Autumn twilight
15 syllables4 total reviews
Comment from Bill Schott
This fifteen-syllable poem, Autumn Twilight, has the proper amount of syllables and fills the page with the words and image of those migrating fowl which block out the setting sun.
reply by the author on 09-Oct-2017
This fifteen-syllable poem, Autumn Twilight, has the proper amount of syllables and fills the page with the words and image of those migrating fowl which block out the setting sun.
Comment Written 08-Oct-2017
reply by the author on 09-Oct-2017
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Thanks for reading and critique zanya
Comment from BeasPeas
This is very nice. It sets a mood, both in illustration and words. Tranquil and serious 15-syllable poem about autumn. Nicely done entry for the contest. Marilyn
reply by the author on 09-Oct-2017
This is very nice. It sets a mood, both in illustration and words. Tranquil and serious 15-syllable poem about autumn. Nicely done entry for the contest. Marilyn
Comment Written 05-Oct-2017
reply by the author on 09-Oct-2017
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Thanks for such an engaging review zanya
Comment from Mustang Patty
Hello Anonymous Poet;
thank you for sharing this entry in the fifteen syllable poetry contest. Within the limited syllable count, there is a clear and coherent thought. The presentation is pleasing, and goes well with the subject.
~patty~
reply by the author on 09-Oct-2017
Hello Anonymous Poet;
thank you for sharing this entry in the fifteen syllable poetry contest. Within the limited syllable count, there is a clear and coherent thought. The presentation is pleasing, and goes well with the subject.
~patty~
Comment Written 04-Oct-2017
reply by the author on 09-Oct-2017
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Thanks for the critique zanya
Comment from marybell1
I enjoyed reading your fifteen syllable poem "Autumn Twilight". You followed all the rules for this genre and you chose a very appropriate picture.
All the best.
Marybell1.
reply by the author on 09-Oct-2017
I enjoyed reading your fifteen syllable poem "Autumn Twilight". You followed all the rules for this genre and you chose a very appropriate picture.
All the best.
Marybell1.
Comment Written 04-Oct-2017
reply by the author on 09-Oct-2017
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Thanks for reading and critique zanya
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You are most welcome.
Marybell1.