Love Mate
Marriage works for us10 total reviews
Comment from Brigitte Elko
You penned a perfect work. It adheres strictly to the prompt. I love the picture you choose which reflects the love in the intertwining. No negatives or advice on this one. It is perfect.
Fan Friend,
Brigitte
reply by the author on 06-Oct-2017
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You penned a perfect work. It adheres strictly to the prompt. I love the picture you choose which reflects the love in the intertwining. No negatives or advice on this one. It is perfect.
Fan Friend,
Brigitte
Comment Written 06-Oct-2017
reply by the author on 06-Oct-2017
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Thank you, Brigitte, for the read and the kind words.
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Keep writing and I will keep reading.
Brigitte
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Thank you for your encouragement.
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
Hello, my friend,
Nice 5/7/5 romance poem. The presentation is attractive and easy to read. The syllable count is right. Good job.
She is my love-mate 5
we fit together nicely 7
now and forever 5
reply by the author on 06-Oct-2017
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Hello, my friend,
Nice 5/7/5 romance poem. The presentation is attractive and easy to read. The syllable count is right. Good job.
She is my love-mate 5
we fit together nicely 7
now and forever 5
Comment Written 06-Oct-2017
reply by the author on 06-Oct-2017
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Thanks for the read and the review.
Comment from ragerde
The sentiment of this short poem is a nice match to the artwork selected. The bonds of the relationship are clearly expressed within the three line frame.
reply by the author on 06-Oct-2017
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The sentiment of this short poem is a nice match to the artwork selected. The bonds of the relationship are clearly expressed within the three line frame.
Comment Written 06-Oct-2017
reply by the author on 06-Oct-2017
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Thank you for the read and the review.
Comment from angel123
Your poem flows well with love and I enjoyed reading it. Your artwork choice is wonderful. It goes well with your message. Good luck in the contest. Best wishes!
reply by the author on 06-Oct-2017
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Your poem flows well with love and I enjoyed reading it. Your artwork choice is wonderful. It goes well with your message. Good luck in the contest. Best wishes!
Comment Written 06-Oct-2017
reply by the author on 06-Oct-2017
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Thanks for the read and the encouraging words.
Comment from Kerry Foley Robinson
This is such a sweet 5-7-5 poem you've penned. a wonderful picture to go along with it. I love "Shes my love-mate", good luck! ~Kerry
reply by the author on 06-Oct-2017
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This is such a sweet 5-7-5 poem you've penned. a wonderful picture to go along with it. I love "Shes my love-mate", good luck! ~Kerry
Comment Written 06-Oct-2017
reply by the author on 06-Oct-2017
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Thank you for the read and the comments.
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written 5-7-5 romance poem. We can count ourselves lucky when we find the perfect mate to love and live with forever. There are far too many Marriages that end upbin the divorce court.
reply by the author on 06-Oct-2017
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A very well-written 5-7-5 romance poem. We can count ourselves lucky when we find the perfect mate to love and live with forever. There are far too many Marriages that end upbin the divorce court.
Comment Written 06-Oct-2017
reply by the author on 06-Oct-2017
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Thank you for your read and comments. I agree with your point on divorce.
Comment from Cybertron1986
Cleverly written given the conditions and limitations. Love the choice of words focusing on time and compatibility which is relative to the reader. Beautiful!
reply by the author on 06-Oct-2017
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Cleverly written given the conditions and limitations. Love the choice of words focusing on time and compatibility which is relative to the reader. Beautiful!
Comment Written 06-Oct-2017
reply by the author on 06-Oct-2017
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Thank you for your read and your comments. Very encouraging.
Comment from marybell1
I enjoyed reading your 5-7-5 romance poem "Love Mate ". You followed all the rules for this genre and you chose colourful art.
All the best in the contest.
Marybell1.
reply by the author on 06-Oct-2017
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I enjoyed reading your 5-7-5 romance poem "Love Mate ". You followed all the rules for this genre and you chose colourful art.
All the best in the contest.
Marybell1.
Comment Written 06-Oct-2017
reply by the author on 06-Oct-2017
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Thanks for your read and your review.
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You are most welcome.
Marybell1.
Comment from rspoet
This is a fine poem and entry for the contest
with the required 5-7-5 syllables
It is bit more like lost love than romance,
but the metaphor of the footprints in sand is very good
Excellent picture to match
Nicely done
Good luck in the contest
RS
reply by the author on 05-Oct-2017
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This is a fine poem and entry for the contest
with the required 5-7-5 syllables
It is bit more like lost love than romance,
but the metaphor of the footprints in sand is very good
Excellent picture to match
Nicely done
Good luck in the contest
RS
Comment Written 05-Oct-2017
reply by the author on 05-Oct-2017
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I withdrew this poem it was entitled "Washed Away" because I thought it did not fit the rules. It was lost love rather than romantic love. Thank you for the review.
Comment from RodG
Even decades later, the image of footprints being washed away in the sand reminds me of Pat Boone and "Love Letters in the Sand." Good description of the waves "curl[ing] and nice use of W-alliteration.
reply by the author on 05-Oct-2017
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Even decades later, the image of footprints being washed away in the sand reminds me of Pat Boone and "Love Letters in the Sand." Good description of the waves "curl[ing] and nice use of W-alliteration.
Comment Written 05-Oct-2017
reply by the author on 05-Oct-2017
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I withdrew this poem it was entitled "Washed Away" because I thought it did not fit the rules. It was lost love rather than romantic love. Thank you for the review.
