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Comment from Mustang Patty
Hi, there;
thank you for sharing your entry in the Loop Poetry contest. You've managed meet the requirements of the 'looping part,' but you didn't meet the rhyme; 'There is a rhyme scheme. The rhyme scheme is abcb.'
~patty~
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reply by the author on 11-Oct-2017
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Hi, there;
thank you for sharing your entry in the Loop Poetry contest. You've managed meet the requirements of the 'looping part,' but you didn't meet the rhyme; 'There is a rhyme scheme. The rhyme scheme is abcb.'
~patty~
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Comment Written 10-Oct-2017
reply by the author on 11-Oct-2017
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Thank you very much, " You've managed meet the requirements' sounds and reads like we both need encouragement****kahpot
Comment from evesayshi
In my opinion, an impressive work, well constructed in its adherence to the prompt - I wrote only one loop poem because I found the effort annoying - congrats for your commitment, pertinent and timely write...
reply by the author on 12-Oct-2017
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In my opinion, an impressive work, well constructed in its adherence to the prompt - I wrote only one loop poem because I found the effort annoying - congrats for your commitment, pertinent and timely write...
Comment Written 10-Oct-2017
reply by the author on 12-Oct-2017
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Thank you, I read your work very often, and believe you have a lot to say please don't stop having a go at this form your last word "EFFORT there is a start ****kahpot
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You are very welcome indeed, and I cannot thank you enough for your comments and encouraging words - what a sensitive soul and wonderfully nice human being you are...Eve
Comment from Lucian Carter
This is nice loop poetry. It feels completely natural as you read it. The form doesn't jump out at you. As far as I'm concerned that makes a good poem. The subject matter is interesting, but the style set it apart.
reply by the author on 12-Oct-2017
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This is nice loop poetry. It feels completely natural as you read it. The form doesn't jump out at you. As far as I'm concerned that makes a good poem. The subject matter is interesting, but the style set it apart.
Comment Written 10-Oct-2017
reply by the author on 12-Oct-2017
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Thank you very much, I am trying new forms, many thanks****kahpot
Comment from Leena
This is such an interesting entry to the contest. The message so true and has been conveyed in perfect flow, using the loops. Very well-done! Good luck for the contest.
reply by the author on 12-Oct-2017
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This is such an interesting entry to the contest. The message so true and has been conveyed in perfect flow, using the loops. Very well-done! Good luck for the contest.
Comment Written 10-Oct-2017
reply by the author on 12-Oct-2017
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Thank you very much for this excellent review****kahpot
Comment from RGstar
Good strong write, and sensibly so. Your looping works well here, you can tell when it works for you hardly notice it, except the steady flow of the narrative giving concentration on the whole.
Well done.
A lot of truths here.
Best wishes.
RGstar
reply by the author on 12-Oct-2017
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Good strong write, and sensibly so. Your looping works well here, you can tell when it works for you hardly notice it, except the steady flow of the narrative giving concentration on the whole.
Well done.
A lot of truths here.
Best wishes.
RGstar
Comment Written 10-Oct-2017
reply by the author on 12-Oct-2017
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Thank you very much, very inspirational ****kahpot
Comment from Mimi Linny
This is a very nicely written piece of Loop Poetry. It has a smooth rhythm and flow to its entirety and, to me, makes a great entry for the Loop Poetry contest. Very well done - good luck in the contest!
reply by the author on 12-Oct-2017
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This is a very nicely written piece of Loop Poetry. It has a smooth rhythm and flow to its entirety and, to me, makes a great entry for the Loop Poetry contest. Very well done - good luck in the contest!
Comment Written 10-Oct-2017
reply by the author on 12-Oct-2017
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Thank very much for your excellent review****kahpot
Comment from Heather Knight
I do agree with everything you say in this poem. I don't know if they are all like this, but they don't seem to care about us.
I like the repetition in loops poems a lot.
Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 12-Oct-2017
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I do agree with everything you say in this poem. I don't know if they are all like this, but they don't seem to care about us.
I like the repetition in loops poems a lot.
Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 10-Oct-2017
reply by the author on 12-Oct-2017
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Thank you very much, and yes it is hard to tell if they are all the same****kahpot
Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
This speaks the farcical and autocratic practice of governance, politicians forgetting and waving the freedom of right, right to live and citizens' rights helping politicians in unison; I liked.
reply by the author on 12-Oct-2017
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This speaks the farcical and autocratic practice of governance, politicians forgetting and waving the freedom of right, right to live and citizens' rights helping politicians in unison; I liked.
Comment Written 10-Oct-2017
reply by the author on 12-Oct-2017
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Thank you very much****kahpot
Comment from GWinterwin
Yes I agree that we as the common man don't mean much to politicians. Maybe things will get better in time, our country has been on a downward spiral for quite some time.
reply by the author on 12-Oct-2017
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Yes I agree that we as the common man don't mean much to politicians. Maybe things will get better in time, our country has been on a downward spiral for quite some time.
Comment Written 10-Oct-2017
reply by the author on 12-Oct-2017
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Thank you very much, and yes yours and all countries****kahpot
Comment from MissMerri
This is very clever, and I know from experience, it isn't easy to do well. I think you've managed this difficult form quite well. Now if only our politicians could do half as well. Good luck in the contest. You seem to have met the criteria, and made a lot of sense in the process. I enjoyed it. MM
reply by the author on 10-Oct-2017
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This is very clever, and I know from experience, it isn't easy to do well. I think you've managed this difficult form quite well. Now if only our politicians could do half as well. Good luck in the contest. You seem to have met the criteria, and made a lot of sense in the process. I enjoyed it. MM
Comment Written 10-Oct-2017
reply by the author on 10-Oct-2017
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Thank you very much and yes I wish the politicians could do a lot better****kahpot
