God's Presense
In the stillness I find him......7 total reviews
Comment from victoria smith/osley
Hello, I am the artist and am humbled you chose my painting for your tetractys! I like the words and idea you gave it! Super job and keep on creating!
reply by the author on 18-Oct-2017
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Hello, I am the artist and am humbled you chose my painting for your tetractys! I like the words and idea you gave it! Super job and keep on creating!
Comment Written 10-Oct-2017
reply by the author on 18-Oct-2017
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Thank you so much for the excellent review and kind comments. Your painting is just beautiful and the painting
just called me to a place of stillness. Thank you again for allowing me to use it.
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written Tetractys. We need to be silent and peaceful to be able to hear God's voice and feel His presence. At the end it will be all worthwhile to get silent in ourselves.
reply by the author on 18-Oct-2017
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A very well-written Tetractys. We need to be silent and peaceful to be able to hear God's voice and feel His presence. At the end it will be all worthwhile to get silent in ourselves.
Comment Written 10-Oct-2017
reply by the author on 18-Oct-2017
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Thank you so much for the excellent review and kind comments. Sorry this took so long to get to you.
Hope you are having a great week!
Comment from Aspiredwriterdeeje
This made me wish there was more. Few words that created a wonderful image. Never stop waiting on Him! Maybe you could use this idea and create something longer. Just an idea.
reply by the author on 18-Oct-2017
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This made me wish there was more. Few words that created a wonderful image. Never stop waiting on Him! Maybe you could use this idea and create something longer. Just an idea.
Comment Written 09-Oct-2017
reply by the author on 18-Oct-2017
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Thank you so much for the excellent review and kind words. Sorry for the delay in sending you this reply.
Hope you are having a great week!
Comment from DonandVicki
Indeed! it is in the stillness that we will head and Find God, it is also the one place that if we listen closely that we can hear him speak to us. The artwork complements your excellent poem.
reply by the author on 18-Oct-2017
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Indeed! it is in the stillness that we will head and Find God, it is also the one place that if we listen closely that we can hear him speak to us. The artwork complements your excellent poem.
Comment Written 09-Oct-2017
reply by the author on 18-Oct-2017
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Thank you so much for the excellent review and your great comments. Sorry for the delay in sending you this reply.
Hope you are having a great week!
Comment from Teri7
This is a very beautiful and well written Tetractys poem you have penned for the contest. You used very good wording and the art work was so beautiful. Best wishes in the contest. Teri
reply by the author on 09-Oct-2017
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This is a very beautiful and well written Tetractys poem you have penned for the contest. You used very good wording and the art work was so beautiful. Best wishes in the contest. Teri
Comment Written 08-Oct-2017
reply by the author on 09-Oct-2017
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Thank you Teri - hope you are doing well. I am so glad you liked the poem. I took a break for a while - I am glad
to be back. Have good week! And thank you again for your excellent review.
Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
This speaks the space and place in still state deep within the stillness poet will find God to speak to get an experience of finding the gracious presence of God; I liked.
reply by the author on 09-Oct-2017
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This speaks the space and place in still state deep within the stillness poet will find God to speak to get an experience of finding the gracious presence of God; I liked.
Comment Written 08-Oct-2017
reply by the author on 09-Oct-2017
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Thank you for the excellent review and your exceptional comments. I am so glad you liked the poem.
Have a great week!
Comment from Bill Schott
This tetractys, God's Presence, has the wrong set up for this poetic format. The 1,2,3,4,10 form is not entirely represented here. Your second and third lines need revision.
reply by the author on 08-Oct-2017
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This tetractys, God's Presence, has the wrong set up for this poetic format. The 1,2,3,4,10 form is not entirely represented here. Your second and third lines need revision.
Comment Written 08-Oct-2017
reply by the author on 08-Oct-2017
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Hi Bill, Somehow everything I tried to do tonight went wrong. The poem did not go to preview when I saved it. Then I read
the poem over and realized all that you said above! Thank you for the 4 stars. I also cannot change the last line to have the
same background color. I guess I have to come more often and get back into the routine. Thank you, Maria
