My Book of Poems 2010-2017
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Comment from Mitchell Brontė
How wonderful that you have been inspired to write this katauta after watching a sad movie.
Such sentiments and longing throughout and a wonderful final line that completes it so well.
Mitchell
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reply by the author on 03-Oct-2017
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How wonderful that you have been inspired to write this katauta after watching a sad movie.
Such sentiments and longing throughout and a wonderful final line that completes it so well.
Mitchell
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Comment Written 03-Oct-2017
reply by the author on 03-Oct-2017
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Hi Mitchell;
this one practically wrote itself. As I thought about the movie, it just flowed,
~patty~
