from my window
haiku 4/7/428 total reviews
Comment from Rasmine
Hi, Marival,
Is this the scene from your window? I really don't miss the city, but in a way I do. Did you live in the city before?
Good haiku! :D Are you still doing the challenges? I looked but didn't see any since June. Maybe I missed it or something.
Take care, happy autumn!
Nome
reply by the author on 06-Oct-2017
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Hi, Marival,
Is this the scene from your window? I really don't miss the city, but in a way I do. Did you live in the city before?
Good haiku! :D Are you still doing the challenges? I looked but didn't see any since June. Maybe I missed it or something.
Take care, happy autumn!
Nome
Comment Written 05-Oct-2017
reply by the author on 06-Oct-2017
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Thank you, Nome,, I appreciate you took the time to review my poem.
Comment from Heather Knight
I love the way you write and present your haikus. They seem easy, but they are not.
I sometimes make my students write haikus in class, it's quite a lot of fun.
Thanks for sharing.
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I love the way you write and present your haikus. They seem easy, but they are not.
I sometimes make my students write haikus in class, it's quite a lot of fun.
Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 05-Oct-2017
reply by the author on 06-Oct-2017
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Thank you, Maria Jose,, I appreciate you took the time to review my poem.
Comment from Father Flaps
Good Morning, Gypsy
I enjoyed your haiku, the friendly trees waving to you on a busy city street. Autumn breezes blow good thoughts, and that's what we all need these days. We could all take a lesson from nature.
I count 4-7-4, and that's fine. I like the alliteration with "w"... "window/watch/wave/wind".
Nicely penned!
Hugs,
Kimbob
reply by the author on 06-Oct-2017
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Good Morning, Gypsy
I enjoyed your haiku, the friendly trees waving to you on a busy city street. Autumn breezes blow good thoughts, and that's what we all need these days. We could all take a lesson from nature.
I count 4-7-4, and that's fine. I like the alliteration with "w"... "window/watch/wave/wind".
Nicely penned!
Hugs,
Kimbob
Comment Written 05-Oct-2017
reply by the author on 06-Oct-2017
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Thank you, Kimbob,, I appreciate you took the time to review my poem.
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written haiku. We can see more much from our window when we care to look outside. The wind in the trees bring a swift breezes that bring on the Autumn season.
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A very well-written haiku. We can see more much from our window when we care to look outside. The wind in the trees bring a swift breezes that bring on the Autumn season.
Comment Written 05-Oct-2017
reply by the author on 06-Oct-2017
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Thank you, Sandra,, I appreciate you took the time to review my poem.
Comment from DR DIP
from my window,
I watch trees wave in the wind--
swift autumn breeze
Nice pleasant view from your window Gypsy . Interesting view Gypsy it must be from a overhead bridge. I think the photo aptly suits your words Haiku is slowly growing on me but not all thanks for sharing
dip
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from my window,
I watch trees wave in the wind--
swift autumn breeze
Nice pleasant view from your window Gypsy . Interesting view Gypsy it must be from a overhead bridge. I think the photo aptly suits your words Haiku is slowly growing on me but not all thanks for sharing
dip
Comment Written 05-Oct-2017
reply by the author on 06-Oct-2017
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Thank you, Dr Dip,, I appreciate you took the time to review my poem.
Comment from Mitchell Brontė
Hi Gypsy
You are a real master at these Haikus and are always a pleasure to read, the images you paint are always so clearly defined.......... autumn has arrived.
Mitchell
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Hi Gypsy
You are a real master at these Haikus and are always a pleasure to read, the images you paint are always so clearly defined.......... autumn has arrived.
Mitchell
Comment Written 05-Oct-2017
reply by the author on 06-Oct-2017
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Thank you, Mitchell,, I appreciate you took the time to review my poem.
Comment from sandy montgomery
I like the structure of this piece. The presentation is lovely. Nice satori which reinforces your whole piece. I love the opening line which gives the poem a wistful quality. Thank you for sharing your work.
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I like the structure of this piece. The presentation is lovely. Nice satori which reinforces your whole piece. I love the opening line which gives the poem a wistful quality. Thank you for sharing your work.
Comment Written 04-Oct-2017
reply by the author on 06-Oct-2017
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Thank you, Sandy,, I appreciate you took the time to review my poem.
Comment from DonandVicki
Finally, we can all open our windows and enjoy the autumn breeze. Summer is finally fading away. Nicely written Gypsy. The picture reminds me of San Francisco. I will be in the Bay area week after next. Cant wait.
reply by the author on 06-Oct-2017
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Finally, we can all open our windows and enjoy the autumn breeze. Summer is finally fading away. Nicely written Gypsy. The picture reminds me of San Francisco. I will be in the Bay area week after next. Cant wait.
Comment Written 04-Oct-2017
reply by the author on 06-Oct-2017
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Thank you, Don,, I appreciate you took the time to review my poem.
Comment from l.raven
HI Gypsy, I watch the wind blow the other day ...you could feel the cold breeze of autumn blowing through the trees...and the leaves are starting to change...I love your poem sweet angel...so very nicely written...and love this picture...love you...Linda xxoo
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HI Gypsy, I watch the wind blow the other day ...you could feel the cold breeze of autumn blowing through the trees...and the leaves are starting to change...I love your poem sweet angel...so very nicely written...and love this picture...love you...Linda xxoo
Comment Written 04-Oct-2017
reply by the author on 06-Oct-2017
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Thank you, Linda, I appreciate you took the time to review my poem. love you
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your always so welcome you...love xxoo
Comment from Dean Kuch
This is a "true" haiku in every sense of the word.
From the 4-7-4 syllable count demonstrating excellent balance, to the solid, concrete imagery demonstrated in lines one and two, the simplicity of this harkens back to the haiku of old written by haiku masters like Basho and Yosa Buson.
It is written just as you experienced it and your satori, or 'Ah-ha!' line is both invigorating as well as enlightening.
Bravo, MariVal!
~Dean
reply by the author on 06-Oct-2017
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This is a "true" haiku in every sense of the word.
From the 4-7-4 syllable count demonstrating excellent balance, to the solid, concrete imagery demonstrated in lines one and two, the simplicity of this harkens back to the haiku of old written by haiku masters like Basho and Yosa Buson.
It is written just as you experienced it and your satori, or 'Ah-ha!' line is both invigorating as well as enlightening.
Bravo, MariVal!
~Dean
Comment Written 04-Oct-2017
reply by the author on 06-Oct-2017
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Thank you, Dean, I really appreciate that you took the time to read and review my tiny poem and the six stars. Thank you, honey.
MariVal
