This Time - That Time 2
Viewing comments for Chapter 18 "Veronica and Joe Start to Talk"Veronica is sent back again
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Comment from Walu Feral
G'day Cousin.
" I decided to keep my explanation simple. "He'd stepped through time into mine," I told him." (Hahahaha! Yep, that's pretty simple!)
"I turned around again and we started walking back up the lane." (The exercise will do her good since she flies all the time when she time-travels lol.)
"I reached out to grasp it and chuckled when my hand went right through his." (Oops! That'll get 'em yackin'!)
Ah, c'mon, mate. That's not fair leaving it there! What the heck did he see?
Hurry up and post the next chapter please so I can bloody well find out hahahaha!
Sheesh!
Great job again and the dialogue is something special.
Cheers Fez
reply by the author on 10-Oct-2017
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G'day Cousin.
" I decided to keep my explanation simple. "He'd stepped through time into mine," I told him." (Hahahaha! Yep, that's pretty simple!)
"I turned around again and we started walking back up the lane." (The exercise will do her good since she flies all the time when she time-travels lol.)
"I reached out to grasp it and chuckled when my hand went right through his." (Oops! That'll get 'em yackin'!)
Ah, c'mon, mate. That's not fair leaving it there! What the heck did he see?
Hurry up and post the next chapter please so I can bloody well find out hahahaha!
Sheesh!
Great job again and the dialogue is something special.
Cheers Fez
Comment Written 10-Oct-2017
reply by the author on 10-Oct-2017
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Aww, thank you so much, my dear Cousin. I just love your reviews, they always make me laugh. I've a lot of catching up to do, so please don't think I've forgotten your story. I'll get there today. Big hugs for the lovely 6 stars!! :) Sandra xxxx
