This Time - That Time 2
Viewing comments for Chapter 18 "Veronica and Joe Start to Talk"Veronica is sent back again
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Comment from Mrs Happy Poet
Yes, my friend, you have done exceptionally well again you bring the characters to life with ease and you leave the readers wanting to read more I enjoyed regards Jill
reply by the author on 13-Oct-2017
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Yes, my friend, you have done exceptionally well again you bring the characters to life with ease and you leave the readers wanting to read more I enjoyed regards Jill
Comment Written 13-Oct-2017
reply by the author on 13-Oct-2017
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Bless you, my friend, thank you so very much for this lovely review! The 6 stars are fabulous too, I'm really chuffed you are enjoying my story. Big hugs, my friend. :) Sandra xx
Comment from rwilliam
I love the photo for this chapter. It takes me back to 'that' time.
OH wow, what an ending to this chapter. I loved it. This had a great flow to it. I enjoyed the journey with these characters. Great writing!
I really liked the scene where her hand went through Joe's and then she giggled at being able to walk through the fence. :-) Helps to keep my mind in that place of time travel. Good job. :-)
reply by the author on 13-Oct-2017
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I love the photo for this chapter. It takes me back to 'that' time.
OH wow, what an ending to this chapter. I loved it. This had a great flow to it. I enjoyed the journey with these characters. Great writing!
I really liked the scene where her hand went through Joe's and then she giggled at being able to walk through the fence. :-) Helps to keep my mind in that place of time travel. Good job. :-)
Comment Written 12-Oct-2017
reply by the author on 13-Oct-2017
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Thank you so very much for the lovely 6 stars, Rebecca, and wonderful review!!! I'm delighted you are still enjoying my story, it gives me so much more confidence to know that. Big hugs, my friend. xx Sandra xx
Comment from estory
The tensions and anxieties of the characters gnaws throughout the dialogue here, as joe has to deal with getting kicked out of the house, his angry wife, and at the end, a confrontation with a demon of some kind. The suspense at the end is a good place to leave it to get people to read the next installment. How the time traveler can help has not been revealed. So we have to keep reading to find out how this all connects together in time estory
reply by the author on 13-Oct-2017
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The tensions and anxieties of the characters gnaws throughout the dialogue here, as joe has to deal with getting kicked out of the house, his angry wife, and at the end, a confrontation with a demon of some kind. The suspense at the end is a good place to leave it to get people to read the next installment. How the time traveler can help has not been revealed. So we have to keep reading to find out how this all connects together in time estory
Comment Written 12-Oct-2017
reply by the author on 13-Oct-2017
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Thank you so much, Estroy, for another lovely review! Big hugs, my friend. Sandra xxx
Comment from alexisleech
Another great chapter, Sandra. I can imagine Joe's distress at seeing someone with red eyes back in those days, and you built up to that recollection beautifully. I can't wait to see how you handle the situation concerning Sir John, and Joe's family's imminent home loss. Hopefully, Veronica will be able to help him, and being invisible will come in handy!
Hugs from France,
Alexis xxx
reply by the author on 12-Oct-2017
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Another great chapter, Sandra. I can imagine Joe's distress at seeing someone with red eyes back in those days, and you built up to that recollection beautifully. I can't wait to see how you handle the situation concerning Sir John, and Joe's family's imminent home loss. Hopefully, Veronica will be able to help him, and being invisible will come in handy!
Hugs from France,
Alexis xxx
Comment Written 12-Oct-2017
reply by the author on 12-Oct-2017
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My dear wonderful, Alexis! You are the loveliest lady, so wonderful to come and read my story AND give me another 6 stars!!! What can I say? You light up my day, put a big smile on my face, I am just so over the moon that you enjoy reading my chapters. Thank you so very, very. very much, my dear, Scottish-French friend!! Big hugs, and soooooooooooooo much love!! :) Sandra xxxx
Comment from write hand blue
Hi Sandra, your lovely story continues to hold the reader's interest. I've said it before, you write in such a natural way that the supernatural seems so plausible.
In my opinion, walking through the stile, is a great, natural sounding, and well timed addition to the story.
The ladder incident, is an interesting element; and what is 'Devil's spawn?' sounds creepy. I'll just have to wait and see. Great writing there my friend.
~Mel~ xxxx
reply by the author on 12-Oct-2017
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Hi Sandra, your lovely story continues to hold the reader's interest. I've said it before, you write in such a natural way that the supernatural seems so plausible.
In my opinion, walking through the stile, is a great, natural sounding, and well timed addition to the story.
The ladder incident, is an interesting element; and what is 'Devil's spawn?' sounds creepy. I'll just have to wait and see. Great writing there my friend.
~Mel~ xxxx
Comment Written 11-Oct-2017
reply by the author on 12-Oct-2017
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Thank you so very much for the lovely six stars and fabulous review, Mel!!! Your review is such a wonderful compliment, and I can't thank you enough. Answers to a few questions coming up in the next part. Big hugs, my friend. xx Sandra xx
Comment from Pam (respa)
-Very nice image.
-A very good chapter, Sandra.
-Ver. has a good conversation
with Daveth to begin.
-He seems to pick things
up quickly, as he wants to
travel in the future to see Ann.
-The rest of the story is told
very well through the conversation
between Ver. and Joe.
-It is at the end of this discussion
that we learn what it is that Joe saw.
-It is told very dramatically so
we can feel the tension building.
-It will be interesting to see what
happens next!
reply by the author on 12-Oct-2017
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-Very nice image.
-A very good chapter, Sandra.
-Ver. has a good conversation
with Daveth to begin.
-He seems to pick things
up quickly, as he wants to
travel in the future to see Ann.
-The rest of the story is told
very well through the conversation
between Ver. and Joe.
-It is at the end of this discussion
that we learn what it is that Joe saw.
-It is told very dramatically so
we can feel the tension building.
-It will be interesting to see what
happens next!
Comment Written 11-Oct-2017
reply by the author on 12-Oct-2017
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Hi, Pam, thank you so much, my dear friend. Where would I be without you? The 6 stars are always such a pleasure to see, but your words mean so much more. The next part will be very.... LOL, Big hugs and much love, my dear friend. :) Sandra xxxxx
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You are very welcome and deserving of the stars and review, Sandra. I am sure the next part will be intriguing, as you have set us up well, my friend. With time travel back, anything is possible!
Comment from rspoet
Hello Sandra,
Ah, now we are back to where the heart of the story lies
in the past, both serious and humorous.
I would imagine Joe did think he had seen the spawn of evil,
What he saw puts him in danger, but at the same time,
it gives him leverage against the temper of Sir John.
He could, after all, reveal what he'd seen if he were to be kicked out of his home.
But I suspect a better solution lies in the mission church and the albino there
who is the opposite of the spawn of evil.
Fear of the unknown is at the root of prejudice.
This is an excellent chapter, both the conversation with Daveth about future travel,
Joe trying the explain to an unbelieving Rosie (it seems Joe isn't as good a story teller as Sandra), and the revelation of what Joe saw.
The scene at the stile was perfect, though I'm not sure how many people in the US will know what a stile is.
Love that picture, I'm ready to move in!
Great chapter, my friend
RS
reply by the author on 12-Oct-2017
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Hello Sandra,
Ah, now we are back to where the heart of the story lies
in the past, both serious and humorous.
I would imagine Joe did think he had seen the spawn of evil,
What he saw puts him in danger, but at the same time,
it gives him leverage against the temper of Sir John.
He could, after all, reveal what he'd seen if he were to be kicked out of his home.
But I suspect a better solution lies in the mission church and the albino there
who is the opposite of the spawn of evil.
Fear of the unknown is at the root of prejudice.
This is an excellent chapter, both the conversation with Daveth about future travel,
Joe trying the explain to an unbelieving Rosie (it seems Joe isn't as good a story teller as Sandra), and the revelation of what Joe saw.
The scene at the stile was perfect, though I'm not sure how many people in the US will know what a stile is.
Love that picture, I'm ready to move in!
Great chapter, my friend
RS
Comment Written 11-Oct-2017
reply by the author on 12-Oct-2017
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I think we should be able to award stars for reviewers who write lovely reviews and not just for finding the nits. Thank you so much, Robert, this was lovely and the 6 stars are the icing on the cake. I'll go and tidy up the cottage for you, it's a bit dusty at the moment, lol! Don't you have 'stiles' in America? We have them in farms and woodlands for walkers. I'm really pleased you enjoyed this part, the next is going to be ... fun? Hmmm. Big hugs, my friend. :) Sandra xxxx
Comment from l.raven
HI Sandra, are you kidding???...what were looking right back at him????...whisper in my ear...just a hint...he better hurry and tell her...before she ends up in Oz...that poor woman...well at least their talking...face to face...now once you tell me what he saw...I'll sleep better tonight...just whisper...LOL...this is a great chapter sweet angel...and I enjoyed reading it...very well written...and I love the picture...loveeeee you so Linda xxoo
I hope all is well on the home front...Ian should be getting ready for his trip...and praying he is feeling better...all of you take care...amd say hi to him for me...xxoo love
reply by the author on 11-Oct-2017
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HI Sandra, are you kidding???...what were looking right back at him????...whisper in my ear...just a hint...he better hurry and tell her...before she ends up in Oz...that poor woman...well at least their talking...face to face...now once you tell me what he saw...I'll sleep better tonight...just whisper...LOL...this is a great chapter sweet angel...and I enjoyed reading it...very well written...and I love the picture...loveeeee you so Linda xxoo
I hope all is well on the home front...Ian should be getting ready for his trip...and praying he is feeling better...all of you take care...amd say hi to him for me...xxoo love
Comment Written 11-Oct-2017
reply by the author on 11-Oct-2017
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LOL LOL LOL! I've just got in and yours is the poem I had to read first. LOL!! I've just sent you a whisper, don't tell anyone else, do you hear me?? LOL. I love your reviews, my dear Lida Thank you so very much, those wonderful shiny stars will look super in my hair, lol! Big hugs, my dear friend. Sandra. xxxxx
Ian goes on holiday on Friday, which happens to be the 13th .... do you think I should stop him?? I've told him to be very careful while he is on his holiday, I don't want him doing anything that might put him back in hospital again. The wheelchair is ready, everything oiled as they should be, and the tires are blown l and everything that will make his holiday as perfect as possible. Dear me, I do hope and pray he'll be alright. My eyes ae bright but the body is unwilling. YThank you my dear friend, It's a beautifull review, and such fun. Big hugs and lots of love.! xxx Sandra. xxxx
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OK...can you whisper just a little bit louder....I think I'm going deaf...LOL...
not to worry about Ian...he will be fine...you got him all ready for his trip...all you didn't do was put a motor on his wheel chair...LOL...and I know if you could you would...LOL...God is right there with him...believe that...and my sister was born on Friday the 13th...LOL...your sooooo welcome sweet angel...biggest hugs and love to you...Hi to Ian for me...and have a safe trip...but fun...xxoo
Comment from apky
Sorry I've been MIA here lately and only have a couple of hours a week to review.
Seems I've missed a chapter with Daveth and Sir John, and might have to go back some time to read it - I enjoy this story and dislike missing any chapters.
In any case I enjoyed this one and found nothing to correct or comment on. Hope it's not because I read it too fast!
Best,
Aki
reply by the author on 11-Oct-2017
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Sorry I've been MIA here lately and only have a couple of hours a week to review.
Seems I've missed a chapter with Daveth and Sir John, and might have to go back some time to read it - I enjoy this story and dislike missing any chapters.
In any case I enjoyed this one and found nothing to correct or comment on. Hope it's not because I read it too fast!
Best,
Aki
Comment Written 11-Oct-2017
reply by the author on 11-Oct-2017
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LOL, thanks, Aki, you really are rushing around, aren't you?? Life gets in the way sometimes and we need to go with it. Thank you so much for stopping by, I do truly appreciate it, my friend. I'm glad you enjoyed it. Big hugs! :) Sandra xx
Comment from JDRBAR
I don't know how you do it, but your story just keeps getting better. Needless to say, if there were any nits, I didn't see them. You are such a good writer.
reply by the author on 11-Oct-2017
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I don't know how you do it, but your story just keeps getting better. Needless to say, if there were any nits, I didn't see them. You are such a good writer.
Comment Written 11-Oct-2017
reply by the author on 11-Oct-2017
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Aww, thank you! The 6 stars are just the topping on your wonderful review. Thank you for both. :) Big hugs. xxx Sandra x
