subtle reflection
haiku39 total reviews
Comment from Unspoken94
You're writing! Way to go. A beautiful picture and
excellent work on the Haiku. An excellent piece as
usual. I rarely review haiku's but yours....Can't
avoid it. -Bill
reply by the author on 04-Oct-2017
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You're writing! Way to go. A beautiful picture and
excellent work on the Haiku. An excellent piece as
usual. I rarely review haiku's but yours....Can't
avoid it. -Bill
Comment Written 04-Oct-2017
reply by the author on 04-Oct-2017
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Thank you very much, Bill, you are very kind. I really appreciate the generous six stars and exceptional review. I am feeling better.
Gypsy hugs
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Your last sentence was a six for me! Please know that I am here for you any day and any hour. If you misplace my cell number then let me know. -Bill
Comment from sunnilicious
Great satori line. It is powerful and strong. Overall, nice presentation with artwork, fonts and colors. Good visual imagery created. Creative. Good alliteration with C and S words. Nice work.
reply by the author on 03-Oct-2017
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Great satori line. It is powerful and strong. Overall, nice presentation with artwork, fonts and colors. Good visual imagery created. Creative. Good alliteration with C and S words. Nice work.
Comment Written 03-Oct-2017
reply by the author on 03-Oct-2017
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thank you very much, my friend, I appreciate the excellent review and kind words
Comment from Mark Schardine
The water seems not to move, and the viewer takes a moment to stop everything, but of course, it shows another example of how the natural world never stops causing us to focus our attention on something we have never seen before.
reply by the author on 03-Oct-2017
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The water seems not to move, and the viewer takes a moment to stop everything, but of course, it shows another example of how the natural world never stops causing us to focus our attention on something we have never seen before.
Comment Written 03-Oct-2017
reply by the author on 03-Oct-2017
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thank you very much, my friend, I appreciate the excellent review and kind words
Comment from Mustang Patty
Hi Gypsy;
such a wonderful haiku about a time of reflection in the autumn outdoors. I love the picture you chose. The syllable count was spot on, and the meaning in the words was deeply moving,
~patty~
reply by the author on 02-Oct-2017
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Hi Gypsy;
such a wonderful haiku about a time of reflection in the autumn outdoors. I love the picture you chose. The syllable count was spot on, and the meaning in the words was deeply moving,
~patty~
Comment Written 02-Oct-2017
reply by the author on 02-Oct-2017
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thank you very much, I appreciate your excellent review and kind words
Comment from Walu Feral
G'day mate.
I hope you are feeling better.
This is a beauty. Both the picture and the colorful and vividly picturesque words.
You are by far the best at these on this site and I'm sorry that I don't have a six left to give you.
Great job.
Cheers Fez
reply by the author on 02-Oct-2017
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G'day mate.
I hope you are feeling better.
This is a beauty. Both the picture and the colorful and vividly picturesque words.
You are by far the best at these on this site and I'm sorry that I don't have a six left to give you.
Great job.
Cheers Fez
Comment Written 02-Oct-2017
reply by the author on 02-Oct-2017
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G'day mate, I am feeling better, thank you.
thank you very much, I appreciate your excellent review and kind words
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That's great to hear, mate.
Comment from Mrs Happy Poet
Hello my friend thus is well written again and very original I love the art you have chosen it works really well I enjoyed regards Jill
reply by the author on 02-Oct-2017
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Hello my friend thus is well written again and very original I love the art you have chosen it works really well I enjoyed regards Jill
Comment Written 01-Oct-2017
reply by the author on 02-Oct-2017
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thank you very much, I appreciate your excellent review and kind words
Comment from nancyjam
I enjoyed your lovely Haiku.
It presents a beautiful scene and love the
double meaning of "reflection" as the last line
uses it "stream of thought"
Nancy
reply by the author on 02-Oct-2017
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I enjoyed your lovely Haiku.
It presents a beautiful scene and love the
double meaning of "reflection" as the last line
uses it "stream of thought"
Nancy
Comment Written 30-Sep-2017
reply by the author on 02-Oct-2017
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thank you very much, I appreciate your excellent review and kind words
Comment from Lucian Carter
That's an interesting juxtaposition. Water and thoughts. Both flow, after all. Both can be colorful. Both can move fast or slow. Your poem invites repeat reading. It's a nice little gem of thought. Good show.
reply by the author on 02-Oct-2017
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That's an interesting juxtaposition. Water and thoughts. Both flow, after all. Both can be colorful. Both can move fast or slow. Your poem invites repeat reading. It's a nice little gem of thought. Good show.
Comment Written 30-Sep-2017
reply by the author on 02-Oct-2017
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thank you very much, I appreciate your excellent review and kind words
Comment from evesayshi
In my opinion, beautiful artistry, both in the poem and complementary image. While it is beautiful in structure, it doesn't appear to fully comply with the haiku form. The last line has only 3 syllables - adding 2 words, or one 2 syllable word will correct this - for example, " is bound," or " evokes"...
reply by the author on 02-Oct-2017
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In my opinion, beautiful artistry, both in the poem and complementary image. While it is beautiful in structure, it doesn't appear to fully comply with the haiku form. The last line has only 3 syllables - adding 2 words, or one 2 syllable word will correct this - for example, " is bound," or " evokes"...
Comment Written 30-Sep-2017
reply by the author on 02-Oct-2017
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Hello, Eve, Japanese and English syllables are different so the 5/7/5 doesn't always apply, it just has to be 17 syllables or less.
thank you very much, I appreciate your excellent review and kind words
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You are very welcome, and thank you so much for the information - I appreciate your courtesy...
Comment from Angela VA
'Tis the season for autumn poems. It is a beautiful time of year. My only suggestion is to find a picture that features a natural stream to work with your last line. The chosen picture looks more like a man-made body of water. It still fits, but if you can get a better picture, I would. Thanks for sharing your seasonal poem.
reply by the author on 30-Sep-2017
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'Tis the season for autumn poems. It is a beautiful time of year. My only suggestion is to find a picture that features a natural stream to work with your last line. The chosen picture looks more like a man-made body of water. It still fits, but if you can get a better picture, I would. Thanks for sharing your seasonal poem.
Comment Written 30-Sep-2017
reply by the author on 30-Sep-2017
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Thank you very much for the excellent review and feedback. I am very grateful.
Gypsy
