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2018 Bernie and Howie Stories

Viewing comments for Chapter 12 "Bernie and Howie celebrate Fall"
...stories and poems about the boys

36 total reviews 
Comment from Rasmine
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TY! I did enjoy it, how cute!

My favorite part, and remember doing the exact thing as a human child, maybe I'm part dog: :P
Turning around, he ran for a distance, and then turned and rushed the pile. Burrowing under the pile like he did in the blankets on the bed, he relished the feel of dirt and debris on his fur. He continued to run and rush.

 Comment Written 04-Oct-2017


reply by the author on 04-Oct-2017
    Hi Rasmine;
    thank you so much for reading and enjoying the latest Bernie and Howie adventure. They are so much fun and great little muses!

    ~patty~
Comment from Heather Knight
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This was a very enjoyable read. I liked the fact that even though it is written in the third person, it is told from Bernie's point of view.
It reminded me of the way my dog, Becka, behaves when we are going out.
Thanks for sharing.

 Comment Written 04-Oct-2017


reply by the author on 04-Oct-2017
    Hi Maria;
    thank you so much for reading and enjoying the latest Bernie and Howie adventure. They are so much fun and great little muses!

    ~patty~
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
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Patty,
I enjoyed this fun tale of the dogs running in the coolness of Fall. The lead up to it ws great. My favorite part was the leaf pile. That would be fun to see in real life. But you described it so well that I felt like I was there. Great job. Thanks for sharing. Jan

 Comment Written 04-Oct-2017


reply by the author on 04-Oct-2017
    Hi Jan;
    thank you so much for reading and enjoying the latest Bernie and Howie adventure. They are so much fun and great little muses!

    ~patty~
Comment from dejohnsrld (Debbie)
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I love these. If I ever find time, I need to type Katie Jo's next story. She tells it well, but her toenails make it hard to type. Enjoyable story, my friend~Debbie

 Comment Written 03-Oct-2017


reply by the author on 04-Oct-2017
    Hi Debbie;
    thank you so much for reading and enjoying the latest Bernie and Howie adventure. They are so much fun and great little muses!

    ~patty~
Comment from kiwigirl2821
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Hi Patty. These two dogs are the best ever in a story. They are so cute and you know we can all feel and see how they love not only their mistress but each other and PLAY! lol Great story! Nice to see something that doesn't make me think so much as feel. xoxo d

 Comment Written 03-Oct-2017


reply by the author on 03-Oct-2017
    Hi deborah; writing about the dogs and their silliness keeps me from watching the news or checking in on Facebook or Twitter. I can't believe how I can actually feel my blood pressure come down when I pet my little guys --- the world is just too scary now,

    ~patty~
reply by kiwigirl2821 on 03-Oct-2017
    boy oh boy do I know it!
Comment from Curly Girly
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This was a fun story for kids to read. A tale about two dogs with happy tails. Going for a walk and the exciting things they see and do. All good until next time. Excercise is such fun--especially for dogs. They just love it.
Nicole

 Comment Written 03-Oct-2017


reply by the author on 03-Oct-2017
    Hi Nicole;
    I'm so glad you enjoyed the latest adventure for Bernie and Howie. I appreciate your time to read and review,

    ~patty~
Comment from barbara.wilkey
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I'm a huge animal lover, especially dogs. That's why there's a dog is all my novels. I really enjoyed reading about your four legged animal friends. Please keep these two stories up.

 Comment Written 03-Oct-2017


reply by the author on 03-Oct-2017
    Hi Barbara;
    thank you so much for reading Bernie and Howie's latest adventure. I love writing about my little 'boys.'

    ~patty~
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
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Hello, Patty,

This chapter is adorable. I love how you interpret what Bernie and Howie are thinking...it makes sense. I can picture them all excited because they are going out with their mistress. Well done.

 Comment Written 03-Oct-2017


reply by the author on 03-Oct-2017
    Hi Gypsy;
    thank you so much for reading and reviewing this dog tale. Howie and Bernie are always up to inspire me to write, do chores, go for walks, lol.

    ~patty~
Comment from Teri7
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Another very cute Bernie and Howie story you have penned. I bet they are so much fun to have around. You used very good descriptive wording and imagery. Blessings, Teri

 Comment Written 03-Oct-2017


reply by the author on 03-Oct-2017
    Hi Teri;
    thank you for reading another of Howie and Bernie's adventures. They are all worn out, and just sleeping beside me as I read. They are truly a blessing to me,

    ~patty~
Comment from lyenochka
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They are so well behaved. I like how you start with the typical way that dogs clue into sounds for what to expect next. Glad you could enjoy a cool walk with them and thanks for sharing all those details that every dog owner needs to do just to go on a walk!

 Comment Written 03-Oct-2017


reply by the author on 03-Oct-2017
    Hi;
    spending time with the boys is always fun, but I must say fall is the best. The weather is cooler, and the leaves are on the ground! We had a great time yesterday and today. Both of the dogs are exhausted!

    thanks for reading and reviewing,

    ~patty~