Comment from Bill Schott

Excellent

This fifteen-syllable poem, Autumn Twilight, has the proper amount of syllables and fills the page with the words and image of those migrating fowl which block out the setting sun.

 Comment Written 08-Oct-2017

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reply by the author on 09-Oct-2017

Thanks for reading and critique zanya

Comment from BeasPeas

Excellent

This is very nice. It sets a mood, both in illustration and words. Tranquil and serious 15-syllable poem about autumn. Nicely done entry for the contest. Marilyn

 Comment Written 05-Oct-2017

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reply by the author on 09-Oct-2017

Thanks for such an engaging review zanya

Comment from Mustang Patty

Excellent

Hello Anonymous Poet;
thank you for sharing this entry in the fifteen syllable poetry contest. Within the limited syllable count, there is a clear and coherent thought. The presentation is pleasing, and goes well with the subject.

~patty~

 Comment Written 04-Oct-2017

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reply by the author on 09-Oct-2017

Thanks for the critique zanya

Comment from marybell1

Excellent

I enjoyed reading your fifteen syllable poem "Autumn Twilight". You followed all the rules for this genre and you chose a very appropriate picture.
All the best.
Marybell1.

 Comment Written 04-Oct-2017

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reply by the author on 09-Oct-2017

Thanks for reading and critique zanya

reply by marybell1 on 10-Oct-2017

You are most welcome.
Marybell1.