzypnter
This is a interesting and thought provoking at the same time. These are difficult to achieve trying to say so much in so few words. But you did a good job. Thanks for sharing. God bless
August
reply by the author on 15-Oct-2017
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This is a interesting and thought provoking at the same time. These are difficult to achieve trying to say so much in so few words. But you did a good job. Thanks for sharing. God bless
August
Comment Written 11-Oct-2017
reply by the author on 15-Oct-2017
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Thanks for reading and review zanya
Comment from royowen
An excellent entry in this three line poem Zanya. These short forms are difficult to tackle, but you've done a good job in appropriating a good theme and entry, good luck, blessings, Roy
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An excellent entry in this three line poem Zanya. These short forms are difficult to tackle, but you've done a good job in appropriating a good theme and entry, good luck, blessings, Roy
Comment Written 11-Oct-2017
reply by the author on 15-Oct-2017
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Most encouraging review -thanks for reading zanya
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Well done
Comment from Teri7
Zanya, This is a very well written three line poem you have penned for the contest about sadness after a lover leaving. You used very good descriptive wording and very good imagery. Best wishes in the contest. Teri
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Zanya, This is a very well written three line poem you have penned for the contest about sadness after a lover leaving. You used very good descriptive wording and very good imagery. Best wishes in the contest. Teri
Comment Written 11-Oct-2017
reply by the author on 15-Oct-2017
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Thanks for a great review zanya
Comment from sandy montgomery
I love the artwork. Your poem is very well presented. I love the phrase "lens of lonliness". So much is said in these carefully chosen words. Great job on your entry. Good luck in the contest. Thank you for sharing your work.
reply by the author on 15-Oct-2017
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I love the artwork. Your poem is very well presented. I love the phrase "lens of lonliness". So much is said in these carefully chosen words. Great job on your entry. Good luck in the contest. Thank you for sharing your work.
Comment Written 11-Oct-2017
reply by the author on 15-Oct-2017
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Thanks for a great review zanya
