Neon Billboard
Just a memory39 total reviews
Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
This speaks of feeling the scintillation and romantic moods and manifestation out of memories that come on way to mind like haunts of passionate calling; I liked.
reply by the author on 14-Oct-2017
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This speaks of feeling the scintillation and romantic moods and manifestation out of memories that come on way to mind like haunts of passionate calling; I liked.
Comment Written 03-Oct-2017
reply by the author on 14-Oct-2017
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Thank you so much for your comments.
Comment from Kerry Foley Robinson
This is such a beautiful poem, cherishing the family moments:)
*I don't think you need the sexual content warning, lol, I imagine you hit the yes button by mistake, it happens, lol Well done, my friend. ~Kerry
reply by the author on 14-Oct-2017
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This is such a beautiful poem, cherishing the family moments:)
*I don't think you need the sexual content warning, lol, I imagine you hit the yes button by mistake, it happens, lol Well done, my friend. ~Kerry
Comment Written 03-Oct-2017
reply by the author on 14-Oct-2017
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Thank you for reading my work here and your encouraging comments. I need to write more!
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Your welcome, keep writing:)
Comment from Boogienights
These sound like nice memories,.Everyone has their own special recollections, each one precious. This is a great entry for the contest, I wish you the best of luck.
reply by the author on 14-Oct-2017
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These sound like nice memories,.Everyone has their own special recollections, each one precious. This is a great entry for the contest, I wish you the best of luck.
Comment Written 03-Oct-2017
reply by the author on 14-Oct-2017
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Thank you for your gracious comments.
Comment from dragonpoet
This gives a fun image of a big family sharing dinner. People almost always burn themselves on some hot food. Either hands or tongues.
I don't see the sexual content in this poem as the warning suggests.
Good luck and keep writing
dragonpoet
reply by the author on 15-Oct-2017
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This gives a fun image of a big family sharing dinner. People almost always burn themselves on some hot food. Either hands or tongues.
I don't see the sexual content in this poem as the warning suggests.
Good luck and keep writing
dragonpoet
Comment Written 03-Oct-2017
reply by the author on 15-Oct-2017
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Thank you for your review to billboard. Much appreciated.
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Don't mention it.
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Comment from Bill Schott
This poem on family, Neon Billboard, really touches on our fondest memories of our kids coming up from babies. The newness of discovery burst forth daily. Those times don't come again, except for grandparents.
reply by the author on 14-Oct-2017
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This poem on family, Neon Billboard, really touches on our fondest memories of our kids coming up from babies. The newness of discovery burst forth daily. Those times don't come again, except for grandparents.
Comment Written 03-Oct-2017
reply by the author on 14-Oct-2017
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Thank you for reading my work about nostalgia.
Comment from His Grayness
Wow! certainly lots of power in such brevity, and so well packaged and delivered! I loved the artwork and the colorful font that really pulled me into the message which somehow, I missed any circumstance dealing with a sexual warning in any way. I enjoyed this work and thank this author for a great read! HIS GRAYNESS
reply by the author on 14-Oct-2017
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Wow! certainly lots of power in such brevity, and so well packaged and delivered! I loved the artwork and the colorful font that really pulled me into the message which somehow, I missed any circumstance dealing with a sexual warning in any way. I enjoyed this work and thank this author for a great read! HIS GRAYNESS
Comment Written 03-Oct-2017
reply by the author on 14-Oct-2017
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Thank you for reading my work.
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My joy indeed! Keep the good works coming! Vance
Comment from robyn corum
Dear Mystery Writer,
I'm a bit confused. *smile* I didn't really get the relation of the neon sign to the images you're sharing -- but I DID absolutely love/adore the images you're describing. Lovely, lovely!
AND I also didn't get the reason for the 'sex' flag?? I almost skipped reading this work because of it, and I imagine others might, as well. (??)
Good luck in the contest!
reply by the author on 14-Oct-2017
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Dear Mystery Writer,
I'm a bit confused. *smile* I didn't really get the relation of the neon sign to the images you're sharing -- but I DID absolutely love/adore the images you're describing. Lovely, lovely!
AND I also didn't get the reason for the 'sex' flag?? I almost skipped reading this work because of it, and I imagine others might, as well. (??)
Good luck in the contest!
Comment Written 03-Oct-2017
reply by the author on 14-Oct-2017
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Thank you Robin for reading my work.
Comment from Mustang Patty
A wonderful entry in the Family poetry contest. You have expressed so much with an economy of words. I flashed on family dinners, and little hands that went with the days gone by.
Good luck in the contest,
~patty~
reply by the author on 14-Oct-2017
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A wonderful entry in the Family poetry contest. You have expressed so much with an economy of words. I flashed on family dinners, and little hands that went with the days gone by.
Good luck in the contest,
~patty~
Comment Written 03-Oct-2017
reply by the author on 14-Oct-2017
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Thank you for reading my work.
Comment from Dean Kuch
Very nicely done, Anonymous Poet.
You've captured, in very few carefully chosen words, no less, the very essence of a simple summer afternoon spent with good food, good friends, and family.
Not everything we do to have fun costs thousands of dollars. When the company we keep is priceless, money doesn't matter.
reply by the author on 16-Oct-2017
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Very nicely done, Anonymous Poet.
You've captured, in very few carefully chosen words, no less, the very essence of a simple summer afternoon spent with good food, good friends, and family.
Not everything we do to have fun costs thousands of dollars. When the company we keep is priceless, money doesn't matter.
Comment Written 03-Oct-2017
reply by the author on 16-Oct-2017
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Thank you for reading my work, Kuch
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Sure...
Comment from Ogden
Hmm. Are you absolutely certain this is the poem to which you intended to attach the warning about sexual content? I usually don't miss stuff like that. Nice poem, even without sex and a blessed neon billboard.
Don (aka Ogden)
reply by the author on 14-Oct-2017
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Hmm. Are you absolutely certain this is the poem to which you intended to attach the warning about sexual content? I usually don't miss stuff like that. Nice poem, even without sex and a blessed neon billboard.
Don (aka Ogden)
Comment Written 03-Oct-2017
reply by the author on 14-Oct-2017
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Thank you for reading and commenting in this work.
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You are very welcome.
