Comment from Mustang Patty

Excellent

Hi;
a nice parody of 'Part of Your World.' I was able to sing it to the tune, and I liked your turns of phrases. A nice way to end my reviewing for the day. Thank you for sharing,

~patty~

 Comment Written 05-Oct-2017

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reply by the author on 05-Oct-2017

Thanks for reading and reviewing. Glad you liked it and it matched the tune for you.

Joan

Comment from Kerry Foley Robinson

Excellent

this is really good, my friend, you should of entered it in the lyrics make the song contest:)) I lve the "Little Mermaid." lol ~Kerry

 Comment Written 05-Oct-2017

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reply by the author on 05-Oct-2017

Glad you liked it. It means a lot coming from a fan of the film.

Joan

reply by Kerry Foley Robinson on 06-Oct-2017

welcome:)

Comment from DR DIP

Excellent

Why to the think me low class ? is that line ok? Doesn't read right.

You know dragon I really like your words but sometimes Poetry doesn't convert to music and visa versa. I have written many poems thinking I could add a chorus and they would work musically but they have to be revised considerably.
Are you writing this as an alternative song? I must listen to the original to appreciate it more.

thanks for sharing

dip

 Comment Written 30-Sep-2017

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reply by the author on 01-Oct-2017

I made the changes. Glad you caught it. Other's didn't.

This is a rewording of the song Part of Your world from Little Mermaid. I didn't think of it working it as a song for
I am not musical.

Thanks for the review

Joan

Comment from Hopefully oppressed

Excellent

I feel like I wanted to keep up with the Jones's but I now realize it doesn't have the value I thought it did. I think my relief greatly out weighs my disappointment.

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 Comment Written 30-Sep-2017

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reply by the author on 30-Sep-2017

Thanks for reading and commenting. I appreciate all the stars.

dragonpoet

Comment from Conmanup

Excellent

Nice. I like how it flows and rhymes. It is neat. It has a nice enough flow to be a song. I also like how we have to guess what the girl is like. Nice work and keep writing.

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 Comment Written 30-Sep-2017

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reply by the author on 30-Sep-2017

Thanks for reading and noticing the musciality It is supposed to sound like the song Part of Your World from The Little Mermaid.

dp