~ Magic Potion ~
A poem on LOVE9 total reviews
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written Love poem. There are always a special person who are able to touch you deeper than anyone else. There is certain things that are only allowed for a certain person.
reply by the author on 04-Oct-2017
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A very well-written Love poem. There are always a special person who are able to touch you deeper than anyone else. There is certain things that are only allowed for a certain person.
Comment Written 04-Oct-2017
reply by the author on 04-Oct-2017
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Thank you so much Sandra for the amazing comment and review. It means a lot to me. 😊
Comment from Teri7
This is a very sweet love poem you have penned. You used very good descriptive wording and very good imagery. Best wishes in the contest. Teri
reply by the author on 03-Oct-2017
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This is a very sweet love poem you have penned. You used very good descriptive wording and very good imagery. Best wishes in the contest. Teri
Comment Written 03-Oct-2017
reply by the author on 03-Oct-2017
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Thank you so much stopping by to read, comment and rate my poem. I'm very grateful and appreciative. This means a great deal.to me 😊
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you are so welcome!!!
Comment from Mustang Patty
Hi;
this is a good love poem that is full of emotion and fun. The lines move along in a kind of rough fashion, instead of the steady flow and fluidity of poetry.
I wish you luck in the contest,
~patty~
4 stars=Good
5 stars=Excellent
reply by the author on 03-Oct-2017
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Hi;
this is a good love poem that is full of emotion and fun. The lines move along in a kind of rough fashion, instead of the steady flow and fluidity of poetry.
I wish you luck in the contest,
~patty~
4 stars=Good
5 stars=Excellent
Comment Written 03-Oct-2017
reply by the author on 03-Oct-2017
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Thank you for your honesty. I respect that.
Comment from fastdigits
A poetic dance of words artistically choreographed that pirouettes down the page in the scenario of setting the stage for the unleashing of the passions that lie uncovered and waiting to be discovered.
Well done and good luck
reply by the author on 03-Oct-2017
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A poetic dance of words artistically choreographed that pirouettes down the page in the scenario of setting the stage for the unleashing of the passions that lie uncovered and waiting to be discovered.
Well done and good luck
Comment Written 03-Oct-2017
reply by the author on 03-Oct-2017
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Thank you so very much!! Your great comment and rating mean so much to me. Thank you for reading my piece.
Comment from c_lucas
The magic of your first love never leaves you. This is very well written with a smooth flow of words, making for a very interesting read. There is very good imagery.
reply by the author on 03-Oct-2017
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The magic of your first love never leaves you. This is very well written with a smooth flow of words, making for a very interesting read. There is very good imagery.
Comment Written 03-Oct-2017
reply by the author on 03-Oct-2017
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Thsnknyoh very much.
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You're welcome, Heidi. Charlie
Comment from dejohnsrld (Debbie)
I feel that you're being truly sincere (I would omit 'that')
To unlock my secret passions to you I'eve told (I've)
A sweet love poem, my friend. Best wishes in the contest~Debbie
reply by the author on 03-Oct-2017
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I feel that you're being truly sincere (I would omit 'that')
To unlock my secret passions to you I'eve told (I've)
A sweet love poem, my friend. Best wishes in the contest~Debbie
Comment Written 03-Oct-2017
reply by the author on 03-Oct-2017
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Thank you so much for the comment and rating as well as your honesty. That means a great deal to me.
Comment from marybell1
I enjoyed reading your love poem "Magic Potion". I liked your art work, but I thought not fitting for an adult poem. You rhymed it well except for verse four line four . An ' s ' alters the rhyming.
Marybell1.
reply by the author on 03-Oct-2017
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I enjoyed reading your love poem "Magic Potion". I liked your art work, but I thought not fitting for an adult poem. You rhymed it well except for verse four line four . An ' s ' alters the rhyming.
Marybell1.
Comment Written 03-Oct-2017
reply by the author on 03-Oct-2017
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Thank you so much for your comment and rating. It truly means the world to me. I'm always thankful for your honesty.
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You are most welcome.
Marybell1
Comment from jenintorre
A very nice feel good poem with very good content however. I think it needs editing
as some of the sentences are a little long and restrict the flow. Just my opinion though. Good luck in the competition.
reply by the author on 03-Oct-2017
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A very nice feel good poem with very good content however. I think it needs editing
as some of the sentences are a little long and restrict the flow. Just my opinion though. Good luck in the competition.
Comment Written 03-Oct-2017
reply by the author on 03-Oct-2017
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Thank you very much for rating and eating my poem. I also respect your honesty.
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Eating?
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Oops sorry....auto correct
Comment from Cybertron1986
Simple, cute, and projects a feeling of genuinely aspiring emotions that is supplemented with rhyme and word flow. I enjoyed it much. The "quiver" and "deliver" was very cute :)
reply by the author on 03-Oct-2017
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Simple, cute, and projects a feeling of genuinely aspiring emotions that is supplemented with rhyme and word flow. I enjoyed it much. The "quiver" and "deliver" was very cute :)
Comment Written 03-Oct-2017
reply by the author on 03-Oct-2017
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Thank you so very much for the amazing comment and high rating. It's more appreciative than you could possibly know.
