Comment from rtobaygo

Excellent

Good afternoon, Patty

Good continuation. Loved the opening, hook. The way you present each character's life and pov is spot on. The question, begs, now that they know some about the others, will they begin to make judgements as they did when they decided Nosey was a Bible Thumping, Born Again Christian. Enjoyed.

Take care and stay safe,

Ray

 Comment Written 02-Oct-2017

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reply by the author on 02-Oct-2017

Hi Ray;
I'm pretty sure it is simple human nature to make judgements. I hope to make the point abundantly clear that He is the only judge that matters.

Thank you for continuing to read along,

~patty~

Comment from Drew Delaney

Exceptional

I loved it, Patty. You did a great job with your characters. My only complaint I overuse of the word 'cool'. It's fascinating how each one thinks how it might be. Thinking about it is a good thing. Better now than too late.

Drew xx

 Comment Written 02-Oct-2017

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reply by the author on 02-Oct-2017

Hi Drew; thank you so much for the EXCEPTIONAL review on this chapter. I'm having so much fun writing this - I might just have to write through to the end this week - the story is flowing,

~patty~
I will see what I can do about the overuse of 'cool.'

Comment from Sandra du Plessis

Excellent

A very well-written chapter. No one else can answer for our wrong and right doings. God isxyhe judge of all. The only things we can do is to do what the Bible tells us to love God above all and our neighbor as ourselves.

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 Comment Written 02-Oct-2017

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reply by the author on 02-Oct-2017

Hi Sandra;
thank you so much for reading. I'm trying to emphasize that God is the only judge and point out that sin is sin - no matter how big or small.

Hope you will continue to read along,

~patty~

Comment from Teri7

Excellent

This is a very interesting write you have done. You used very good descriptive wording and very good imagery with your words and the way you talked about the ones waiting and what was going on. An enjoyable read! Blessings, Teri

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 Comment Written 02-Oct-2017

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reply by the author on 02-Oct-2017

Hi Teri;
thank you so much for reading and reviewing this latest chapter. I hope you will follow the rest of the story,

~patty~