Out of Wedlock
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Comment from Barb Hensongispsaca
This piece is wonderfully done as I have seen some with the repeating lines that make no sense and does not flow well. This one flows easily from one part to the next and the repeating lines mean something different in each stanza.
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reply by the author on 01-Oct-2017
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This piece is wonderfully done as I have seen some with the repeating lines that make no sense and does not flow well. This one flows easily from one part to the next and the repeating lines mean something different in each stanza.
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Comment Written 01-Oct-2017
reply by the author on 01-Oct-2017
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Many thanks for your review, Barb, and comments on the way the form way handled. Appreciated! Best wishes, Tony
